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Thank you for translating this work from Chinese. It is quite difficult to read something about football of above average quality, so I hope you will continue writing this book. I also hope that you will not be afraid to improvise with this translation and continue to adapt it.
A great story. all thanks to the author's translation. at this point, it won't even feel like translation, and taking the story into your own hands is much better. I am looking forward to the upcoming updates
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It’s a nice book overall. The translation is good and the extra annoying bits are cut down to tolerable level. The pacing and plot progression is well done. Forgot to leave a review earlier 💀
I have over 1,000 hours on Webnovel, and this is hands down the best novel I’ve read on here—no joke. Yes, it’s a Chinese translation, but the author puts a lot, and I mean A LOT, of effort into refining the story. They meticulously remove unnecessary filler, rewrite sections for better clarity, and even add whole new paragraphs to enhance the experience. On top of that, they actually do research to fix any mistakes the original author made, ensuring the story stays top-tier. Absolute fire. Keep it up, bro—I’m loving every chapter!
bro thanks for sacrificing and making me read the better version HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I came for the story stayed for the author notes at the end of each chapter 😂 Anyways I think it’s good and it’ll probably get better as it goes from translated to rewritten.
Great story. I really like the changes you are doing to the translation. Never thought i would enjoy so much a football novel. Keep up the good work
Great work so far. I've read the original, and I can say that the quality of your translation, as well as the adjustments you've made, have worked out really well. Looking at the MC, I appreciated the lack of Beckham glazing in comparison to the original. Let's be honest. Besides those important moments in Beckham's career, there have to be so many great and historical midfielders to choose from. I'm not gonna lie. I skipped a lot of the glazing. In response to one of your earlier chapter comments on the female lead, I would suggest something along the lines of hitting it off due to mutual interest from both and interactions over some time from things like messages and work together before leading into a relationship(seems the natural thing). TBH, anything you come up with would be better than the original nonexistent relationship timeline. The original was ridiculous as you didn't see her for what felt like 20 or 30 chapters between each interaction. Anyway, keep up the good work by far one of my favorite sports translations, and with the work you've put in, I would say that it's not far from #1.
thank you for the quick updates, I'm really enjoying the story so far and you're doing a great with the translation and making the novel your own.
About the writing quality, the author had worked hard to make this whole novel readable from a Chinese filled nonsense. He made it that most of us can't read the Beckham glazing that went for a ton of the chapters, which is amazing since some of the translated MTL in this website sucks. I want to add more but for those who are interested, just read it.
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yooo man i really like this novel most Chinese novels are too fanatical and that's disgusting because they do it excessively i really agree if you develop it into your own novel
I was recently reading this same story on another site, but reading it here brought another level of experience. Keep it up, because there are few good citizens who provide content for free. It's a good story and I particularly like the football approach. I hadn't given a grade yet and decided to give it a grade since some idiot decided to mess it up.
What I like the most is the change the author make compared to the original Also Wesley_Celular, fuck you, dude dropped a one star review just because he saw it was a chinese translated story, mf didn't even read a single fucking chapter. Hahaha hahaha 🤣😂
It's incredible what you've done, removing all the Chinese clichés and shaping it in your own style. For practitioners of the Dao of MTL football, this is a gem. A beautiful novel, simply stunning. Future readers, I guarantee you'll enjoy reading this wonderful story.
The quality of the writing is good and the pace of his progression as a player is perfect, neither too fast nor too slow. The protagonist is a midfielder, so his focus is more on setting up plays and controlling the field than on finishing. The only flaw in the story is the dialogues, they are robotic and repetitive, but the author has already realized this and is trying to improve. If the quality of the dialogues improves I will come back and give it 5 stars.
In my opinion, It's shit bro... I need more chapters you fucking nailed the translation holy shit. It's my first time seeing a good ass translation, anyway I'll let this good shit marinate.
Nice work making this story your own. It does not feel like a chinese translation. And the way you have been editing and making original chapters it will be wrong to just call this story a translation. The writing quality is pretty good but I would like to see some losses in big stage. right now it feels like a fairytale with only ups without any downs.
What is the name of the original novel?...............,..................................................................................................................
Thank you for translating this work from Chinese. It is quite difficult to read something about football of above average quality, so I hope you will continue writing this book. I also hope that you will not be afraid to improvise with this translation and continue to adapt it.
A great story. all thanks to the author's translation. at this point, it won't even feel like translation, and taking the story into your own hands is much better. I am looking forward to the upcoming updates
Pour red bull into your coffee powder. then add chunks of brown sugar, mayonnaise and honey. After this add in some spoiled milk along with a half eaten banana. Now enjoy your diarrhea
It’s a nice book overall. The translation is good and the extra annoying bits are cut down to tolerable level. The pacing and plot progression is well done. Forgot to leave a review earlier 💀
I have over 1,000 hours on Webnovel, and this is hands down the best novel I’ve read on here—no joke. Yes, it’s a Chinese translation, but the author puts a lot, and I mean A LOT, of effort into refining the story. They meticulously remove unnecessary filler, rewrite sections for better clarity, and even add whole new paragraphs to enhance the experience. On top of that, they actually do research to fix any mistakes the original author made, ensuring the story stays top-tier. Absolute fire. Keep it up, bro—I’m loving every chapter!
bro thanks for sacrificing and making me read the better version HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I came for the story stayed for the author notes at the end of each chapter 😂 Anyways I think it’s good and it’ll probably get better as it goes from translated to rewritten.
Great story. I really like the changes you are doing to the translation. Never thought i would enjoy so much a football novel. Keep up the good work
Great work so far. I've read the original, and I can say that the quality of your translation, as well as the adjustments you've made, have worked out really well. Looking at the MC, I appreciated the lack of Beckham glazing in comparison to the original. Let's be honest. Besides those important moments in Beckham's career, there have to be so many great and historical midfielders to choose from. I'm not gonna lie. I skipped a lot of the glazing. In response to one of your earlier chapter comments on the female lead, I would suggest something along the lines of hitting it off due to mutual interest from both and interactions over some time from things like messages and work together before leading into a relationship(seems the natural thing). TBH, anything you come up with would be better than the original nonexistent relationship timeline. The original was ridiculous as you didn't see her for what felt like 20 or 30 chapters between each interaction. Anyway, keep up the good work by far one of my favorite sports translations, and with the work you've put in, I would say that it's not far from #1.
thank you for the quick updates, I'm really enjoying the story so far and you're doing a great with the translation and making the novel your own.
About the writing quality, the author had worked hard to make this whole novel readable from a Chinese filled nonsense. He made it that most of us can't read the Beckham glazing that went for a ton of the chapters, which is amazing since some of the translated MTL in this website sucks. I want to add more but for those who are interested, just read it.
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………………………………………………………………………………………………………..nice job……………………………………………………………………………………………………….cbcnxbxnnxnxnxncncncncncncncncncncncnxncncncncncncncnxncncncn ncncncnxnxnxnxnxncncncncncncncncncncncnxncncncncncncncnxncncnxn
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yooo man i really like this novel most Chinese novels are too fanatical and that's disgusting because they do it excessively i really agree if you develop it into your own novel
I was recently reading this same story on another site, but reading it here brought another level of experience. Keep it up, because there are few good citizens who provide content for free. It's a good story and I particularly like the football approach. I hadn't given a grade yet and decided to give it a grade since some idiot decided to mess it up.
What I like the most is the change the author make compared to the original Also Wesley_Celular, fuck you, dude dropped a one star review just because he saw it was a chinese translated story, mf didn't even read a single fucking chapter. Hahaha hahaha 🤣😂
It's incredible what you've done, removing all the Chinese clichés and shaping it in your own style. For practitioners of the Dao of MTL football, this is a gem. A beautiful novel, simply stunning. Future readers, I guarantee you'll enjoy reading this wonderful story.
The quality of the writing is good and the pace of his progression as a player is perfect, neither too fast nor too slow. The protagonist is a midfielder, so his focus is more on setting up plays and controlling the field than on finishing. The only flaw in the story is the dialogues, they are robotic and repetitive, but the author has already realized this and is trying to improve. If the quality of the dialogues improves I will come back and give it 5 stars.
In my opinion, It's shit bro... I need more chapters you fucking nailed the translation holy shit. It's my first time seeing a good ass translation, anyway I'll let this good shit marinate.
Nice work making this story your own. It does not feel like a chinese translation. And the way you have been editing and making original chapters it will be wrong to just call this story a translation. The writing quality is pretty good but I would like to see some losses in big stage. right now it feels like a fairytale with only ups without any downs.
mane fuck Wesley_Celular.. me an my homies hate Wesley_Celular