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23.52% Naruto: The Blind Seer of Nara / Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Awakening Shadows

บท 4: Chapter 4: Awakening Shadows

Hikaru's Perspective

It had been days since his father had first shown him how to channel chakra, and Hikaru still felt the thrill of that discovery. But there was something else—a strange, almost tugging sensation coming from his own shadow.

Curious, he knelt on the floor, focusing intently. He let his chakra flow slowly into the dark patch stretching out beneath him, watching with wide, unseeing eyes as he willed it to respond. To his surprise, his shadow seemed to shift, moving as if it had a mind of its own.

Then, his shadow sense changed. Before, he could only sense the shadows around him within a few meters if he stood still, but now, as he fed his chakra into his shadow, it was as if the area around him expanded—ten meters, twenty, until he could reach nearly a hundred meters around himself. The shapes of things became clear in his mind, not with perfect details, but enough to form a clear image in his mind. He felt the shadows of trees, rocks, and even people moving nearby. He could move and keep this awareness, and for the first time in his life, he felt the urge to run without holding back.

Filled with excitement, Hikaru took off, feeling the thrill of freedom. For once, he moved with confidence, sensing every shadowed shape around him, running without hesitation. He raced forward until his chakra drained, his steps faltering until he finally stumbled, exhausted. But a grin stayed on his face. This was real—it meant he might truly have a chance to become a shinobi.

Later, he eagerly shared the discovery with his family. His father and Shikaku were thrilled, and their encouragement pushed him to keep experimenting with his newfound abilities. There was more to discover, he was sure, and he couldn't wait.

"Show me, Hikaru," Takeshi said, his voice steady yet carrying a hint of pride.

Hikaru nodded and knelt, focusing again on his shadow. This time, the process felt easier. He let his chakra flow naturally, guiding it into the dark patch beneath him, sensing the expansion as it began to spread outward. As his connection deepened, he felt a tug, a strange sensation as though he could push his shadow further, even detach it slightly from his body. But it was hard to control. Every time he tried, the shadow twitched and shivered, almost like it had a will of its own.

Takeshi's Perspective

Takeshi watched his son closely, observing every detail of the unusual display. In all his years as a shinobi, he'd seen countless jutsu, each one requiring hand signs or intricate control. But this was different—Hikaru's shadow moved on its own, shifting and flickering beneath his feet, as if it were alive.

For a moment, he worried that it might be a foreign influence, an unknown chakra technique manipulating his son. But after careful testing, he found no signs of an outside force or strange chakra. Hikaru's own energy was fueling the movement, and it wasn't harming him in any way.

Hikaru continued to experiment, pushing himself to run circles around Takeshi, his grin growing with each step. Takeshi couldn't help the pride swelling in his chest, yet he remained focused, studying the ability's limits.

After Hikaru had spent what felt like all his chakra, he finally stopped, dropping to the ground with a satisfied smile. Takeshi helped him sit up, allowing him a moment to catch his breath. As Takeshi reflected on what he had observed, he began to form a primary understanding of his son's new ability.

Takeshi's Observations

Hikaru called his newfound ability "shadow sense," and the name seemed fitting. When he channeled chakra into his shadow, its sensing range expanded far beyond anything Takeshi had seen. Within a hundred meters, Hikaru could sense everything with astonishing precision—even accurately tracking a fast-moving object, like a kunai, thrown from a distance. If an attack came within that range, he could easily detect its speed, trajectory, and power.

But as Hikaru pushed the range past a hundred meters, Takeshi noted limitations. At one hundred fifty meters, the accuracy declined, and Hikaru could barely sense an approaching kunai in time to evade. The wider he stretched his sense, the blurrier the details became, and the chakra cost spiked significantly.

Most interestingly, Hikaru didn't "see" in a traditional sense. He sensed the shadows of everything around him, mapping out the world through an intricate web of darkness. But it lacked certain critical details: Hikaru couldn't detect chakra signatures from these shadows. Ninjutsu that created no shadow or relied on chakra concealment techniques could potentially bypass his awareness altogether. It was a significant weakness but one that Takeshi felt confident his son could overcome.

Even so, seeing Hikaru move with such freedom and accuracy was enough to make Takeshi's heart swell with hope. His son was a shinobi in the making.

"Shadow sense…" Takeshi echoed, patting Hikaru's shoulder. "It's a remarkable ability, Hikaru. I'm sure you'll master it in no time."

Hikaru smiled tiredly, determination glimmering in his sightless gaze. He may not have complete vision, but in the shadows, he had found his own way of seeing the world—and that was more than enough.

Word of Hikaru's abilities spread through the Nara clan, and soon Takeshi arranged for him and his younger brother Shikaku to meet two other children from the allied clans. These were the children of Takeshi's old comrades—the Akimichi and Yamanaka clans, families with strong ties to the Nara clan. Hikaru was eager to meet new friends, and he sensed the excitement and nervousness in his younger brother, Shikaku, as they prepared for the encounter.

As they arrived, Hikaru heard footsteps approaching—two new sets, accompanied by familiar ones. His shadow sense filled in the shapes: a tall, plump kid and another who was thinner, with a springy step.

"Hikaru, Shikaku, meet Chōza Akimichi and Inoichi Yamanaka," Takeshi introduced them. "And remember, play nice."

Inoichi, with his long, spiky ponytail and slightly clumsy gait, grinned, but he looked a bit unsure about Hikaru's blindness. Chōza, a larger, rounder kid with a wild hairpiece, seemed fascinated and leaned in to inspect Hikaru.

"Whoa, so you're, like, totally blind?" Chōza blurted out, not realizing how direct his question sounded.

Hikaru pretended to look around aimlessly, a small, sly smile forming on his lips. "Oh, yes, I can't see a thing! I have no idea what's going on around me."

Shikaku smirked, immediately catching on to his brother's trick. Meanwhile, Inoichi's face lit up as he tried to get Hikaru's attention.

Inoichi tried to sneak up to him, tiptoeing dramatically behind him. Hikaru pretended to look confused, letting Inoichi creep closer until he was almost right behind him. Then, just as Inoichi raised his arms to try and give him a little startle—

"Inoichi," Hikaru said casually, "you should be careful; there's a rock right behind you."

Inoichi froze mid-step, looking down just in time to see his foot hovering over a rock. "What?! But I was so quiet!"

Hikaru turned his head toward him with a grin. "Oh, it's amazing what you notice when you can't see anything. Like, you're also sticking out your tongue when you concentrate."

Inoichi slapped a hand over his mouth, looking mortified, and Chōza burst out laughing. "He got you! That's so funny!"

Chōza's hearty laugh only encouraged Hikaru. "So," Hikaru continued, "do you two think I can't hear or feel things too? Because I can feel someone munching on something big and crunchy... Chōza?"

Chōza froze, hiding a half-eaten bag of chips behind his back. "How did you know?!" He gaped, eyes wide. "I thought you were—uh, you know…"

"Blind? Oh, yeah, totally. But I've got other ways to 'see.'" Hikaru emphasized the last word with a mysterious tone, leaving Chōza and Inoichi glancing at each other in wonder.

The four kids quickly fell into a playful rhythm, with Inoichi constantly trying to sneak up on Hikaru, only for Hikaru to call out his every move.

As they sat down together on a patch of grass, Shikaku leaned over and whispered, "How are you going to explain this to them, Hikaru?"

Hikaru grinned. "Who said I need to explain it? Let them guess."

Inoichi was the first to ask outright, frowning as he scratched his head. "Hikaru, are you secretly... not blind?"

"Oh, I am," Hikaru replied smoothly. "I just have a sense of humor—and a great memory. It's a gift."

Chōza shrugged, stuffing another chip into his mouth. "I think it's cool. You're like a super ninja! Or maybe a ninja with super hearing!"

Hikaru laughed. "Maybe one day. For now, I'm just a kid who happens to know when you're trying to eat snacks behind my back, Chōza."

Inoichi looked thoughtful, then clapped his hands together. "We should come up with a team name for ourselves! Like, 'The Awesome Ninja Squad!'"

"Or maybe 'The Tricksters,' since Hikaru's so good at fooling us," Shikaku suggested, giving his brother a playful nudge.

Hikaru smiled, feeling the warmth of friendship bloom within him. For the first time, he felt that he truly belonged—these kids didn't see his blindness as a weakness. In fact, it was turning out to be his secret weapon.

As they laughed and planned, Hikaru knew that these new friends were ones he'd cherish, mischief and all.


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