"Reborn in the Movie Universe: Continuation"

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Karma_Arc

same what can i say ,but bro can u continue the adventure of shivaay here because that's the one i liked the best .. Not gonna lie that one is best ,no complain this is also good but i liked that one Love both your works ,Keep it up [img=recommend]

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ItzarAce

I really like the story, but the harem feels like it's becoming too large.

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kiritonaruto

bro you are focusing way too much on romance and relationship development part it has to be there but if you put to much focus on it then the chapter just becomes lag without content just make sure you have that balance and focus on main story or other movie story that is happening in your time line also great in giving your own twist and interlinking all movie universes also one last suggestion keep the female MC number to limit if you just keep increasing the number of lovers to MC then that just drops the quality of work also great in adding the hollywood actress or characters also as you are considering mystical elements you can use movies like akhanda, damarukam etc also for his lovers you can also consider actress like eva green, Katheryn Winnick etc if required you can increase or decrease the character age, all the best good luck 👍 🤞👍😍👌

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charn

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