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I highly recommend this novel and I finished 121 chapters in a session, if it indicates that this story is wonderful، I hope from the writer to speed up the update
writing quality:It's decent it was very food at the beginning but slowly everything just started becoming disorderly it just turned into a big mess.Multiple things were happening and no order was involved. story development:Great I suppose he did have a good goal at the start and he still does.The story is just developing immensely fast at an unordered pace. Character design:He's a transmigrator and he knows the worlds that's about all there is.A little arrogant but not enough to warrant any problem. updating stability:don't care world development:It seems like the only world development is just revolved around his little island.Hes affected the plot on multiple occasions and nothing is happening.Its almost life if everything that's happening is just in a bubble away from the rest of the world. Complaints:The Mc is clearly siding with a certain side more than the other.I don't really like this because it destroys the whole idea of a business.Not to mention the main character slowly turns into a clown as the chapters go on.Secondly I really don't like the goofy nonsense.It kind of hurt when he said he didn't know what his clowns were doing and that they had a mind of their own.To be honest I thought clones were supposed to send you back memories after the clone dissolves.To be real this whole story is just very very very messy.Its like trying to tell multiple stories at the same time and they're all happening in the same place.I just can't really get into it.Over all 2.2 stars.Great start, fell off later on. P.S:It's not a business if you let personal problems affect your decision making.You must treat both sides fairly. keep that in mind when you make any business related things again.Ima just rant a little more as yo why u thought having them be basically bodyguards of the world.Thats lame.Like I'm pretty sure Tobirama made the police station for the Uchiha as an oppressive tactic.Just saying this could have been something better, Being the world's bodyguards is pretty limiting.
What a steady writer, I love this work of your translation, I am waiting for it in the future, I hope this novel does not stop halfway like other novels, the spirit of the author!
Description has given a big start, too big for my opinion. And now I am reading that slow shit and it's too annoying..............................
relative to the synopsis, the story progression should start picking up speed soon unless the author plans to make this novel really long (im all for it). a short solo or small team dive to another anime for training during lull on the plot would be constructive. if these does not happen it would be predictable that after one piece arc, uchiha would take kuja along to another world to prevent them from being wiped out bec of the aftermath of the rampaging uchiha
loved it... try adding dragon ball and bleach in the mix too... but please don't drag them long....
Comparing power levels in the novel is stupid.1. Everyone at Yonko level is at least six-way level. 2. Most Kage cannot defeat someone at Boa Hancock level, One Piece World people have incredible life force and incredible spiritual power. If we look at chakra, for example, the average One Piece civilian has Chunin level chakra, while the average Shinobi world civilian has almost no chakra below Genin level. While Yonko level people are at minimum island destruction level, in Naruto world island destruction level is approximately at Madara, Hashirama, Hogoromo level. An average ordinary Marine soldier can kill ninjas like Hiruzen who do not have special defensive skills with ordinary firearms, ninjas are literally glass cannon, Conqueror Hanin can kill Hashirama with a physical attack from a distance :). Unless they have a conceptual ability like Kamui, no one in Naruto world has a chance to defeat a Yonko, Admiral level person. The number of people who will not be damaged by the tailed beast bomb is only 100 for today in One Piece, throughout the entire history of Naruto world Less than 10. Genjutsu interferes with the opponent's chakra with your own chakra, you can't do genjutsu to someone who doesn't have chakra :) The peak of the taijutsu level in the Naruto world is weaker than the weakest vice admiral, migt guy 8 doors were kicked by hancock :). Ninjutsu pattern, the strongest ninjutsu level is weaker than the weakest user of logia. No comparison, if the Naruto world is lvl 1, one piece is lvl 3. Itachi and shisui are weaker than an ordinary kuja pirate. Genjutsu is useless, tajiutsu is clearly weaker than the opponent, the only way to fight is ninjutsu, Kuja pirates can use weapons and observation haki, ninjutsu cannot harm them. Itachi and shisui are at the average new world pirate level unless they use susanoo lol. Stronger than the current Hancock MC. Amazon lily can easily destroy the entire uchiha clan without anyone dying :)
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I liked it. The MC is reborn into the Uchiha clan and has the ability to travel between worlds. He becomes strong and becomes the hero of the third shinobi war. However, Danzo and the Third Hokage plan to overthrow the Uchiha clan because of the power they possess. On the day of the massacre, the MC transports the entire clan to the world of One Piece and creates an Uchiha security company, making the Uchiha clan known and making the clan powerful by teaching various techniques.
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Pretty good fanfic, i hope to see more emotions i characters and drama and i hope it doesn’t turn into the type of fanfic where harems are normal and girls like sharing, drama is way coooler and has a lot more content man so think about it author
I’m not sure if it’s deliberate or if it’s a translation but this is basically just “I take uchiha on a big voyage” it just seems that there’s ever so slight differences
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I reached the text of the published chapters, but I found a comment by the author saying that the main character will not remain the main character. It is useful, author, to tell me what you mean, because I do not like to read novels in which there is more than one main character, or the main character dies and there is a replacement.
keep it up.............................. Hope to see Sasuke Luffy and Naruto trio
Ok even though I had some problems at first but this novel looks promising and the author has deleted all Chinese garbage and the bad plots instead he began writing half of it and from Patreon it seems he began taking the whole thing
Keep up the good work, I had just come from Patreon and seeing how amazing you are when you began writing the novel yourself
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Is this a Harem?............................ .................................................... ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
update this now lol ez 5stars[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I highly recommend this novel and I finished 121 chapters in a session, if it indicates that this story is wonderful، I hope from the writer to speed up the update
writing quality:It's decent it was very food at the beginning but slowly everything just started becoming disorderly it just turned into a big mess.Multiple things were happening and no order was involved. story development:Great I suppose he did have a good goal at the start and he still does.The story is just developing immensely fast at an unordered pace. Character design:He's a transmigrator and he knows the worlds that's about all there is.A little arrogant but not enough to warrant any problem. updating stability:don't care world development:It seems like the only world development is just revolved around his little island.Hes affected the plot on multiple occasions and nothing is happening.Its almost life if everything that's happening is just in a bubble away from the rest of the world. Complaints:The Mc is clearly siding with a certain side more than the other.I don't really like this because it destroys the whole idea of a business.Not to mention the main character slowly turns into a clown as the chapters go on.Secondly I really don't like the goofy nonsense.It kind of hurt when he said he didn't know what his clowns were doing and that they had a mind of their own.To be honest I thought clones were supposed to send you back memories after the clone dissolves.To be real this whole story is just very very very messy.Its like trying to tell multiple stories at the same time and they're all happening in the same place.I just can't really get into it.Over all 2.2 stars.Great start, fell off later on. P.S:It's not a business if you let personal problems affect your decision making.You must treat both sides fairly. keep that in mind when you make any business related things again.Ima just rant a little more as yo why u thought having them be basically bodyguards of the world.Thats lame.Like I'm pretty sure Tobirama made the police station for the Uchiha as an oppressive tactic.Just saying this could have been something better, Being the world's bodyguards is pretty limiting.
What a steady writer, I love this work of your translation, I am waiting for it in the future, I hope this novel does not stop halfway like other novels, the spirit of the author!
Description has given a big start, too big for my opinion. And now I am reading that slow shit and it's too annoying..............................
relative to the synopsis, the story progression should start picking up speed soon unless the author plans to make this novel really long (im all for it). a short solo or small team dive to another anime for training during lull on the plot would be constructive. if these does not happen it would be predictable that after one piece arc, uchiha would take kuja along to another world to prevent them from being wiped out bec of the aftermath of the rampaging uchiha
loved it... try adding dragon ball and bleach in the mix too... but please don't drag them long....
Comparing power levels in the novel is stupid.1. Everyone at Yonko level is at least six-way level. 2. Most Kage cannot defeat someone at Boa Hancock level, One Piece World people have incredible life force and incredible spiritual power. If we look at chakra, for example, the average One Piece civilian has Chunin level chakra, while the average Shinobi world civilian has almost no chakra below Genin level. While Yonko level people are at minimum island destruction level, in Naruto world island destruction level is approximately at Madara, Hashirama, Hogoromo level. An average ordinary Marine soldier can kill ninjas like Hiruzen who do not have special defensive skills with ordinary firearms, ninjas are literally glass cannon, Conqueror Hanin can kill Hashirama with a physical attack from a distance :). Unless they have a conceptual ability like Kamui, no one in Naruto world has a chance to defeat a Yonko, Admiral level person. The number of people who will not be damaged by the tailed beast bomb is only 100 for today in One Piece, throughout the entire history of Naruto world Less than 10. Genjutsu interferes with the opponent's chakra with your own chakra, you can't do genjutsu to someone who doesn't have chakra :) The peak of the taijutsu level in the Naruto world is weaker than the weakest vice admiral, migt guy 8 doors were kicked by hancock :). Ninjutsu pattern, the strongest ninjutsu level is weaker than the weakest user of logia. No comparison, if the Naruto world is lvl 1, one piece is lvl 3. Itachi and shisui are weaker than an ordinary kuja pirate. Genjutsu is useless, tajiutsu is clearly weaker than the opponent, the only way to fight is ninjutsu, Kuja pirates can use weapons and observation haki, ninjutsu cannot harm them. Itachi and shisui are at the average new world pirate level unless they use susanoo lol. Stronger than the current Hancock MC. Amazon lily can easily destroy the entire uchiha clan without anyone dying :)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I liked it. The MC is reborn into the Uchiha clan and has the ability to travel between worlds. He becomes strong and becomes the hero of the third shinobi war. However, Danzo and the Third Hokage plan to overthrow the Uchiha clan because of the power they possess. On the day of the massacre, the MC transports the entire clan to the world of One Piece and creates an Uchiha security company, making the Uchiha clan known and making the clan powerful by teaching various techniques.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Pretty good fanfic, i hope to see more emotions i characters and drama and i hope it doesn’t turn into the type of fanfic where harems are normal and girls like sharing, drama is way coooler and has a lot more content man so think about it author
I’m not sure if it’s deliberate or if it’s a translation but this is basically just “I take uchiha on a big voyage” it just seems that there’s ever so slight differences
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I reached the text of the published chapters, but I found a comment by the author saying that the main character will not remain the main character. It is useful, author, to tell me what you mean, because I do not like to read novels in which there is more than one main character, or the main character dies and there is a replacement.
keep it up.............................. Hope to see Sasuke Luffy and Naruto trio
Ok even though I had some problems at first but this novel looks promising and the author has deleted all Chinese garbage and the bad plots instead he began writing half of it and from Patreon it seems he began taking the whole thing
Keep up the good work, I had just come from Patreon and seeing how amazing you are when you began writing the novel yourself
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Is this a Harem?............................ .................................................... ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
update this now lol ez 5stars[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]