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It seems good in every aspects but could be more better than this.. 👍 Keep the hard work..
the novel is pretty good and author doesa really good job in character design
It is really entertaining, I really like the plot and development of the characters, I recommend it if you want to have an entertaining read, I hope you give this work a chance, you won't regret it!!
Ever watched a movie where instead of showing how certain crucial events unfolded they just tell you so you’re unable to feel the sense of endangerment the characters are experiencing? Well this is the readers version of that experience you will gain if you read this story. The writer’s explanation and descriptions of certain plot lines are so vague. She just flat out tell you. Hence you don’t care about the situation the characters find themselves in and eventually you gets bored cause you’re not invested. So many problems with this story I can’t write it all. All I can say is that it’s not the worst.
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"Very Predictable and Dull" disappoints with its clichéd plot and unlikable characters. The predictable twists and forced shock value leave little suspense, making it a missed opportunity.
Love the book, it has a lot of potential. Need more chapters, keep the good word author.
love the book, the story development is awesome and the book itself has quality
It seems good in every aspects but could be more better than this.. 👍 Keep the hard work..
the novel is pretty good and author doesa really good job in character design
It is really entertaining, I really like the plot and development of the characters, I recommend it if you want to have an entertaining read, I hope you give this work a chance, you won't regret it!!
Ever watched a movie where instead of showing how certain crucial events unfolded they just tell you so you’re unable to feel the sense of endangerment the characters are experiencing? Well this is the readers version of that experience you will gain if you read this story. The writer’s explanation and descriptions of certain plot lines are so vague. She just flat out tell you. Hence you don’t care about the situation the characters find themselves in and eventually you gets bored cause you’re not invested. So many problems with this story I can’t write it all. All I can say is that it’s not the worst.
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"Very Predictable and Dull" disappoints with its clichéd plot and unlikable characters. The predictable twists and forced shock value leave little suspense, making it a missed opportunity.
Love the book, it has a lot of potential. Need more chapters, keep the good word author.
love the book, the story development is awesome and the book itself has quality
just came for the free fp given for review