บท 11: Question [Not a Chapter]
Since I have written 10 chaps, which I had honestly doubted I would, I want to ask a few things as you are the few readers I have here.
What do you think about the fanfic so far? Is it good? is it bad? any recommendation for improving it?
Another question- How is the tone of the fanfic seemed to you guys? I'm thinking about whether to tone down the smut part or not. As you have read, there are quite a few lemon chapters in them without anything fully happening.
Another question, which bothers me quite a bit is this- Do you guys think the pace of the novel is too slow or just right?
And you can leave some suggestion here
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