บท 29: ch-29
Chapter 29: The Secrets of RAW's Rampage
Suraj's day had been long but rewarding. After a productive meeting with the production team and handling the distribution deals, he finally found himself at home, cooking a simple dinner for Aryan. The little boy sat at the kitchen table, his small face scrunched in concentration over his homework. Occasionally, he looked up, grinning when Suraj made a funny face or pretended to mess up the cooking.
"Are you making the rotis round, Bhaiya?" Aryan teased, watching Suraj struggle to perfect the shape.
Suraj chuckled. "Hey, round or square, they'll taste the same! Just focus on your homework, little man."
After dinner, they watched some TV and joked around, until Aryan started yawning. Suraj tucked him in, smiling at the peace on his brother's face as he drifted off to sleep. It filled him with a warm satisfaction—knowing he was here to guide Aryan through life, a feeling he hadn't experienced in his past life.
Once Aryan was sound asleep, Suraj lay back in his bed, letting the weight of the day melt away. As he closed his eyes, he felt that familiar pull toward a strange, hazy place—a place he was beginning to recognize as the "theater" that appeared in his dreams. Every time he visited, it felt surreal, like stepping into a portal where reality and imagination blended together.
Tonight, Suraj decided he would see the next chapter of Bloody Commando's story. Settling into his seat, he looked at the massive screen as it came alive, displaying the title in bold letters:
RAW's Rampage
The screen provided a quick description:
Story: RAW's Rampage
Genre: Action, Thriller, Drama
Grade: C+ to D+ (depends on execution)
Link: Bloody Commando
The movie opened with a dramatic scene, depicting Bharat in its early years of independence. The country had finally shaken off the yoke of colonialism and abolished its monarchy. A new government had been established, but challenges loomed on the horizon. International intelligence was hard to come by, as most nations were cautious about sharing information with a new, untested government.
Suraj leaned forward as the scene shifted to the President's residence. The President and his security advisor sat in intense discussion about the need for an agency that could gather intelligence from outside Bharat's borders. They decided to create an elite organization called RAW (Research and Analysis Wing) to monitor threats, collect intel, and protect Bharat from external dangers.
"Wow," Suraj muttered, impressed by the gritty setup. It had the potential to become an iconic story if executed well.
The focus then shifted to the movie's hero, a young man named Ravan, who had grown up as an orphan after losing his parents to a terrorist attack. They had been protesting for Akhand Bharat, resisting the forces that wanted to divide the country. Haunted by the loss of his parents, Ravan had only one ambition: to protect others from the threats that took his family from him.
The movie showed Ravan applying to join the army at age 20 in 1980, but to his surprise, he was selected for RAW instead, though he hadn't even applied. The agency had taken note of his skills, and in typical RAW fashion, recruited him through unconventional methods to maintain secrecy.
Suraj nodded to himself. "This feels authentic," he thought, recalling his knowledge of intelligence agencies. They were known to recruit in unusual ways, often from outside the usual circles, to preserve anonymity.
The training sequences for Ravan were intense. He learned wire-tapping, covert communication, and hand-to-hand combat. He even went through psychological conditioning to resist interrogation. Each scene portrayed a gritty realism that set RAW's Rampage apart from other spy thrillers Suraj had seen in his previous life.
Ravan's alias in the field was Shadow, a nod to his preference for working from the shadows. His first major mission came in 1984, when he was sent to Russia, a country undergoing intense political change. His mission was to gather intelligence on rumored nuclear tests—a piece of information that could shift the balance of power if Bharat knew about it.
The tension rose as Ravan successfully transmitted the intel back to Bharat, only to receive an urgent "Red Code" message in return. The message was brief, but he knew what it meant: a mole had infiltrated RAW, leaking sensitive information, and the agency had shut down all communications to contain the damage. With the agency severing ties and destroying any trace of him, Ravan was stranded in Russia.
Suraj was captivated, feeling the depth of Ravan's despair as the character realized he would have to survive on his own. Struggling to evade Russian authorities, he was forced to take on an alias and live a rough life in the shadows. Over the next six years, Ravan endured a harsh existence, learning the ways of the Russian underground and forming alliances with unsavory characters to survive. He grew hardened, transforming into a resourceful man who could adapt to any situation, no matter how bleak.
"Damn," Suraj thought. "The story took a dark, unexpected turn. This would resonate with audiences if they managed to capture that struggle."
Finally, in 1990, Ravan managed to return to Bharat, only to find a nation torn by crime and corruption. Fueled by a desire to root out the rot within the system, he hunted down the mole who had betrayed him. But the mole's death only revealed a deeper network of corrupt officers that he vowed to eliminate.
Using the skills and contacts he had gained in Russia, Ravan formed a secret group called the Shadow Vipers, a network that spread underground information, exposing those who were a threat to Bharat's stability. His goal was to dismantle corruption at all levels of society, one enemy at a time.
The screen fast-forwarded to 2004, with Ravan, now a weathered 38-year-old veteran, boarding a train in Bharat. He was on another mission, following a lead, when he spotted a familiar face—Arjun, the protagonist of Bloody Commando, sitting across from him with a baby on his lap.
Suraj's jaw dropped. "No way! They've connected the two stories," he whispered, stunned by the unexpected crossover.
In the scene, Ravan sat down across from Arjun, both men immediately wary of each other. Ravan spoke first, his voice low and intense.
"Do you know what you're getting yourself into?" he asked, his gaze shifting briefly to the baby in Arjun's arms.
Arjun's body tensed, instinctively moving to protect the child. But Ravan raised a hand, offering a calm reassurance. "Don't worry, I won't interfere with your… business. But do you even realize who's after that child?"
The scene cut away from the two men on the train, shifting to a dark, shadowy church. A man dressed in a pristine white suit knelt before an altar, his hands folded in prayer. Across each finger of his hands, tattooed letters spelled out a chilling word: D-E-A-T-H.
Behind him, a group of men in black suits approached, one of them leaning in close to whisper something into his ear. The man's eyes filled with rage, though his body remained composed. He finished his prayer, the rage simmering in his piercing gaze, before he whispered, "Amen," with a voice as cold as ice.
Suraj sat in his seat, mouth agape, as the screen faded to black.leaving him speechless. The twists and connections between RAW's Rampage and Bloody Commando were brilliantly woven, with layers of complexity and intrigue.
As Suraj left the theater of his dreams, he felt a thrill running through him. "This story," he thought, "if told right, could become the backbone of a legendary franchise."
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