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เขียนรีวิวOverall good story with the only drawback I find annoying is that chapters are too shorts (but that may be just my opinion :) ). Anyway, I like the protagonist concept and can't wait to see how you develop the story.
Overall good story with the only drawback I find annoying is that chapters are too shorts (but that may be just my opinion :) ). Anyway, I like the protagonist concept and can't wait to see how you develop the story.
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