6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
This story is an interesting enough premise to take a look and so far the plot has me interested enough to stay hooked for the time being, I will say the update speed it a tad slow and could use more chapters. Some of the ideas incorporated into the story kind of hurt the plot flow and make it seem a bit convoluted him being so power just makes me assume the power system of Pokemon might be broken shortly and ruin the experience but I am willing to give it a try.
5/5/5/4/5 Best Pokemon fic I've read bar none because it passes the insanely low bar of having an actual story, something that others manage to fail at. So far the premise in the synopsis hasn't had much of an effect on the plot, instead we follow our champion protagonist as he discovers a concerning mystery that developed right under everyone's noses--a mystery that has me on the edge of my seat like no fanfic has managed to do to me before. First time in a while that I've got so immersed that the "New Chapter Coming Soon" message actually caught me by surprise, as well as filled me with so much grief. MC is pretty bog standard personality wise, though I love his confidence, and having the perspective of someone already at the top of the Pokemon world is pretty refreshing to experience as a reader. Translation quality is fantastic, misses no beats whatsoever, and chapters come out at fast, consistent rates, so A+ job there. Can't wait for more.
Bro HAVE TYPLOSYON HAHAHA THAT AGED LIKE WINE FOR MEMES AND MILK FOR NORMIES HAHAHA ............. but looks promessing
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40 ch but still the same plot, and it continues , one thing leads to other just wasting time . He is so strong but can't even figure out a theft, just a waste of time reading it
This story is an interesting enough premise to take a look and so far the plot has me interested enough to stay hooked for the time being, I will say the update speed it a tad slow and could use more chapters. Some of the ideas incorporated into the story kind of hurt the plot flow and make it seem a bit convoluted him being so power just makes me assume the power system of Pokemon might be broken shortly and ruin the experience but I am willing to give it a try.
5/5/5/4/5 Best Pokemon fic I've read bar none because it passes the insanely low bar of having an actual story, something that others manage to fail at. So far the premise in the synopsis hasn't had much of an effect on the plot, instead we follow our champion protagonist as he discovers a concerning mystery that developed right under everyone's noses--a mystery that has me on the edge of my seat like no fanfic has managed to do to me before. First time in a while that I've got so immersed that the "New Chapter Coming Soon" message actually caught me by surprise, as well as filled me with so much grief. MC is pretty bog standard personality wise, though I love his confidence, and having the perspective of someone already at the top of the Pokemon world is pretty refreshing to experience as a reader. Translation quality is fantastic, misses no beats whatsoever, and chapters come out at fast, consistent rates, so A+ job there. Can't wait for more.
Bro HAVE TYPLOSYON HAHAHA THAT AGED LIKE WINE FOR MEMES AND MILK FOR NORMIES HAHAHA ............. but looks promessing
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ great translation[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
40 ch but still the same plot, and it continues , one thing leads to other just wasting time . He is so strong but can't even figure out a theft, just a waste of time reading it