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Wow! A synopsis that makes me want to not read it because it already summarized the wholes story. To whom it may concern A synopsis is an introduction or a sneak peek of a story not a summarization of the important details of the story that will lead to the story being spoiled. Sincerely, Jacob Peralta
I cant find the mtl and it's kinda annoying cause I'm fairly sure I've read it before if anyone can find it will be appreciated if you can tell me how
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I loved the mentality of the MC. Smart, ruthless and selfish. Characters are acting way out of their OG. Some chapters are totally unnecessary IMO. So 4 Stars for promising fiction. Keep up the good work author san.
Хотя порой кажется, что у персонажей мозг слаборазвитый, в остальном история интересная. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=sad]
marvelous I truly look forward to the continuation of the story to see where it goes
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Chinese translation, so I expected a lot of propaganda, but I hardly noticed anything. The MC is manipulative and not necessarily a good one, but isn't evil either.
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So he's this guy. I love Zachary Quinto, I hope this is good. Sylar is one of the best TV SuperVillain, too bad Heroes went shit.
mc is so much like a young master, and is just asking for an accident, in chapter 2, he doesn't have any power which can actually be useful in a fight, and he just fire bullet shot at the driver, who can say the driver doesn't just turn around and drives his car on him, or other people in the area also have guns and for self protection shoots him? very dumb mc.
I tried to read this mtl a while ago because it seemed interesting, but it's the typical extremely racist Chinese author, I couldn't read it, but, I hope the edition removed all that, I'll try again.
Chinese MC young master type, good thing is maybe due to it being edited so I'm spared from the usual poisonous context. Still, flipping his character to a full-time psychopath from chap 1, beside being a brain eating mutant. kinda felt that original Syla is a tat bit better than mc. Idk, the logic, the character characteristic, his power name and it uses doesn't make any sense to me. Pretty much 1D for my taste, maybe just me. 🤷♂️
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yess i love this and the concept of it. Would highly recommend it for anyone who likes marvel fanfictions ................................................
It's off to an interesting start, hopefully there will be romance. ............................................................................................................
Another young master murder hobo mc, which was fine till he started killing innocents as well. The orginal author also wasnt very creative when it comes to abilities, he just finds different excuses for chinese fire dragon fist this and super divine god that.
Wow! A synopsis that makes me want to not read it because it already summarized the wholes story. To whom it may concern A synopsis is an introduction or a sneak peek of a story not a summarization of the important details of the story that will lead to the story being spoiled. Sincerely, Jacob Peralta
I cant find the mtl and it's kinda annoying cause I'm fairly sure I've read it before if anyone can find it will be appreciated if you can tell me how
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
I loved the mentality of the MC. Smart, ruthless and selfish. Characters are acting way out of their OG. Some chapters are totally unnecessary IMO. So 4 Stars for promising fiction. Keep up the good work author san.
Хотя порой кажется, что у персонажей мозг слаборазвитый, в остальном история интересная. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=sad]
marvelous I truly look forward to the continuation of the story to see where it goes
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Chinese translation, so I expected a lot of propaganda, but I hardly noticed anything. The MC is manipulative and not necessarily a good one, but isn't evil either.
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So he's this guy. I love Zachary Quinto, I hope this is good. Sylar is one of the best TV SuperVillain, too bad Heroes went shit.
mc is so much like a young master, and is just asking for an accident, in chapter 2, he doesn't have any power which can actually be useful in a fight, and he just fire bullet shot at the driver, who can say the driver doesn't just turn around and drives his car on him, or other people in the area also have guns and for self protection shoots him? very dumb mc.
I tried to read this mtl a while ago because it seemed interesting, but it's the typical extremely racist Chinese author, I couldn't read it, but, I hope the edition removed all that, I'll try again.
Chinese MC young master type, good thing is maybe due to it being edited so I'm spared from the usual poisonous context. Still, flipping his character to a full-time psychopath from chap 1, beside being a brain eating mutant. kinda felt that original Syla is a tat bit better than mc. Idk, the logic, the character characteristic, his power name and it uses doesn't make any sense to me. Pretty much 1D for my taste, maybe just me. 🤷♂️
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ yess i love this and the concept of it. Would highly recommend it for anyone who likes marvel fanfictions ................................................
It's off to an interesting start, hopefully there will be romance. ............................................................................................................
Another young master murder hobo mc, which was fine till he started killing innocents as well. The orginal author also wasnt very creative when it comes to abilities, he just finds different excuses for chinese fire dragon fist this and super divine god that.