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The story has become a fun read for me over time, and I genuinely like the fic itself. While I haven’t read the raw there has been a huge increase in skips lately and it’s honestly killing it for me. I’ll probably try to find another translated one closest to the raw as possible but I hope it gets fixed.
God... the translation got so bad and the skipping of parts just irritates me to no end. It suddenly got worse at the Battle Frontier arc where so many chapters are being skipped. Until this translated fanfic improves, I'm dropping it
best Pokemon fanfiction I ever read combining both aspect game and anime
incredibly interesting throughout. no monologuing or rough starts… like some other fan fics no offense. reads like a published novel and paced well (a bit fast) but my favorite pokemon fanfic so far
This story has taught me that broken engrish is 1000x more preferable than large parts of chapters just disappearing, which leads to some very confusing moments. Not to mention how the "translator" get some names wrong constantly. Pretty sure it's someone using an ai to translate and haven't figured out it has a wordlimit or something. The story itself is pretty good.
This is a really good story, but unfortunately, the later chapters increasingly have the problem that they are incomplete, as parts are missing. There are also frequent problems with the names, for example, Lucien = Buck.
I am planning giving this story a second chance to read, i did already dropped it. Can you guys spoil me, Did he caught his own pokemon? Did he become a pokemon trainer or what?
the latest chapter are Allright. I love the beginning. you've been skipping battles for some reason
Story is enjoyable, my problem is that the translator gets names wrong and skips over parts of chapters, like entire battles get cut. The least the translator can do is to but the original name of the novel in the summary
Una de las historias con más desarrollo a consideración mía en el ámbito de personajes ,historia, contexto ,sistema de poder, entre otras muchas cosas siendo que esto nos lo explica de manera que una idea complicada parezca simple
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its a very good story, the problem is the translator actively cuts out parts they find annoying to translate so youll miss ALOT of stuff depending on their mood. off the top of my head are battles starting at the end of one chapter and already over and rewarded at the beginning of the next. it IS a good story. just find it somewhere else.
Half of the fanfics on here are unreadable. This one actually contains plot and is entertaining to read
I love this story its a slice of life and ive read over 200 chapters and there’s nothing really dark about it. Although their are some problems. One is after the first 40ish chapter some names get messed up but you should be able to guess who they are if you watched/played a little bit if pokemon. Two later in the 200s parts of chapters are being skipped
God i love this book, amazing storytelling, lovable mc, translation could be iffy but is really readable mostly. Though I do wish our mc can focus a bit more on his psychology side of helping people through his phone.
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The fic is good but I am having a migraine, due to mistranslation and ever-changing names of some things.
Would recommend 10/10 till chapter 348 and up. Quality drops horribly with incorrect name changes random skips in time that make zero sense. Love the story would recommend but i am considering dropping if the quality stays like this. It seems like the translater has just stoped trying and is Producing garbage translations now.
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one of the Best Pokémon fanfics out there, however recent chapter have a Lot of incorrect names for moves, characters(flint from sinno changing to Bertha) and pokemons( ideedee as gallade or ninetales as vulpix) it also gets the name of some places wrong like citys named incorrectly, and is becoming harder and harder to continue reading this
Amazing story, absolutely love the worldbuilding and how our main boy Jihan doesnt pull any punches when it comes to his pokemon knowledge unlike most authors who make their oc's pretending to be ignorant
its good but suddenly author became too lazy to change the name like flint suddenly became bertha at chap 340. i just hope the ts fixed it. (the translation only become weird at that chapter so please give this sht a try cuz this fanfic is really good)
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The names get very confusing. The translation is getting worse are worse, this is just getting too annoying. There are no grammar errors, just displacement of the names.
it's a little boring at the start but it gets better and better and better as we go🥰
This story is awesome! Right amount of comedy, fluff, fighting and the most important ... Right amount of Gengar. Sure there is some cliché protagonist BS like having aura and interacting with legendary pkmns more then anyone should but you know what? It don´t really make story worst because of it and i apreciate it.
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A very good pokemon fanfic with a good team of pokemon that compliment each other, just add a legendary to the team😈
So, this fic is one of the better Pokemon fics on this site. The characters are good, Pokemon interaction is peak on this fic and stuffs. There are some problems with the translation like how it's skipping a massive portion of fights or even chapters but meh, the fic itself is good. Another problem I found was in the later half of the story. It got repetive with the mc constantly moving regions, fights and wins and also, the psychology consultation part stopped coming which was REALLY bad and then canon stuffs started BEFORE original cast and that while in itself is not a problem, the same kept happening again and again ruining the story's originality. All in all its good. Better than most hxrny 8th grade syndrome fics on this site
A fanfic in my Top 5 Pokemon story's I have read so far. You can just keep on reading without pause or any fatigue. Too good. I won't spoil anything but there's no system just pure hardwork for the moves and comedy on point too. No overused jokes. And the pacing is just super.
The story has become a fun read for me over time, and I genuinely like the fic itself. While I haven’t read the raw there has been a huge increase in skips lately and it’s honestly killing it for me. I’ll probably try to find another translated one closest to the raw as possible but I hope it gets fixed.
God... the translation got so bad and the skipping of parts just irritates me to no end. It suddenly got worse at the Battle Frontier arc where so many chapters are being skipped. Until this translated fanfic improves, I'm dropping it
best Pokemon fanfiction I ever read combining both aspect game and anime
incredibly interesting throughout. no monologuing or rough starts… like some other fan fics no offense. reads like a published novel and paced well (a bit fast) but my favorite pokemon fanfic so far
This story has taught me that broken engrish is 1000x more preferable than large parts of chapters just disappearing, which leads to some very confusing moments. Not to mention how the "translator" get some names wrong constantly. Pretty sure it's someone using an ai to translate and haven't figured out it has a wordlimit or something. The story itself is pretty good.
This is a really good story, but unfortunately, the later chapters increasingly have the problem that they are incomplete, as parts are missing. There are also frequent problems with the names, for example, Lucien = Buck.
I am planning giving this story a second chance to read, i did already dropped it. Can you guys spoil me, Did he caught his own pokemon? Did he become a pokemon trainer or what?
the latest chapter are Allright. I love the beginning. you've been skipping battles for some reason
Story is enjoyable, my problem is that the translator gets names wrong and skips over parts of chapters, like entire battles get cut. The least the translator can do is to but the original name of the novel in the summary
Una de las historias con más desarrollo a consideración mía en el ámbito de personajes ,historia, contexto ,sistema de poder, entre otras muchas cosas siendo que esto nos lo explica de manera que una idea complicada parezca simple
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ its a very good story, the problem is the translator actively cuts out parts they find annoying to translate so youll miss ALOT of stuff depending on their mood. off the top of my head are battles starting at the end of one chapter and already over and rewarded at the beginning of the next. it IS a good story. just find it somewhere else.
Half of the fanfics on here are unreadable. This one actually contains plot and is entertaining to read
I love this story its a slice of life and ive read over 200 chapters and there’s nothing really dark about it. Although their are some problems. One is after the first 40ish chapter some names get messed up but you should be able to guess who they are if you watched/played a little bit if pokemon. Two later in the 200s parts of chapters are being skipped
God i love this book, amazing storytelling, lovable mc, translation could be iffy but is really readable mostly. Though I do wish our mc can focus a bit more on his psychology side of helping people through his phone.
yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss#sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing
The fic is good but I am having a migraine, due to mistranslation and ever-changing names of some things.
Would recommend 10/10 till chapter 348 and up. Quality drops horribly with incorrect name changes random skips in time that make zero sense. Love the story would recommend but i am considering dropping if the quality stays like this. It seems like the translater has just stoped trying and is Producing garbage translations now.
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one of the Best Pokémon fanfics out there, however recent chapter have a Lot of incorrect names for moves, characters(flint from sinno changing to Bertha) and pokemons( ideedee as gallade or ninetales as vulpix) it also gets the name of some places wrong like citys named incorrectly, and is becoming harder and harder to continue reading this
Amazing story, absolutely love the worldbuilding and how our main boy Jihan doesnt pull any punches when it comes to his pokemon knowledge unlike most authors who make their oc's pretending to be ignorant
its good but suddenly author became too lazy to change the name like flint suddenly became bertha at chap 340. i just hope the ts fixed it. (the translation only become weird at that chapter so please give this sht a try cuz this fanfic is really good)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The names get very confusing. The translation is getting worse are worse, this is just getting too annoying. There are no grammar errors, just displacement of the names.
it's a little boring at the start but it gets better and better and better as we go🥰
This story is awesome! Right amount of comedy, fluff, fighting and the most important ... Right amount of Gengar. Sure there is some cliché protagonist BS like having aura and interacting with legendary pkmns more then anyone should but you know what? It don´t really make story worst because of it and i apreciate it.
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A very good pokemon fanfic with a good team of pokemon that compliment each other, just add a legendary to the team😈
So, this fic is one of the better Pokemon fics on this site. The characters are good, Pokemon interaction is peak on this fic and stuffs. There are some problems with the translation like how it's skipping a massive portion of fights or even chapters but meh, the fic itself is good. Another problem I found was in the later half of the story. It got repetive with the mc constantly moving regions, fights and wins and also, the psychology consultation part stopped coming which was REALLY bad and then canon stuffs started BEFORE original cast and that while in itself is not a problem, the same kept happening again and again ruining the story's originality. All in all its good. Better than most hxrny 8th grade syndrome fics on this site
A fanfic in my Top 5 Pokemon story's I have read so far. You can just keep on reading without pause or any fatigue. Too good. I won't spoil anything but there's no system just pure hardwork for the moves and comedy on point too. No overused jokes. And the pacing is just super.