Reviews of Game of Thrones: Lyonel Baratheon by The_warmonger - Webnovel

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TheLonelyGod

World background gets 5 stars because it's GOT, however, this story is bland with no advance... I don't know if the author is a monotonous guy with no emotions but this whole book as of now feels empty, no emotions in conversations, no progress. I don't even know what MC is planning to do or is actually doing... I also believe this is AI generated fic because the lack of simpathy in the paragraphs, I can not feel the author's emotions through them which normally I do even when it's a chinese MTL fic, I can feel certai connection to the story, but this fic is a complete void so far...

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Thumbiko_Mkhala

poorly written..the interaction are shitty all in all it's just really bad

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Universe_Supreme

This is just bad... Doesn't explain anything, the character interactions are weird with a lot of characters not even acting how they really would

5mth
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the_gapman

Poorly written, no attractive story development

5mth
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W_D_3766

the beginning so far is shit but hoping it grts better and will update review as the story continues

5mth
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BobbieBinz

Ai written drivel with no continuity or effort into making it a cohesive story.

5mth
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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TheLonelyGod

World background gets 5 stars because it's GOT, however, this story is bland with no advance... I don't know if the author is a monotonous guy with no emotions but this whole book as of now feels empty, no emotions in conversations, no progress. I don't even know what MC is planning to do or is actually doing... I also believe this is AI generated fic because the lack of simpathy in the paragraphs, I can not feel the author's emotions through them which normally I do even when it's a chinese MTL fic, I can feel certai connection to the story, but this fic is a complete void so far...

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Thumbiko_Mkhala

poorly written..the interaction are shitty all in all it's just really bad

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Universe_Supreme

This is just bad... Doesn't explain anything, the character interactions are weird with a lot of characters not even acting how they really would

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
the_gapman

Poorly written, no attractive story development

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
W_D_3766

the beginning so far is shit but hoping it grts better and will update review as the story continues

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BobbieBinz

Ai written drivel with no continuity or effort into making it a cohesive story.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

5mth
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