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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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First of all, Hinata book cover is totally a bait (altho mc says at beggining that he's attracted to her, he makes no effort AT ALL to focus her feelings from Naruto to him). I have a mixed feelings about this story. Up till second part of Chunnin exam it's a bit changed cannon story with just different gloomy (justified) oc character. Later on it's almost totally changed story from what we know. At first this story is just dissapointment leading you as a reader to believe that author is just another lazy person without imagination. Only from second part of chunnin exam it becomes interesting. It's okey story if you skipp many early chapters. P.S. For now it seems like love interest will be Karin and MAYBE Tayuya since she survived as the only one sound four that "kidnapped" Sasuke.
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great fic like really great ) I want faster updates but the quality is excellent. I wonder what an idiot Naruto is capable of without Kurama
He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.
Just here to mention there's actually already someone translating this work, at above 50 chaps or so now.
Nice work going but I think It should not just be about revenge author get in some romance that give way for goal changing and would be nicer
I had read the raw 2 or 3 months before, and I have to say, you have did an incredible work in translating it. In fact this novel is one of my favourites, considering both the translation and the raw. Keep up the good work.
First of all, Hinata book cover is totally a bait (altho mc says at beggining that he's attracted to her, he makes no effort AT ALL to focus her feelings from Naruto to him). I have a mixed feelings about this story. Up till second part of Chunnin exam it's a bit changed cannon story with just different gloomy (justified) oc character. Later on it's almost totally changed story from what we know. At first this story is just dissapointment leading you as a reader to believe that author is just another lazy person without imagination. Only from second part of chunnin exam it becomes interesting. It's okey story if you skipp many early chapters. P.S. For now it seems like love interest will be Karin and MAYBE Tayuya since she survived as the only one sound four that "kidnapped" Sasuke.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ great fic like really great ) I want faster updates but the quality is excellent. I wonder what an idiot Naruto is capable of without Kurama
He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.He is translating very well.
Just here to mention there's actually already someone translating this work, at above 50 chaps or so now.
Nice work going but I think It should not just be about revenge author get in some romance that give way for goal changing and would be nicer
I had read the raw 2 or 3 months before, and I have to say, you have did an incredible work in translating it. In fact this novel is one of my favourites, considering both the translation and the raw. Keep up the good work.