The Villa.

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Omyeeno

wow,the horror stories on webnovel always put me down,but this one,omg,my mind is blown.

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curtiss_baier

A very good opening. Creates a lot of suspense and it is intriguing enough to make me want to read on. It has some clever creepy and spooky moments. Well done，

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Veronica_d

Although horror usually isn't my go-to genre, I have to say, your novel completely drew me in! The way you crafted the atmosphere and developed the characters was captivating, and I found myself deeply invested in the story. It's rare for me to enjoy something in this genre, but you’ve really made it accessible and engaging. Truuuly, a wonderful and gripping read,,,, well written

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Krause_

It's not very often you find a story like this. The gorey imagery with elements of mystery is refreshing .

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Giles_6

omgg, reading this while playing scary music hits different.

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falk_blakelyn

This is a SUPER interesting story! I know if I start reading past this point I will not be able to stop lol.

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rood_hoekstra

Good work! I enjoyed the way this story immediately created suspense by beginning right at the start of the overall action, rather than trying to set the scene, establish characters, etc. and then leading to the action proper. This immediately hooks the reader and makes them want to learn more about these people and what will happen to them. I also appreciate the way the story's word choices, employing many serious-sounding words such as "dilapidated", "indescribable", "spacious", and so on, create a somewhat formal tone that shows the deathly seriousness in which the characters find themselves. Many of the words are less commonly utilised in everyday speech, though still conceivably used (such as the words above). This underlines the story's serious tone, showing that the situation is serious indeed. However, the words are never overly formal or "sophisticated", meaning the story is also easy to follow, therefore helping maintain the suspense mentioned above and allowing the reader to become fully gripped by this disturbing narrative.

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Hunt007

I just loved he detailed dialogues and description!! 🖤🕳 The thriller is very appealing, loved it!! ><

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Knauss

This is great... love the Gothic tension given in the chapter.... keep up the Good work bro.

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Steelen

Dang, I really like this book. A bit of mystery and paranormal. And it's not cheesy or anything, it's something new and it's exciting and keeps you hooked. Definitely adding it to my favourites. Thank you for not killing Liu in the beginning, I love his friendship with Ning, especially Ning calling Liu Big Beard even when Liu already shaved his beard off.🙏🙏

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Bih45

this book is really interesting 10/10 in my opinion ngl it got me hooked i'm already on edge to see what happens next keep up the amazing work!

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Motes

thrilling from start to finish I enjoyed this and have added it to my Library. can't wait to read more.

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Xiean

the book immediately takes you into a horror film only by reading it's intro. it's truly amazing.

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Uzuran

I'm about halfway through the story. It's fun. It reminds me a little of the manga Gantz. I like the idea of the "monsters" having rules - it kind of adds a puzzle element to the story.

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Nia_7

I can already feel like it's going to be different from a lot of the horror books I came across on Webnovel. This is a great book ngl now i am curious what's behind the other blood gates.

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veronel

I love this type of writing. It reminds me a lot of the type of writing you would use in a manga and I love that. It's also easy to read and keeps the person reading the story, interested.

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Salafia_Heitman

This is really intriguing. It takes a real turn into the horrific. Very American Horror Story vibe to me.I really like the Chinese names btw.

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Yeka_Tim

interesting way of telling a story. so far, really liking it and I cannot lie, I'm curious, what this is all about. and I really like this task of taking care of an old man. I bet, he won't be, what we imagine xD

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McCollister

The writing style is so unique,I'm hooked,this is real horror,supernatural stuff,loving it so far.

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Bray_

This is gonna be a masterpiece like My House of horror,guys,don't miss this treasure