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Another dogshit Chinese translation. You can see the translator getting more and more regarded as time goes on. Haven’t read single chapter but I read the first paragraph and wanted to stomp a Chinese skull onto a curb. 0/10 find something better to do with your time than read this dogshit
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i had read this work from raw and the ending was a bit rash and awkward especially the author dropped off before the chapter could even reach 500 i felt like the author wasted this masterworks i couldnt even see setsuna character from white album2 even though i was expecting it.Still, harem ending for those who wonders and no NTR
I have nothing else to say So have this Gif instead to Understand what i felt reading this.
Why is the presence of the system so low in this system even though the name is the Dual system in the daily world? There has not been any simulation after Iroha's till the later half of the story. Don't know if there will be anymore. The simulations were the things that got me hooked to this novel in the first place but now, I'm watching it in the hopes that there will be another simulation.
Excelente trabajo de traducción ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fic I've ever read, I'm surprised it's translation and how good the quality is.
There is only one way to describe the MC he is either the father or the son or Is the reincarnation of Sōsuke Aizen. Everything everyone does is a part of his plan. You reading this was a part of his plan.
i have no words, this fanfiction rock, I especially like the iroha arc, I will write a proper review once i expand my English vocabulary.
5 stars Why? Because this is a wonderful novel. I do not exaggerate praise, but this is the first time I feel that I am inside the story. My emotions have really merged into the novel. This is strange and new to me.
I normally don't read a lot of slice of life novels/fic's but this has me hooked, even though I lean towards the dark sides of this fic (especially the current ongoing evil simulation) Anyway keep up the good work🙏😇(😈)
Bueno después de leer todo lo actualmente disponible, puedo decir que me encanto en general, pero claro seguramente la mayoría estaremos de cuerdo qué el autor no supo manejar las secuelas en las protagonistas femeninas que fueron una exageración. Tuvieron que ser parecidas a las del protagonista masculino y se hubieran evitado varios problemas. También el carácter del protagonista sinceramente deja mucho que desear si comparamos realidad con simulaciones y no ayuda que las protagonistas femeninas ahora sean mucho más maduras y pareciera por ahora pueden manipular fácilmente al protagonista masculino. Pero si el autor tuvo un buen comienzo, solo queda esperar que tenga alguna forma de equilibrar la continuación de la novela.
After reading up to chapter 98, I can say that I'm disappointed. The author made a choice later on about the MC's relationship, and two FMCs in particular, that I really didn't like. My expectations were really high, expecting an exciting encounter, but in the end... Anyway, overall it's well written, frequent updates. The only flaws are that it's a bit slow, since it's only been about 10 days in real life (I think?), and the MC isn't as bold as his simulation self, which ends up being very frustrating in certain situations. Therefore, I'm leaving the fic, I hope that in the near future he improves the MC, and that the story progresses in a more pleasant path and that it's a success.
After every 10 chapters, the protagonist's dreams restart. When the protagonist wakes up, everything he dreamed of is an illusion that never happened and this scene happens: [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
i actually really like this fanfic, the story is quite good especially the Eriri part so... keep up the good work author
The start was deceiving, making you believe that it's the typical simulator fic, but that's wrong! It's a very great fic with a very engaging plot due to the connecting events and dreams that will happen. I highly recommend reading this one.
It's really good I'm addicted now! it not might look it at first but you gotta trust the process the MC learning from his mistakes is the biggest green flag.
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I like this novel which tells about romance and everyday life, and one more thing, if possible, please add the anime Oregairu and Oreimou. #excited about the update.
why you pin 1 star review? this novel suprisingly good, if you like romance and Harem you Will definitely like it
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I'm a shameless fan who really liked the story. you should be reading it now.[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
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I like it, have a meme._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Note: this is a translation! I quite enjoyed reading this fic and wanted to share it with people. I hope you guys enjoy it too! I am merely a translator translating this fic with a few edits to avoid poison and to make it easy to read.
Another dogshit Chinese translation. You can see the translator getting more and more regarded as time goes on. Haven’t read single chapter but I read the first paragraph and wanted to stomp a Chinese skull onto a curb. 0/10 find something better to do with your time than read this dogshit
[img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Why][img=Why][img=Shocked][img=In your face][img=Shocked][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed]
i had read this work from raw and the ending was a bit rash and awkward especially the author dropped off before the chapter could even reach 500 i felt like the author wasted this masterworks i couldnt even see setsuna character from white album2 even though i was expecting it.Still, harem ending for those who wonders and no NTR
I have nothing else to say So have this Gif instead to Understand what i felt reading this.
Why is the presence of the system so low in this system even though the name is the Dual system in the daily world? There has not been any simulation after Iroha's till the later half of the story. Don't know if there will be anymore. The simulations were the things that got me hooked to this novel in the first place but now, I'm watching it in the hopes that there will be another simulation.
Excelente trabajo de traducción ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fic I've ever read, I'm surprised it's translation and how good the quality is.
There is only one way to describe the MC he is either the father or the son or Is the reincarnation of Sōsuke Aizen. Everything everyone does is a part of his plan. You reading this was a part of his plan.
i have no words, this fanfiction rock, I especially like the iroha arc, I will write a proper review once i expand my English vocabulary.
5 stars Why? Because this is a wonderful novel. I do not exaggerate praise, but this is the first time I feel that I am inside the story. My emotions have really merged into the novel. This is strange and new to me.
I normally don't read a lot of slice of life novels/fic's but this has me hooked, even though I lean towards the dark sides of this fic (especially the current ongoing evil simulation) Anyway keep up the good work🙏😇(😈)
Bueno después de leer todo lo actualmente disponible, puedo decir que me encanto en general, pero claro seguramente la mayoría estaremos de cuerdo qué el autor no supo manejar las secuelas en las protagonistas femeninas que fueron una exageración. Tuvieron que ser parecidas a las del protagonista masculino y se hubieran evitado varios problemas. También el carácter del protagonista sinceramente deja mucho que desear si comparamos realidad con simulaciones y no ayuda que las protagonistas femeninas ahora sean mucho más maduras y pareciera por ahora pueden manipular fácilmente al protagonista masculino. Pero si el autor tuvo un buen comienzo, solo queda esperar que tenga alguna forma de equilibrar la continuación de la novela.
After reading up to chapter 98, I can say that I'm disappointed. The author made a choice later on about the MC's relationship, and two FMCs in particular, that I really didn't like. My expectations were really high, expecting an exciting encounter, but in the end... Anyway, overall it's well written, frequent updates. The only flaws are that it's a bit slow, since it's only been about 10 days in real life (I think?), and the MC isn't as bold as his simulation self, which ends up being very frustrating in certain situations. Therefore, I'm leaving the fic, I hope that in the near future he improves the MC, and that the story progresses in a more pleasant path and that it's a success.
After every 10 chapters, the protagonist's dreams restart. When the protagonist wakes up, everything he dreamed of is an illusion that never happened and this scene happens: [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
i actually really like this fanfic, the story is quite good especially the Eriri part so... keep up the good work author
The start was deceiving, making you believe that it's the typical simulator fic, but that's wrong! It's a very great fic with a very engaging plot due to the connecting events and dreams that will happen. I highly recommend reading this one.
It's really good I'm addicted now! it not might look it at first but you gotta trust the process the MC learning from his mistakes is the biggest green flag.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like this novel which tells about romance and everyday life, and one more thing, if possible, please add the anime Oregairu and Oreimou. #excited about the update.
why you pin 1 star review? this novel suprisingly good, if you like romance and Harem you Will definitely like it
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I'm a shameless fan who really liked the story. you should be reading it now.[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
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I like it, have a meme._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Note: this is a translation! I quite enjoyed reading this fic and wanted to share it with people. I hope you guys enjoy it too! I am merely a translator translating this fic with a few edits to avoid poison and to make it easy to read.