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Hey author. You doin’ good? You haven’t updated the chapters for both of your books for half a month. An other thing. I can’t buy any chapters. It keeps showing error. Any idea what is happening???
I don't know what will happen with this novel, since you can't send tickets and power stones, but I hope you don't abandon this work. .
author why is this not appearing on your profile is there something wrong with it or is my app bugging
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WHAT THE FUCK? A CHARACTER WHO IS ALWAYS TRYING TO FUCK HIS MOTHER. I THINK THE AUTHOR NEEDS TO SEE A DOCTOR .I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING MORE DISGUSTING IN MY LIFE. I'VE READ THOUSANDS OF NOVELS, BUT I'VE NEVER COME ACROSS ANYTHING THIS PERVERTED.
I think this story is pretty good. The MC is pretty OP within his current realm plus some, and the system has beneficial rewards that aren't completely out of pocket. One critique I would say is sometimes the smut is way too long. There is like a 30 chapter smut section in the 200 chapters so I would skim or skip that if you don't want to read too much. Other than that the relationships feel decent, but most of the actual development is in the background with only one or two major plot points for them displayed before the girls are in love with him. The cultivation is pretty straight forward and the system has a legitimate reason behind it without being out of nowhere.
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Hi author, I really likes the world and cultivation in your story. Is possible for you recomend me more novels where the mc can get special cultivation resourses/realms/plants?
overall good story but author you should stop writing immortal like young man , empress like , blah blah like its make story bland 🙃🙃
Thrash!! HAHAHA. I don't understand why he can tolerate leng yue and the other one. He even give pills and help them throughout. I'm done, better drop this novel. What a dissapointing. Just Dumb!!!
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lame MC who wants to be lowkey. this is played out by the author always having a new "good brother" or " older sis" step in for him. only time he does anything besides sit there, is flirt with old ladies, and complain about when he gets stronger this and that.
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After 100some chaps, i thought of leaving an honest review. The only reason i can continue reading is cause it matches my kinks, but the story is full of problems. More often than not, i find myself skimming through the chapters, whether r18 or not, as every chapter feels like a struggle to fill it with words. The descriptions are repetitive and only used to fill up the space, the narration feels childish, to say the least, and the novel struggles to add any depth to anything. MC’s talents seem more and more useless the more the story progresses, as there are quite a few people with similar capabilities. Moreover, cultivators at the peak of the world look like old men in their 200’s, when logically, their lifespan should be in the tens of thousands, if not more. There simply is no depth to either the story, the characters, or the cultivation system as a whole. Not a single person older than 300 years, making it seem as if the peak stage is something anyone can achieve within 50 years or so. Overall a small world, with nothing much interesting in it, and apparently, easily achievable stages with barely any lifespan gain. Feels like a martial arts world more than culti.
one of the most annoying thing for me is him being referred to as immortal like young man instead of using his name it just unbearable and the same for other characters it gives the vibe like the author want to show a mystery feeling but fails badly. And it's very cliche sometimes like the first time he world travel and meet the city lord and it's said it's a backward world but has tea coffee pastery etc and asks about if the world is flat and solar system it just doesn't fit right.
The novel is enjoyable, especially as the chapters progress, so I advise you to judge it after reaching the Secret World arc, while avoiding the pornographic chapters if you do not prefer them.
I usually only comment on bad things when the story is completely unbearable or when it is a waste of potential. This time it falls into the second category. The idea is certainly interesting, but there are many inconsistencies that made it impossible to continue the story without having a stroke. The main one was the lack of research and completely illogical things happening. His mother is literally a disgusting pedophile and everyone is very stupid. Anyway, I recommend reading at least 10 chapters to realize the waste of potential. I recommend the author delete this book and rewrite it, but always with the help of another person to advise him to avoid it becoming so unbearable. Usually when we write, we are unable to see our flaws.
Read up to chapter 55. Feels like more a slice of life rather than actual story. Many NTR scenes and when looking at the chapters ahead way too many. One of the main reasons it put me off, Im trying to read soemthing fun and exciting not fifty shades of grey. Not my cup of tea.
The story is good and it is also fast paced. Characters's are all good.
great pacing and story, pity I catched up so now I end up searching for something new to read again
good one, some grammatical errors here and there but overall a satisfying read, and there are a lot of free chapters
currently waiting on a prolonged 20+ chapter NSFW arc to conclude before I pick it back up because all great things are enjoyed in moderation. outside of the that. its a decent story definitely worth a read.
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I couldn't Evan give the book a chance you have a 7 year old boy sexually playing with his mother and this is less than 10 chapters in not only is it to far but also to soon to be putting smut iI when we haven't learned shit about the mc and he is only 7 years old it's just weird and makes the story trashy
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Hello there, looks like you've roamed around long enough for you to stumble here so why not give it a try? This shameless author guarantees a significant pp growth if you read the smut scenes, so avoid reading in public. Do bear in mind though that the first few chapters are set pretty fast pace but this pace, along with the plot will start to pick up as it progresses, I hope the fellows who decided to give it a try have a good time reading it.
Hey author. You doin’ good? You haven’t updated the chapters for both of your books for half a month. An other thing. I can’t buy any chapters. It keeps showing error. Any idea what is happening???
I don't know what will happen with this novel, since you can't send tickets and power stones, but I hope you don't abandon this work. .
author why is this not appearing on your profile is there something wrong with it or is my app bugging
Up up up.................,......,.......................................................................... ............................................ .... ...
WHAT THE FUCK? A CHARACTER WHO IS ALWAYS TRYING TO FUCK HIS MOTHER. I THINK THE AUTHOR NEEDS TO SEE A DOCTOR .I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING MORE DISGUSTING IN MY LIFE. I'VE READ THOUSANDS OF NOVELS, BUT I'VE NEVER COME ACROSS ANYTHING THIS PERVERTED.
I think this story is pretty good. The MC is pretty OP within his current realm plus some, and the system has beneficial rewards that aren't completely out of pocket. One critique I would say is sometimes the smut is way too long. There is like a 30 chapter smut section in the 200 chapters so I would skim or skip that if you don't want to read too much. Other than that the relationships feel decent, but most of the actual development is in the background with only one or two major plot points for them displayed before the girls are in love with him. The cultivation is pretty straight forward and the system has a legitimate reason behind it without being out of nowhere.
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Hi author, I really likes the world and cultivation in your story. Is possible for you recomend me more novels where the mc can get special cultivation resourses/realms/plants?
overall good story but author you should stop writing immortal like young man , empress like , blah blah like its make story bland 🙃🙃
Thrash!! HAHAHA. I don't understand why he can tolerate leng yue and the other one. He even give pills and help them throughout. I'm done, better drop this novel. What a dissapointing. Just Dumb!!!
I want say a big Big thanks to RECLAIM INSTANT CRYPTO net from the depth of my heart, I have been through hell and storm all in the hands of brokers and fake recovery agents spreading themselves all over the internet, I got rescued by RECLAIMINSTANTCRYPTO @ GMAIL COM, immediately I contacted him he responds and asks me to reach him via WhatsApp +1 (603) 702 ( 4335 ) of which I did and my funds got recovered within few hours, all thanks to him, have never seen an honest and understanding being such like him all my life. all thanks and appreciation goes to him, I pray he keeps on with the good jobs.
lame MC who wants to be lowkey. this is played out by the author always having a new "good brother" or " older sis" step in for him. only time he does anything besides sit there, is flirt with old ladies, and complain about when he gets stronger this and that.
Ini novel kesukaan ku,ku harap update selalu. Semangat penulis untuk update nya[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].....................,........... .....
After 100some chaps, i thought of leaving an honest review. The only reason i can continue reading is cause it matches my kinks, but the story is full of problems. More often than not, i find myself skimming through the chapters, whether r18 or not, as every chapter feels like a struggle to fill it with words. The descriptions are repetitive and only used to fill up the space, the narration feels childish, to say the least, and the novel struggles to add any depth to anything. MC’s talents seem more and more useless the more the story progresses, as there are quite a few people with similar capabilities. Moreover, cultivators at the peak of the world look like old men in their 200’s, when logically, their lifespan should be in the tens of thousands, if not more. There simply is no depth to either the story, the characters, or the cultivation system as a whole. Not a single person older than 300 years, making it seem as if the peak stage is something anyone can achieve within 50 years or so. Overall a small world, with nothing much interesting in it, and apparently, easily achievable stages with barely any lifespan gain. Feels like a martial arts world more than culti.
one of the most annoying thing for me is him being referred to as immortal like young man instead of using his name it just unbearable and the same for other characters it gives the vibe like the author want to show a mystery feeling but fails badly. And it's very cliche sometimes like the first time he world travel and meet the city lord and it's said it's a backward world but has tea coffee pastery etc and asks about if the world is flat and solar system it just doesn't fit right.
The novel is enjoyable, especially as the chapters progress, so I advise you to judge it after reaching the Secret World arc, while avoiding the pornographic chapters if you do not prefer them.
I usually only comment on bad things when the story is completely unbearable or when it is a waste of potential. This time it falls into the second category. The idea is certainly interesting, but there are many inconsistencies that made it impossible to continue the story without having a stroke. The main one was the lack of research and completely illogical things happening. His mother is literally a disgusting pedophile and everyone is very stupid. Anyway, I recommend reading at least 10 chapters to realize the waste of potential. I recommend the author delete this book and rewrite it, but always with the help of another person to advise him to avoid it becoming so unbearable. Usually when we write, we are unable to see our flaws.
Read up to chapter 55. Feels like more a slice of life rather than actual story. Many NTR scenes and when looking at the chapters ahead way too many. One of the main reasons it put me off, Im trying to read soemthing fun and exciting not fifty shades of grey. Not my cup of tea.
The story is good and it is also fast paced. Characters's are all good.
great pacing and story, pity I catched up so now I end up searching for something new to read again
good one, some grammatical errors here and there but overall a satisfying read, and there are a lot of free chapters
currently waiting on a prolonged 20+ chapter NSFW arc to conclude before I pick it back up because all great things are enjoyed in moderation. outside of the that. its a decent story definitely worth a read.
w f0iv99HQW Q0 H9q 0h0 H Q2 098Hq0 q309 093 q q3 q 0Q3 90H 08 08H308Q 0 80 3q 0q3 902r gw0r w08h f0w 0w0 wew h e 08we 0we0 w 09 9 wet3q4 34 3 t
I couldn't Evan give the book a chance you have a 7 year old boy sexually playing with his mother and this is less than 10 chapters in not only is it to far but also to soon to be putting smut iI when we haven't learned shit about the mc and he is only 7 years old it's just weird and makes the story trashy
-________________________________________________________________________________________________\_. ___________________________________________
Hello there, looks like you've roamed around long enough for you to stumble here so why not give it a try? This shameless author guarantees a significant pp growth if you read the smut scenes, so avoid reading in public. Do bear in mind though that the first few chapters are set pretty fast pace but this pace, along with the plot will start to pick up as it progresses, I hope the fellows who decided to give it a try have a good time reading it.