4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
I have one complaint put a god damn picture in your stories and it's not that hard
The idea of the story is good, but it goes at a faster pace, leaving little or nothing for development and interactions with other characters. The drama is acceptable, but we should stop putting it in. Commentary on sentences that hinder reading
a ha well well well allow this one to peer through the multi verse and find the lost swordsman once more as I read another of your great books.
I have one complaint put a god damn picture in your stories and it's not that hard
The idea of the story is good, but it goes at a faster pace, leaving little or nothing for development and interactions with other characters. The drama is acceptable, but we should stop putting it in. Commentary on sentences that hinder reading
a ha well well well allow this one to peer through the multi verse and find the lost swordsman once more as I read another of your great books.