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Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC
The MC's character is good. But suddenly the MC turned into a Celestia Dragon! What nonsense, since then the story has started to get weird.
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
"Como suelen hacer los escritores chinos, logran capturar nuestra atención desde el inicio de la novela al crear grandes expectativas y construir tramas intrigantes. Sin embargo, a medida que la historia avanza y especialmente hacia el final, estas expectativas suelen desvanecerse, dejando una sensación de decepción en el lector.
I love this fic. It has everything I ever wanted from a One Piece fic. Lots of funny moments, The fight scenes are written very well. Romance is with Nami btw (no harem). To me the best thing is how the author has incorporated mc in the Straw Hats crew very well. He gets along with everyone, makes fun with luffy, He has his own quirks that make this story from a 4.0 to a 5.0 easily. Anyways please give this a try, I promise you won't regret it. Idk about the other reviews, maybe the translator did a re-edit and I read that coz I didn't have any problems till chapter 200.
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how should i put it this fanfic is normal not too good nor too bad the reason i don't like this nove is simple if a person who transmigrate in one piece from normal world he would know how dangerous world is also how important is exercise also if mc has no clear definition of his end goal he will always be weak no matter what in onepiece world you have to choose sides if mc has chosen straw hat then he should be clear about what he has to do also if you ever thought about it Haki is not that difficult to master but time consuming mc has time but he wasted it on some no name pirate why because he felt save there if you want to decide mc laid back plz don't write onepiece fanfic bcz onepiece is all about struggle sorry if i offended you but thats just my opinion
Didn't start reading yet but the moment i saw a new, original fruit and no system unlike aml the other bad ones i knew this fic got potential, hope i'm not wrong
The story is very good I really like how the author moves forward according to the events seen in the manga nothing strange and OP in general a very good story.
The MC joined the Straw Hats and promptly started fighting many of the battles Luffy fought in canon. It feels incredibly weird that a member of the crew keeps fighting stronger opponents than the captain. I'm also confused about the MC's Devil Fruit, the Paper Paper fruit, which for some reason the Author made into a Paramecia, even though there is already a Logia Paper Paper Fruit from an old One Piece game...
A good read if you like One Piece world. I personally liked our reincarnated mc and I'm not really sure why jajaja. Hopefully he is more relaxed after the two years time skip because that guy is super stressed. Please keep the updates!
Why the hero of the story does not have a reward on his head 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Nice story so far Also can you make MC more stronger than original Bdhdjsjduddusushhdjdhdgdduueuuufufhfjdjdjfhrheidkjdudeiskjdgdudkdjejdjdjdjduxudjejehdjdjdhejdhdkdodjdjekjdhdieowjbdjsjsjdjdjdjdjisjshsjsjdhdjdjdjjs
I went to read the RAW reviews and someone said that he becomes just a strategist in the future, which I found strange because his fruit has a lot of potential and he himself shows focus in training.Can anyone tell me if he becomes a fighter like Zoro and Sanji or will he stay behind them in strength and be a strategist for the gang?
é legal, recomendo, o protagonista é inteligente e ta no navio do Luffy, parece que a Fmc é a Namitag fantasma é AU
it's not a bad past time read as there are a few unexpected twists that makes it interesting but the romance is kind of messing up the whole book as there is no growth for her infact its the opposite how she's so dependant. there's a reason why they say don't eat where you 💩.
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. Excellent for distraction, it has a slow start, but it improves little by little.. .
Im enjoying everything about the story especially the MC’s Devil fruit this is one of the few times I find a storie that give their MC a unique ability keep up with the great work
I have only one request to author you read the story so you should change it where its necessary because you are update with new onepiece chapter dont make the story bad or illogical plz thanky
The translations is alright The story is nonsense most Chinese ff authors want things to happen in their story and are too lazy to set it up this is one of those story that just do things with no logic.
just like other Chinese novels at the beginning it gives hope that it will be a good story, but like other Chinese authors after 2 chapters it will become a template story .
This fic is tough, I like it, it show the cruel side of pirates and a guy who just wants to survive with his comrades. It's a show of what reality mixed with powers and thrown into one piece would look like 👍
The first two chapters were terrible, I couldn't discern who the protagonist was, I didn't completely understand his combat style the first time. however, it has a lot of potential and at least improved understanding a little in the third chapter.
Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC
The MC's character is good. But suddenly the MC turned into a Celestia Dragon! What nonsense, since then the story has started to get weird.
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
"Como suelen hacer los escritores chinos, logran capturar nuestra atención desde el inicio de la novela al crear grandes expectativas y construir tramas intrigantes. Sin embargo, a medida que la historia avanza y especialmente hacia el final, estas expectativas suelen desvanecerse, dejando una sensación de decepción en el lector.
I love this fic. It has everything I ever wanted from a One Piece fic. Lots of funny moments, The fight scenes are written very well. Romance is with Nami btw (no harem). To me the best thing is how the author has incorporated mc in the Straw Hats crew very well. He gets along with everyone, makes fun with luffy, He has his own quirks that make this story from a 4.0 to a 5.0 easily. Anyways please give this a try, I promise you won't regret it. Idk about the other reviews, maybe the translator did a re-edit and I read that coz I didn't have any problems till chapter 200.
Rhe scum of the world yezzeeeezssss [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
how should i put it this fanfic is normal not too good nor too bad the reason i don't like this nove is simple if a person who transmigrate in one piece from normal world he would know how dangerous world is also how important is exercise also if mc has no clear definition of his end goal he will always be weak no matter what in onepiece world you have to choose sides if mc has chosen straw hat then he should be clear about what he has to do also if you ever thought about it Haki is not that difficult to master but time consuming mc has time but he wasted it on some no name pirate why because he felt save there if you want to decide mc laid back plz don't write onepiece fanfic bcz onepiece is all about struggle sorry if i offended you but thats just my opinion
Didn't start reading yet but the moment i saw a new, original fruit and no system unlike aml the other bad ones i knew this fic got potential, hope i'm not wrong
The story is very good I really like how the author moves forward according to the events seen in the manga nothing strange and OP in general a very good story.
The MC joined the Straw Hats and promptly started fighting many of the battles Luffy fought in canon. It feels incredibly weird that a member of the crew keeps fighting stronger opponents than the captain. I'm also confused about the MC's Devil Fruit, the Paper Paper fruit, which for some reason the Author made into a Paramecia, even though there is already a Logia Paper Paper Fruit from an old One Piece game...
A good read if you like One Piece world. I personally liked our reincarnated mc and I'm not really sure why jajaja. Hopefully he is more relaxed after the two years time skip because that guy is super stressed. Please keep the updates!
Why the hero of the story does not have a reward on his head 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Nice story so far Also can you make MC more stronger than original Bdhdjsjduddusushhdjdhdgdduueuuufufhfjdjdjfhrheidkjdudeiskjdgdudkdjejdjdjdjduxudjejehdjdjdhejdhdkdodjdjekjdhdieowjbdjsjsjdjdjdjdjisjshsjsjdhdjdjdjjs
I went to read the RAW reviews and someone said that he becomes just a strategist in the future, which I found strange because his fruit has a lot of potential and he himself shows focus in training.Can anyone tell me if he becomes a fighter like Zoro and Sanji or will he stay behind them in strength and be a strategist for the gang?
é legal, recomendo, o protagonista é inteligente e ta no navio do Luffy, parece que a Fmc é a Namitag fantasma é AU
it's not a bad past time read as there are a few unexpected twists that makes it interesting but the romance is kind of messing up the whole book as there is no growth for her infact its the opposite how she's so dependant. there's a reason why they say don't eat where you 💩.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ . Excellent for distraction, it has a slow start, but it improves little by little.. .
Im enjoying everything about the story especially the MC’s Devil fruit this is one of the few times I find a storie that give their MC a unique ability keep up with the great work
I have only one request to author you read the story so you should change it where its necessary because you are update with new onepiece chapter dont make the story bad or illogical plz thanky
The translations is alright The story is nonsense most Chinese ff authors want things to happen in their story and are too lazy to set it up this is one of those story that just do things with no logic.
just like other Chinese novels at the beginning it gives hope that it will be a good story, but like other Chinese authors after 2 chapters it will become a template story .
This fic is tough, I like it, it show the cruel side of pirates and a guy who just wants to survive with his comrades. It's a show of what reality mixed with powers and thrown into one piece would look like 👍
The first two chapters were terrible, I couldn't discern who the protagonist was, I didn't completely understand his combat style the first time. however, it has a lot of potential and at least improved understanding a little in the third chapter.
I really like this. Thank you so much author for bringing such a good novel