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Hasta ahora ha sido una de las mejores novelas que he visto, su trama no se siente forzada, el MC no es uno que busca mujeres como Pokémon y hasta ahora las peleas han sido interesante, gracias por el trabajo, seguiré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
The Writing Quality is good enough to Binge read it. There are a few inconsistencies sometimes they can be explained with a difference between Novel and Anime and sometimes they just look like mistakes. But still better than around 90% of the Novels I have seen on this Page. The Stability is easy to judge even before you start reading so I will ignore it. The Story Development is somewhere between Okayish and Good, sometimes its really great and may even surprise you while on other occasions it feels a bit forced but overall still great. The Character Designs and World Backgrounds are overall really good. Overall 4.4 Stars
mc shares his cheat, a big difference since mc's talent is not incredible, that is, he shares the only resource that would make him stand out from those around him, for me this is something impossible to read, at the same level of netorare or psychotic mcs, but it's something personal to me, apart from that aspect, it's a great fanfic, very interesting
Bastante buena la historia aun que un poco polémica pero al fin y al cabo venimos a divertirnos Además la integración de mundos esta bien echa no es de esas historias que me dan un poder y después se olvidad tal dicho perder (hasta ahora)
Well done Author mc go other world learning skill magic nen martial art become strong 👍 Go other world like one piece bleach dragon ball fairy tail and many more
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I like the story that's currently going on but I would like the next World be high school dxd I want to see yahweh's reaction to God system
Really good. this will be hit if author don't lose passion and reason. I'm more into to solo op mc so i read till halfway but it's still good can't hide shiny jewel even with my biased thought. I like the idea of how author decided to make mc to travel between world (my opinion: it could be better if mc was solo :P) he thought pretty resonable. i lost myself good 5 min thinking about hxh and danmachi power structor and even though i think top power nen user's are not that weak well good idea
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Story is very interesting plot is superb world choosing is best and i sincerely hope it will expand to even creation . Even though I want to review after completing current unfinish chapters but because of constant reminder in thoughts I am here . Authors decision to continue is appreciated and liking for more exiting chapters to come
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This is my first star in terms of reviews. 1. in the world of danmachi you have brought the original form of dungeon into fanfic where every danmachi fanfic I read dungeons are always friendly and tame, where we know in the original series how bell is always in a life and death situation because of this dungeon. 2. In the journey of the world with the presence of cool down where this is the first series I read that brings this concept to another world journey. Where making the mc have to really determine how long to go instead of surviving as long as he wants. 3. the development of the mc's character is extraordinary, from a bastard who does various tricks to succeed to a fighter. 4. I like where you take the party path where it makes more sense than solo, which is what all fanfic writers do, especially in this party they are not decorations but really give a portion in this adventure. And this also reminds me that this made me a bit down when the mc used nen because nen. Can make the user become a solo army power, although rare but there is potential to become one 5. I hope you also give better development of the side characters in terms of strength, although I can see in terms of the development of the goddess side from looking quite arrogant and quite annoying to being calmer. and I hope you are always happy and healthy
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I gave it 5 stars because it was pretty good at the start, but we had some problems. First of all, he changed some important names, now while he changed them, it doesn't mean they are wrong like another review stated, it is just another form of translation, less used and way to say it, but it's not wrong. Regarding the writing quality, while I think the author is Chinese, the novel at least doesn't look like it, it is pretty good, a decent world-building with great characters. Now the thing that made me change my review is the fact that he is basically nerfing the protagonist group for nothing, which is horrible and annoying.
3.8 stars My main criteria for rating a fic in general is to give 5 stars to everything that's a little below average and above, and take stars off based on how horrible, avoidable, or frustrating an issue is. The problems in this fic are all of the easily avoidable and somewhat frustrating kind. Translation Quality: 3 stars. Overall it's good, with the big problem being wrong terms like Falis instead of Valis or the author completely getting the name of an important place like Hostess of Fertility wrong. These are errors that are really frustrating because they are very basic, but they do not make reading impossible like MTL. Stability of Updates: 5 stars. More than one chapter per day (at the time of posting this review). Story Development: 3 Stars. 3 stars Again, overall it's good and interesting, but it lacks a lot in the details. I'm giving it 3 stars because although they are errors that don't affect the course of the story in general, they are very frustrating and the author doesn't bother to correct them even when a reader points out the error. Some more striking examples are the MC and his almost lvl 2 Familia suffering through a 30km marathon lasting 2 hours when the MC's training involved days of running non-stop from dawn to dusk through a mountain full of traps is simply ridiculous. This is without taking into account that a mundane athlete holds the world record of 42km in 2 hours, so even without training and breathing techniques a lvl 1 adventurer who spends the whole day fighting in the dungeon should be able to run a marathon effortlessly. The author also got several other details wrong, such as the comparison of Netero and Meruem's power levels in relation to an adventurer. Another mistake was calling In En and the MC knowing how to do this before even learning Nen. These are all basic details that do not affect the story in general but could also be easily avoided if the author bothered to do some minimal research or read reader comments pointing out these errors and then correcting them. Character Design: 5 stars. It's ok, nothing special, but nothing bad either and in fanfics my standard is to give 5 stars to everything that is acceptable and then take points off depending on how frustrating and simple a problem is. World Background: 3 stars. Again because of frustrating, easily avoidable errors that don't interfere that much with the story in general and that the author does not bother to correct even when readers point out. Conclusion: It's a good read with the caveat of extremely frustrating small problems, I recommend following this fic unless these problems are the kind of thing that makes you drop a fic.
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This is like fast food. It is quite widespread. MC is very good , he is not beta MC so I accept it . The grammar is a bit rigid. In general, this fanfic is not bad.
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This novel is a must-read for fans of crossovers and multiverse adventures. Its inventive plot, memorable characters, and captivating writing make it a standout in the genre. If you love a good adventure, this novel is sure to entertain and inspire.
At first I thought its is decent but as the story developed then i thought that it is way more great!![img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Esta historia es realmente genial, me ha gustado el desarrollo hasta ahora, realmente espero que el MC pueda traer a las demás personas que conoce al mundo de Danmachi de modo que la familia pueda crecer y juntos incursionar en los pisos profundos... Gracias hasta ahora por el trabajo, sigue con el buen trabajo
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Hasta ahora ha sido una de las mejores novelas que he visto, su trama no se siente forzada, el MC no es uno que busca mujeres como Pokémon y hasta ahora las peleas han sido interesante, gracias por el trabajo, seguiré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
The Writing Quality is good enough to Binge read it. There are a few inconsistencies sometimes they can be explained with a difference between Novel and Anime and sometimes they just look like mistakes. But still better than around 90% of the Novels I have seen on this Page. The Stability is easy to judge even before you start reading so I will ignore it. The Story Development is somewhere between Okayish and Good, sometimes its really great and may even surprise you while on other occasions it feels a bit forced but overall still great. The Character Designs and World Backgrounds are overall really good. Overall 4.4 Stars
mc shares his cheat, a big difference since mc's talent is not incredible, that is, he shares the only resource that would make him stand out from those around him, for me this is something impossible to read, at the same level of netorare or psychotic mcs, but it's something personal to me, apart from that aspect, it's a great fanfic, very interesting
Bastante buena la historia aun que un poco polémica pero al fin y al cabo venimos a divertirnos Además la integración de mundos esta bien echa no es de esas historias que me dan un poder y después se olvidad tal dicho perder (hasta ahora)
Well done Author mc go other world learning skill magic nen martial art become strong 👍 Go other world like one piece bleach dragon ball fairy tail and many more
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like the story that's currently going on but I would like the next World be high school dxd I want to see yahweh's reaction to God system
Really good. this will be hit if author don't lose passion and reason. I'm more into to solo op mc so i read till halfway but it's still good can't hide shiny jewel even with my biased thought. I like the idea of how author decided to make mc to travel between world (my opinion: it could be better if mc was solo :P) he thought pretty resonable. i lost myself good 5 min thinking about hxh and danmachi power structor and even though i think top power nen user's are not that weak well good idea
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Story is very interesting plot is superb world choosing is best and i sincerely hope it will expand to even creation . Even though I want to review after completing current unfinish chapters but because of constant reminder in thoughts I am here . Authors decision to continue is appreciated and liking for more exiting chapters to come
I love it! 🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀🎀💓💓💓🎀
This is my first star in terms of reviews. 1. in the world of danmachi you have brought the original form of dungeon into fanfic where every danmachi fanfic I read dungeons are always friendly and tame, where we know in the original series how bell is always in a life and death situation because of this dungeon. 2. In the journey of the world with the presence of cool down where this is the first series I read that brings this concept to another world journey. Where making the mc have to really determine how long to go instead of surviving as long as he wants. 3. the development of the mc's character is extraordinary, from a bastard who does various tricks to succeed to a fighter. 4. I like where you take the party path where it makes more sense than solo, which is what all fanfic writers do, especially in this party they are not decorations but really give a portion in this adventure. And this also reminds me that this made me a bit down when the mc used nen because nen. Can make the user become a solo army power, although rare but there is potential to become one 5. I hope you also give better development of the side characters in terms of strength, although I can see in terms of the development of the goddess side from looking quite arrogant and quite annoying to being calmer. and I hope you are always happy and healthy
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I gave it 5 stars because it was pretty good at the start, but we had some problems. First of all, he changed some important names, now while he changed them, it doesn't mean they are wrong like another review stated, it is just another form of translation, less used and way to say it, but it's not wrong. Regarding the writing quality, while I think the author is Chinese, the novel at least doesn't look like it, it is pretty good, a decent world-building with great characters. Now the thing that made me change my review is the fact that he is basically nerfing the protagonist group for nothing, which is horrible and annoying.
3.8 stars My main criteria for rating a fic in general is to give 5 stars to everything that's a little below average and above, and take stars off based on how horrible, avoidable, or frustrating an issue is. The problems in this fic are all of the easily avoidable and somewhat frustrating kind. Translation Quality: 3 stars. Overall it's good, with the big problem being wrong terms like Falis instead of Valis or the author completely getting the name of an important place like Hostess of Fertility wrong. These are errors that are really frustrating because they are very basic, but they do not make reading impossible like MTL. Stability of Updates: 5 stars. More than one chapter per day (at the time of posting this review). Story Development: 3 Stars. 3 stars Again, overall it's good and interesting, but it lacks a lot in the details. I'm giving it 3 stars because although they are errors that don't affect the course of the story in general, they are very frustrating and the author doesn't bother to correct them even when a reader points out the error. Some more striking examples are the MC and his almost lvl 2 Familia suffering through a 30km marathon lasting 2 hours when the MC's training involved days of running non-stop from dawn to dusk through a mountain full of traps is simply ridiculous. This is without taking into account that a mundane athlete holds the world record of 42km in 2 hours, so even without training and breathing techniques a lvl 1 adventurer who spends the whole day fighting in the dungeon should be able to run a marathon effortlessly. The author also got several other details wrong, such as the comparison of Netero and Meruem's power levels in relation to an adventurer. Another mistake was calling In En and the MC knowing how to do this before even learning Nen. These are all basic details that do not affect the story in general but could also be easily avoided if the author bothered to do some minimal research or read reader comments pointing out these errors and then correcting them. Character Design: 5 stars. It's ok, nothing special, but nothing bad either and in fanfics my standard is to give 5 stars to everything that is acceptable and then take points off depending on how frustrating and simple a problem is. World Background: 3 stars. Again because of frustrating, easily avoidable errors that don't interfere that much with the story in general and that the author does not bother to correct even when readers point out. Conclusion: It's a good read with the caveat of extremely frustrating small problems, I recommend following this fic unless these problems are the kind of thing that makes you drop a fic.
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This is like fast food. It is quite widespread. MC is very good , he is not beta MC so I accept it . The grammar is a bit rigid. In general, this fanfic is not bad.
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This novel is a must-read for fans of crossovers and multiverse adventures. Its inventive plot, memorable characters, and captivating writing make it a standout in the genre. If you love a good adventure, this novel is sure to entertain and inspire.
At first I thought its is decent but as the story developed then i thought that it is way more great!![img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Esta historia es realmente genial, me ha gustado el desarrollo hasta ahora, realmente espero que el MC pueda traer a las demás personas que conoce al mundo de Danmachi de modo que la familia pueda crecer y juntos incursionar en los pisos profundos... Gracias hasta ahora por el trabajo, sigue con el buen trabajo
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This is pretty good pls don’t drop this one bro 🙏