8รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Someone who knows Soul Land development and how hypocritical Tang San was and all the damage he caused which helped only those close to him but ruined the world but still decided to be friends with him. Instead of being smart and joining Spirit Hall he decides to limit himself and stay in a small city with barely any resources or knowledge. He then says Spirit Hall and its corruption but everywhere else is just as corrupt if not more so. Overall in terms of story 2/5 stars. Also, how is he a work-study student when his father is a teacher? This story makes no logical sense and makes stupid after stupid decisions.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Few chapters so far, with the last one released being 13, but I'm really enjoying the fic. Some people will probably find the MC befriending and teaming up with Tang San bad, but to be honest this is the best choice. Joining Tang San at least until he gets the immortal herbs is a guarantee of a great treasure and this kind of thing is very rare in Sou Land 1. Even better if the MC can learn the techniques of the Tang sect from Tang San because again this type of technique that does not depend on the martial spirit is very rare in Soul Land so it's worth it even if the MC has to help Tang San found the sect Tang. So while joining the Soul Hall guarantees a good start and rapid cultivation, joining Tang San until he obtains the immortal herbs guarantees greater future potential and does not prevent the MC from deciding to join another faction later if he wants to. .
ngl but i posted this idea of a fic on my discord a couple weeks ago, so seeing this now is kinda weird for me. dunno if i wanna read it though. not because i think you stole the idea from me, but because we could have both pulled this idea, and i don't wanna copy u.
im just here for thar title. Douluo dalu + poke ball soul martial? oh yea baby im in all the way.
Someone who knows Soul Land development and how hypocritical Tang San was and all the damage he caused which helped only those close to him but ruined the world but still decided to be friends with him. Instead of being smart and joining Spirit Hall he decides to limit himself and stay in a small city with barely any resources or knowledge. He then says Spirit Hall and its corruption but everywhere else is just as corrupt if not more so. Overall in terms of story 2/5 stars. Also, how is he a work-study student when his father is a teacher? This story makes no logical sense and makes stupid after stupid decisions.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Few chapters so far, with the last one released being 13, but I'm really enjoying the fic. Some people will probably find the MC befriending and teaming up with Tang San bad, but to be honest this is the best choice. Joining Tang San at least until he gets the immortal herbs is a guarantee of a great treasure and this kind of thing is very rare in Sou Land 1. Even better if the MC can learn the techniques of the Tang sect from Tang San because again this type of technique that does not depend on the martial spirit is very rare in Soul Land so it's worth it even if the MC has to help Tang San found the sect Tang. So while joining the Soul Hall guarantees a good start and rapid cultivation, joining Tang San until he obtains the immortal herbs guarantees greater future potential and does not prevent the MC from deciding to join another faction later if he wants to. .
ngl but i posted this idea of a fic on my discord a couple weeks ago, so seeing this now is kinda weird for me. dunno if i wanna read it though. not because i think you stole the idea from me, but because we could have both pulled this idea, and i don't wanna copy u.
im just here for thar title. Douluo dalu + poke ball soul martial? oh yea baby im in all the way.
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