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mc really need to working on his physical power if he want to win against Bigmom or Kaidou. Thanks for the fic
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It's pretty good, absolutely recommended, characters are pretty good, main character is nice, background is... Well it's a one piece fanfiction so that's that. So yeah give it a try.
Autor eu sei que não e original mais não importa a tradução e uma das melhores que eu já vir só espero que mude algumas coisas e deixe mais legal e boa e faça dela sua história E mude o final foi isso que acabou com o original o autor se cansou e acabou apresado e acabou com livro Por favor autor consente o livro e faça ele melhor
I hope you change the ending, in the original the author simply got tired of the novel and made a hasty ending in 1 episode, by the way the translation is incredibly good 10/10, I have never seen a translation so well done and with so much effort, although, still So I think you should say that it is a translation and not your novel, because it totally seems like you are pretending to be the author of this novel and not a translator.
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I still haven't started reading just needed a clarification the talent he copies is just the talent right not their strength? he still need to train make those talent make them bloom ?
It's really good changes the story in a way that works and opens up plenty of opportunities. He doesn't train his family so they aren't likely to join him sadly. Still waiting for the harem tag to come in. I'm disappointed that he didn't take Nami or anyone to be in his crew yet. Especially leaving Nami to join Luffy who is a complete stranger. It's still early though so maybe he has something better planned. Seriously though it's a good read and has some good laughs as well. I highly recommend it.
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if he didn't have devil fruit coping ability then it could have been great for some reason it doesn't sit well with me .😞
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Me gusta la historia desde su comienzo, nunca había leído uno igual (la ciudad y el estado de esta además de la fortaleza que demuestra para lograr sobrevivir), eso ya nos empieza a mostrar la creatividad de este autor. El sistema no es molesto, tiene una actitud calmada y apoya al Mc. Esta historia tiene una buena calidad, acción y aventura, espero que dure un largo tiempo. La relación del Mc con su familia, su entorno (la comunidad de la isla), la forma en la que el se integro; todo esta muy bien escrito y le da vida a la historia, además de que le aporta de manera positiva al trasfondo y le da solidez al desarrollo del personaje principal y de los personajes secundarios. desarrollo del personaje principal y de los personajes secundarios.
So after reading 11 chapters i must say its a good ff , hardly any grammar mistake or misspelling . the story itself keeps you hooked But are you dumb author kun i have seen this ff when it have 3 chapters only at that time after reading you synopsis i thought it just an another kid chilling in his free tine and he will write another two chapters and drop it, like seriously bro if you will continue writing this ff make a proper synopsis it will help you attracting audience
Okey give me more.......... ............... .......... ..... ... . ... . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . 😅😇 and it's good 👍🏽👍🏽👌🏽👌🏽
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Okay i started reading this to pass time, but.. its actually quite good. Sure its no masterpiece but a solid 4/5
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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Nice story so far Need chapter daily Jdhehdjeeoiddiidisskjeejsjskksksksksjsjsksksksjejsjsjsuesjanjshsshhssjjsjssjjssjjsjajsshdhdhdhejdjdidjhddhjejsjdjdjdjsjdjdjdjjdjsjsjdjdjdjdjdisjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsj
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mc really need to working on his physical power if he want to win against Bigmom or Kaidou. Thanks for the fic
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It's pretty good, absolutely recommended, characters are pretty good, main character is nice, background is... Well it's a one piece fanfiction so that's that. So yeah give it a try.
Autor eu sei que não e original mais não importa a tradução e uma das melhores que eu já vir só espero que mude algumas coisas e deixe mais legal e boa e faça dela sua história E mude o final foi isso que acabou com o original o autor se cansou e acabou apresado e acabou com livro Por favor autor consente o livro e faça ele melhor
I hope you change the ending, in the original the author simply got tired of the novel and made a hasty ending in 1 episode, by the way the translation is incredibly good 10/10, I have never seen a translation so well done and with so much effort, although, still So I think you should say that it is a translation and not your novel, because it totally seems like you are pretending to be the author of this novel and not a translator.
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I still haven't started reading just needed a clarification the talent he copies is just the talent right not their strength? he still need to train make those talent make them bloom ?
It's really good changes the story in a way that works and opens up plenty of opportunities. He doesn't train his family so they aren't likely to join him sadly. Still waiting for the harem tag to come in. I'm disappointed that he didn't take Nami or anyone to be in his crew yet. Especially leaving Nami to join Luffy who is a complete stranger. It's still early though so maybe he has something better planned. Seriously though it's a good read and has some good laughs as well. I highly recommend it.
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if he didn't have devil fruit coping ability then it could have been great for some reason it doesn't sit well with me .😞
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Me gusta la historia desde su comienzo, nunca había leído uno igual (la ciudad y el estado de esta además de la fortaleza que demuestra para lograr sobrevivir), eso ya nos empieza a mostrar la creatividad de este autor. El sistema no es molesto, tiene una actitud calmada y apoya al Mc. Esta historia tiene una buena calidad, acción y aventura, espero que dure un largo tiempo. La relación del Mc con su familia, su entorno (la comunidad de la isla), la forma en la que el se integro; todo esta muy bien escrito y le da vida a la historia, además de que le aporta de manera positiva al trasfondo y le da solidez al desarrollo del personaje principal y de los personajes secundarios. desarrollo del personaje principal y de los personajes secundarios.
So after reading 11 chapters i must say its a good ff , hardly any grammar mistake or misspelling . the story itself keeps you hooked But are you dumb author kun i have seen this ff when it have 3 chapters only at that time after reading you synopsis i thought it just an another kid chilling in his free tine and he will write another two chapters and drop it, like seriously bro if you will continue writing this ff make a proper synopsis it will help you attracting audience
Okey give me more.......... ............... .......... ..... ... . ... . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . 😅😇 and it's good 👍🏽👍🏽👌🏽👌🏽
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Okay i started reading this to pass time, but.. its actually quite good. Sure its no masterpiece but a solid 4/5