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I think it’s got a lot of potential and I was curious if mc will have the lifespan of a giant as well since they can live for hundreds of years.
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this is amazing. I hope he use his body as a weapon rather than devil fruit. cz in one piece the strongest weapon is the physique. I hate writer getting obsessed with devil fruit
AUTHOR YOUR FIRST NOVEL IS GEM BUT FOR YOUR SECOND NOVEL, a NARUTO romance novel TSUNADE SUMMON SESSHOMARU into Naruto world, MC WITH TEMPLATE power SYSTEM It's a fun story to read right...love to see Seshomaru in Naruto world war period. I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU..do not quit this novel it has potential, or MASS EFFECT NOVEL centered around Liara tzone with the star wars system
AUTHOR THIS IS MIEN FIRST MC GIANT NOVEL THANK YOU. AUTHOR JOYBOY WAS THE GOD OF ALL THE GIANTS IN ONE PIECE THEIR KING. HE CREATED THE ANCIENT GIANTS..AUTHOR YOUR MC HAS JOYBOY BLOOD IN HIM SO HIS HAKI IS STRONG.
Seems to be a good start. I liked the prologue especially. Seems interesting, lets see how you take this forward.
by far the biggest problem i have with this story is that he is earth human tall like aside from potentially lifespan he is just a human and in one piece he wouldn't even be a tall human like going into this i was expecting him to be short for a giant but tall for a human like in the range of 4-7 meters tall as that is even in one piece tall for a human but still tiny for a giant and even then humans still get taller than that like I'm not kidding when i say its not to uncommon for a human in one piece to reach that in height
I think it’s got a lot of potential and I was curious if mc will have the lifespan of a giant as well since they can live for hundreds of years.
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this is amazing. I hope he use his body as a weapon rather than devil fruit. cz in one piece the strongest weapon is the physique. I hate writer getting obsessed with devil fruit
AUTHOR YOUR FIRST NOVEL IS GEM BUT FOR YOUR SECOND NOVEL, a NARUTO romance novel TSUNADE SUMMON SESSHOMARU into Naruto world, MC WITH TEMPLATE power SYSTEM It's a fun story to read right...love to see Seshomaru in Naruto world war period. I HOPE THIS HELPS YOU..do not quit this novel it has potential, or MASS EFFECT NOVEL centered around Liara tzone with the star wars system
AUTHOR THIS IS MIEN FIRST MC GIANT NOVEL THANK YOU. AUTHOR JOYBOY WAS THE GOD OF ALL THE GIANTS IN ONE PIECE THEIR KING. HE CREATED THE ANCIENT GIANTS..AUTHOR YOUR MC HAS JOYBOY BLOOD IN HIM SO HIS HAKI IS STRONG.
Seems to be a good start. I liked the prologue especially. Seems interesting, lets see how you take this forward.
by far the biggest problem i have with this story is that he is earth human tall like aside from potentially lifespan he is just a human and in one piece he wouldn't even be a tall human like going into this i was expecting him to be short for a giant but tall for a human like in the range of 4-7 meters tall as that is even in one piece tall for a human but still tiny for a giant and even then humans still get taller than that like I'm not kidding when i say its not to uncommon for a human in one piece to reach that in height