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เขียนรีวิวAll im going to say is masterpiece. More seriously this is a really good book and you should definitly give it a try if you like this type of story.
<<CONTAIN SPOILERS>> Good--> The Protagonist's personality has been consistent throughout the novel. Although he is quite immature and extremely easy-going and extremely kind to everyone, there is a certain side of ruthlessness in him when it matters. So I guess that's the benefit you get from this novel. The world-building is fine. Good world-building, good history. Rankings are also good. Overall, it's a good novel. . Bad---> But what I would say is, the system given to the main character just disappears for tens of chapters. Except for the first few chapters, where the mc uses the system with a brain, I loved those chaps. He could help his sister, who was on earth with his system... i liked that. The development of the main character in terms of strength is unclear.....like.super unclear. The benefits of the system itself is quite unclear..except for the first few chaps. You can remove the entire system concept and the novel would be no different in the later parts. . For example, there is this one power the system gives.... to look into the minds of the heroines (op right??), and the main character does not use it at all.... like fucking at all!!! And just before a major incident where a whole group of people targets the MC, like basically a day before that major incident, MC suddenly remembers he got some power like this, and looks into the mind of a minor heroine, and well, the next day he is ready for the major incident. There are inconsistencies like that, inconsistencies in strength, inconsistencies in the use of the system. And the other thing I would say is, this novel contains a whole lot of overcoming obstacles through friendship and love. You know the One Piece type shit? This novel contains a fuckload of it. I'll give you an example. The woman who did not accept the love of the main character in his first life, ends up being one of his women later. . This woman, throughout like 150 chapters, was in love with the protagonist.... like the real protoganist of this world. She broke up the engagement with MC in the first few chaps too.... . So basically, this woman was in love with the protagonist in the initial timeline, fought the MC, and the MC died because of this woman. In this timeline, aka in the current story progress, this woman, throughout the novel, somehow forgets his love for the protagonist, and ends up being the main character's woman.... tf??? Another spoiler would be, the main character's grandmother attacks him, trying to kill him, because she owes some guy a favor, right? MC forgives her cuz her picture has been framed by his motner's bedside. Can you fucking believe it? . I don't know about you, but this is kind of a deal breaker for me, because it's fucking bullshit, right? . The whole lot of enemies, traitors, ends up being....through friendship, tears, and Naruto-like conversation, turn to the main character's camp. Other than that, it's an overall good novel. If the MC had a scheming side, this novel would be in ranking.
Nothinh much to say except... for the huge inconsistency between how tbe MC shd be and how he is. Apparently before he transmigrated he was living in a hellish world where the world was overrun by Zombies. Yet in this world.... he shows none of that combat perception, get flustered talking to a woman, does not have a hardened personality. For me at least.... this is not how a person who met his death under a pile of corpses should act.
One of the few books I really enjoyed in a long time. I initially assume it’s a generic transmigration story. But the author really did good job of adding all the elements of the story together. Another good thing is unlike most “extra” story the mc does not act weak and hide his strengths. We finally have a strong and confident mc. The story progresses at a decent pace and is finally coming to a well written ending. The story has it all, well liked and memorable characters, good premise, world building and good writing quality. I know this might seems odd but this is one of the books I feel like I would want to read again just because it was such a good experience. I highly recomend this book.
I like this novel a Ton but I kinda feel like if you have elves in a harem novel but you don’t put one in the harem it’s like… what are you doing? Yaknow?
To be honest, I liked your other novel but this one is something I'm disgusted with. I don't know why people like this novel, it's beyond my understanding.
This just became plain bad after around 100 chapters. The MC becoming one of those 'misery boys' finalized it. What I call a misery boy? An MC who is constantly in a position of suffering and misery. The author said they were venturing into a new genre, but old habits die hard. I can tell that whatever they were doing originally is full of this sh*t, without having to read any of the other works.
awesome story, really engaging read all chapters, waiting for new chapters to be released, also i really wanted to see what the characters would look like in real life, mainly Duchess Bellarine, so i used the novel cover illustration to get the character image created, here is the image for my fellow readers to see as well, and if the author thinks it matches what you imagined while writing then i guess you should add it on the novel page,
Author, I really like all 3 of your novels, especially this one that introduced me to your work. easily 4.6+/5, an easy recommendation.
to be honest, I started reading this on a whim, but as I read more and more chapters, I really got hooked. It's refreshing to see a mc that is not only focused on his goals but can also take care of his lovers. Another thing is the fact that the so-called lovers aren't just weak women who can't even fight, but women who can actually kill even before the mc arrive. A perfect blend of action and romance at its finest
story was alright but 18 chapters and its locked, honestly did not have enough to get any type of attachment to start buying chapters, will be dropping this here.
though the synopsis seem complex .. the author handled it with grace... the characters are vivid and not one dimensional at all... silce of life is very very well done.. only the smut scenes are bit lacking . .. but hey... we have much story to come and expect great things . ... pacing and the story telling is perfect
Não gostei de muita coisa, MC com sistema que nem serve para ele, entendo fazer pela irmã, mas chegar ao ponto de fazer só por ela ..... é no minimo estúpido, o mundo só reage ao MC e nada mais, só ele é o estranho, tendo mais uns tantos de regressores, além de forçar as heroinas para ele .... a que se dane essa novel, não recomendo, contudo leia se quiser
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Never understood the hype for the whole "solo-leveling type" shi but now I'm getting it lol. Good job. Now i feel like writing a story myself Me reading the story like:
Man i like it but well i hate misunderstanding, and so many plot holes, it feels so forced, i also hate those regressor heroine emily
The concept is pretty original, I think. There is a reincarnation into a book, so he knows what is going to happen (at first at least) and, this is amazing, at the same time there are several regressors that know the shit going on, they don't want to mess it up, and they try so hard that they fail SPECTACULARLY. It is interesting seeing the cast struggling about which path to take, how their decisions change the path, the inner conflicts. It is fast paced, with some romance and well placed snu snu, with action packed in bursts. But. Yeah, there is a dreadful BUT. The story is messy, confusing, convoluted beyond measure, at times without a single particle of logic, and pretty much frustrating and irksome. But. Yeah, there is another BUT. Despite all that, it is difficult to stop reading. I first decided to drop it, because all the nonsense, around chapter 15... and yet here I am, many chapters later, still reading this shit 😅. As strange as it may sound, give it a go.
this is a good story with a mix of action and romance. The author, even new to this, did a fantastic job, but because of that he locked chapters at around chapter 16, so be aware of that(he did it unintentionally)
Honestly speaking, many things don't make sense, like, how everyone can guess MC is someone else if they only meet him 1-2 times (for less than one hour) and why no one is suspiciously of the heroines? They are the ones that change the most... also, why they test him about being a wandering soul? Example: the princess tested him to see if he knew it about the hero, but if he really was a wandering soul = he wouldn't the plot no? cause they are outsiders, only people from their world would know what happens... another thing is: why MC doesn't use his system? makes no sense, he should be using for EVERYTHING. Many other characters do unreasonable things too, the Butler actions made no sense, the alchemist girl makes no sense either, i honestly don't understand... it's like the author is only taking in account the MC, but not anyone else, so the world reacts to the MC, but not to other people, MC actions smt makes no sense too, it's like he knows the plot but still takes stupid decisions cause reasons???? Anyway, I will keep reading cause i like the idea of going to another world as a villain, but so far this novel is very VERY bad written.
I mean it’s alright It really isn’t mindblowing re-creation of the genre. Story goes paywall before anything exceptional happens. Worldbuilding is there…nothing original nor exceptional, felt pretty average: we have OG heroines realising MC is misunderstood arc, the loyal maid, with the most unusual thing of Butler realizing MC is possesing the Young master being shoved behind paywall. Chapters if you can even call them that do feel short with average of 20 pages pre paywall, and quite steep drop to average of 17-16 after paywall. It’s alright read if you need something to stop thinking
All im going to say is masterpiece. More seriously this is a really good book and you should definitly give it a try if you like this type of story.
<<CONTAIN SPOILERS>> Good--> The Protagonist's personality has been consistent throughout the novel. Although he is quite immature and extremely easy-going and extremely kind to everyone, there is a certain side of ruthlessness in him when it matters. So I guess that's the benefit you get from this novel. The world-building is fine. Good world-building, good history. Rankings are also good. Overall, it's a good novel. . Bad---> But what I would say is, the system given to the main character just disappears for tens of chapters. Except for the first few chapters, where the mc uses the system with a brain, I loved those chaps. He could help his sister, who was on earth with his system... i liked that. The development of the main character in terms of strength is unclear.....like.super unclear. The benefits of the system itself is quite unclear..except for the first few chaps. You can remove the entire system concept and the novel would be no different in the later parts. . For example, there is this one power the system gives.... to look into the minds of the heroines (op right??), and the main character does not use it at all.... like fucking at all!!! And just before a major incident where a whole group of people targets the MC, like basically a day before that major incident, MC suddenly remembers he got some power like this, and looks into the mind of a minor heroine, and well, the next day he is ready for the major incident. There are inconsistencies like that, inconsistencies in strength, inconsistencies in the use of the system. And the other thing I would say is, this novel contains a whole lot of overcoming obstacles through friendship and love. You know the One Piece type shit? This novel contains a fuckload of it. I'll give you an example. The woman who did not accept the love of the main character in his first life, ends up being one of his women later. . This woman, throughout like 150 chapters, was in love with the protagonist.... like the real protoganist of this world. She broke up the engagement with MC in the first few chaps too.... . So basically, this woman was in love with the protagonist in the initial timeline, fought the MC, and the MC died because of this woman. In this timeline, aka in the current story progress, this woman, throughout the novel, somehow forgets his love for the protagonist, and ends up being the main character's woman.... tf??? Another spoiler would be, the main character's grandmother attacks him, trying to kill him, because she owes some guy a favor, right? MC forgives her cuz her picture has been framed by his motner's bedside. Can you fucking believe it? . I don't know about you, but this is kind of a deal breaker for me, because it's fucking bullshit, right? . The whole lot of enemies, traitors, ends up being....through friendship, tears, and Naruto-like conversation, turn to the main character's camp. Other than that, it's an overall good novel. If the MC had a scheming side, this novel would be in ranking.
Nothinh much to say except... for the huge inconsistency between how tbe MC shd be and how he is. Apparently before he transmigrated he was living in a hellish world where the world was overrun by Zombies. Yet in this world.... he shows none of that combat perception, get flustered talking to a woman, does not have a hardened personality. For me at least.... this is not how a person who met his death under a pile of corpses should act.
One of the few books I really enjoyed in a long time. I initially assume it’s a generic transmigration story. But the author really did good job of adding all the elements of the story together. Another good thing is unlike most “extra” story the mc does not act weak and hide his strengths. We finally have a strong and confident mc. The story progresses at a decent pace and is finally coming to a well written ending. The story has it all, well liked and memorable characters, good premise, world building and good writing quality. I know this might seems odd but this is one of the books I feel like I would want to read again just because it was such a good experience. I highly recomend this book.
I like this novel a Ton but I kinda feel like if you have elves in a harem novel but you don’t put one in the harem it’s like… what are you doing? Yaknow?
To be honest, I liked your other novel but this one is something I'm disgusted with. I don't know why people like this novel, it's beyond my understanding.
This just became plain bad after around 100 chapters. The MC becoming one of those 'misery boys' finalized it. What I call a misery boy? An MC who is constantly in a position of suffering and misery. The author said they were venturing into a new genre, but old habits die hard. I can tell that whatever they were doing originally is full of this sh*t, without having to read any of the other works.
awesome story, really engaging read all chapters, waiting for new chapters to be released, also i really wanted to see what the characters would look like in real life, mainly Duchess Bellarine, so i used the novel cover illustration to get the character image created, here is the image for my fellow readers to see as well, and if the author thinks it matches what you imagined while writing then i guess you should add it on the novel page,
Author, I really like all 3 of your novels, especially this one that introduced me to your work. easily 4.6+/5, an easy recommendation.
to be honest, I started reading this on a whim, but as I read more and more chapters, I really got hooked. It's refreshing to see a mc that is not only focused on his goals but can also take care of his lovers. Another thing is the fact that the so-called lovers aren't just weak women who can't even fight, but women who can actually kill even before the mc arrive. A perfect blend of action and romance at its finest
story was alright but 18 chapters and its locked, honestly did not have enough to get any type of attachment to start buying chapters, will be dropping this here.
though the synopsis seem complex .. the author handled it with grace... the characters are vivid and not one dimensional at all... silce of life is very very well done.. only the smut scenes are bit lacking . .. but hey... we have much story to come and expect great things . ... pacing and the story telling is perfect
Não gostei de muita coisa, MC com sistema que nem serve para ele, entendo fazer pela irmã, mas chegar ao ponto de fazer só por ela ..... é no minimo estúpido, o mundo só reage ao MC e nada mais, só ele é o estranho, tendo mais uns tantos de regressores, além de forçar as heroinas para ele .... a que se dane essa novel, não recomendo, contudo leia se quiser
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Never understood the hype for the whole "solo-leveling type" shi but now I'm getting it lol. Good job. Now i feel like writing a story myself Me reading the story like:
Man i like it but well i hate misunderstanding, and so many plot holes, it feels so forced, i also hate those regressor heroine emily
The concept is pretty original, I think. There is a reincarnation into a book, so he knows what is going to happen (at first at least) and, this is amazing, at the same time there are several regressors that know the shit going on, they don't want to mess it up, and they try so hard that they fail SPECTACULARLY. It is interesting seeing the cast struggling about which path to take, how their decisions change the path, the inner conflicts. It is fast paced, with some romance and well placed snu snu, with action packed in bursts. But. Yeah, there is a dreadful BUT. The story is messy, confusing, convoluted beyond measure, at times without a single particle of logic, and pretty much frustrating and irksome. But. Yeah, there is another BUT. Despite all that, it is difficult to stop reading. I first decided to drop it, because all the nonsense, around chapter 15... and yet here I am, many chapters later, still reading this shit 😅. As strange as it may sound, give it a go.
this is a good story with a mix of action and romance. The author, even new to this, did a fantastic job, but because of that he locked chapters at around chapter 16, so be aware of that(he did it unintentionally)
Honestly speaking, many things don't make sense, like, how everyone can guess MC is someone else if they only meet him 1-2 times (for less than one hour) and why no one is suspiciously of the heroines? They are the ones that change the most... also, why they test him about being a wandering soul? Example: the princess tested him to see if he knew it about the hero, but if he really was a wandering soul = he wouldn't the plot no? cause they are outsiders, only people from their world would know what happens... another thing is: why MC doesn't use his system? makes no sense, he should be using for EVERYTHING. Many other characters do unreasonable things too, the Butler actions made no sense, the alchemist girl makes no sense either, i honestly don't understand... it's like the author is only taking in account the MC, but not anyone else, so the world reacts to the MC, but not to other people, MC actions smt makes no sense too, it's like he knows the plot but still takes stupid decisions cause reasons???? Anyway, I will keep reading cause i like the idea of going to another world as a villain, but so far this novel is very VERY bad written.
I mean it’s alright It really isn’t mindblowing re-creation of the genre. Story goes paywall before anything exceptional happens. Worldbuilding is there…nothing original nor exceptional, felt pretty average: we have OG heroines realising MC is misunderstood arc, the loyal maid, with the most unusual thing of Butler realizing MC is possesing the Young master being shoved behind paywall. Chapters if you can even call them that do feel short with average of 20 pages pre paywall, and quite steep drop to average of 17-16 after paywall. It’s alright read if you need something to stop thinking
................a lot of sympathy for ethan 🥺🥺