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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.
One of the best story I have read this month,,, Nice blend of Sci-fi, power, and system... Been quite some time seeing such a fleshed out story without too much off the plot holes.. Keep it up.
Shameless review from the author here. This is a mix of sci-fi, superpowers and magic in a way I haven't seen before. Nice pacing, plot and character development. This is all original, which makes it even better. a 5/5.
Want more can't afford more going into my collection for when I got the cash. Great read pacing is slow but detail is superb. Hope I get to read more in the future keep up the good work
While I like the setting of the story I encourage the author to add some life and twists to the story instead of filling with cliches. The author should try diverge in stories and characters than just background setting from other popular tropes. Plot armor should be reduced so there’s some tension, or atleast some mystery.
One of the best story I have read this month,,, Nice blend of Sci-fi, power, and system... Been quite some time seeing such a fleshed out story without too much off the plot holes.. Keep it up.
Shameless review from the author here. This is a mix of sci-fi, superpowers and magic in a way I haven't seen before. Nice pacing, plot and character development. This is all original, which makes it even better. a 5/5.
Want more can't afford more going into my collection for when I got the cash. Great read pacing is slow but detail is superb. Hope I get to read more in the future keep up the good work