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This is pretty good compared to alot of other cultivation stories. The MC isn't controlled by women, he's OP, has a strong background and the progression isn't bad. I do feel like the first chapter is confusing amd needs rewriting. The world building needs more elaboration and detail. I want the mc to be close to his people as he treats everyone like objects even his mom. Overall I will be supporting this. please put out more.
This is pretty good compared to alot of other cultivation stories. The MC isn't controlled by women, he's OP, has a strong background and the progression isn't bad. I do feel like the first chapter is confusing amd needs rewriting. The world building needs more elaboration and detail. I want the mc to be close to his people as he treats everyone like objects even his mom. Overall I will be supporting this. please put out more.