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I like the idea but unfortunately I don't like the writing, I have read more than 30 chapters and what I have seen is a lot of MC monologues explaining events like a narrator, even during conversations I sometimes lose direction, like there are parts of the conversation missing , like suddenly the female character blushes for no reason, I actually like the selection of the Harem, it's just that the way they talk is sometimes confusing, cringy, and out of character. And the story development is very fast so I will only give stars just for the idea
update it plzz it's really good.......................................the mc has decent story dev...highly recommend for ppl who read for fun not serious ppl who always complain at the smallest detail
its not one of the best tensura fics and mc is GENDERBEND ... its quite messy written honestly only those with clear knowledge of the novel would understand , mc is basically babysitting rimaru the whole time.. and mc is only doing things so that cannon stays in place lol he never does something that so the plot will be different so its honestly boring AND the mc is a genderbend so you all know he is in a womans body getting toutched by others .. i almost barfed when i came to that chapter cause it came from nowhere with no warnings or anything .. the story itself is really messy and is on "easy mode" its really just a wish for fullment story with no hardship i only gave it 2 stars cause it made me loose my boredom for a while otherwise it would have gotten just 1 star
One of the best tensura fanfic I read, there some error but it's manageable, hope to read more chapter soon author
I like the idea but unfortunately I don't like the writing, I have read more than 30 chapters and what I have seen is a lot of MC monologues explaining events like a narrator, even during conversations I sometimes lose direction, like there are parts of the conversation missing , like suddenly the female character blushes for no reason, I actually like the selection of the Harem, it's just that the way they talk is sometimes confusing, cringy, and out of character. And the story development is very fast so I will only give stars just for the idea
update it plzz it's really good.......................................the mc has decent story dev...highly recommend for ppl who read for fun not serious ppl who always complain at the smallest detail
its not one of the best tensura fics and mc is GENDERBEND ... its quite messy written honestly only those with clear knowledge of the novel would understand , mc is basically babysitting rimaru the whole time.. and mc is only doing things so that cannon stays in place lol he never does something that so the plot will be different so its honestly boring AND the mc is a genderbend so you all know he is in a womans body getting toutched by others .. i almost barfed when i came to that chapter cause it came from nowhere with no warnings or anything .. the story itself is really messy and is on "easy mode" its really just a wish for fullment story with no hardship i only gave it 2 stars cause it made me loose my boredom for a while otherwise it would have gotten just 1 star
One of the best tensura fanfic I read, there some error but it's manageable, hope to read more chapter soon author
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdateeeeeeeeeeeee Pleeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!