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Author was cooking something with these 33 chapters😞, but it looks like he forgot about the pot on the fire😂
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Everything's great the quality of the story the character designs and plot and everuything Just had a suggestion can you make this version of Supergirl more like Powergirl cuz more powerful and big bazongas
cap 10. la verdad la historia como tal no se ve mal pero es pesada de leer, yo no soy de los que legaste las historias que van muy rápido pero esta mier#*da ya leí 10 cap y literal no a pasado nada la historia no a avanzado nada, aparte que el prota como que es medio pendejo y indeciso y sinceramente a mi no me gusta ese tipo de personajes que tienen diálogos internos por más de 70% del capítulo pensando me gustan más cuando son mas serios
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I love the concept that you used General Zod's son, and he basically became superman but is willing to kill in certain situations. I think this is way better
Haven’t read it yet and probably won’t because the mc is supposed to be Brightburn, why don’t just make him Superman? doesn’t make any sense
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He seemingly starts to do away with the whole brightburn thing not even 5 chapters in and instead makes him the son of Zod. It's like is I made a hunterxhunter fanfiction but I explained nen as being aura from rwby. you go in expecting one thing only for the author to quickly rewrite the history to be something completely different.
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I honestly enjoyed reading this and can't get enough of it keep up the good work man
Que gran fanfic no puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte También muchas gracias al autor por traer una historia tan buena No puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte .......................................................
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Writing Quality: ★★☆☆☆ - The writing is functional but lacks polish, with repetitive excuses for the male protagonist's inexperience. This becomes frustrating, especially when he misses obvious opportunities to use his abilities effectively. For instance, during the battle with the giant snake, he could have easily won by targeting its weakness with heat vision or by lobotomizing it. These missed opportunities make the writing feel sloppy and unconvincing. Story Development: ★★☆☆☆ - The story suffers from inconsistent development, particularly due to the protagonist's poor decision-making in critical moments. The fight with Omni-Man is another example where he could have strategically used heat vision to incapacitate him and prevent the massacre of the Guardians of the Globe. These lapses in logic detract from the overall narrative, making it difficult to stay engaged. Character Design: ★★☆☆☆ - The protagonist's design is flawed, as his inexperience is used as an excuse for failing to make obvious, strategic decisions. This not only weakens his character but also undermines the story. The lack of growth or learning from these mistakes further hampers his development, making him feel static and underwhelming. Updating Stability: ★★★☆☆ - Updates are relatively consistent, but the quality varies. Some chapters are rushed, with the protagonist's strategic failings feeling like plot conveniences rather than genuine character flaws. This inconsistency affects the overall narrative coherence and the reader's investment in the story. World Background: ★★★☆☆ - The world-building is serviceable but lacks depth. While the setting provides enough context for the story to unfold, the failure to integrate important details—like how the protagonist could have used his environment or powers more effectively—prevents the world from feeling fully immersive.
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Author it was okay not good not bad just okay first thing brandon has some fire abilities too along with his others second its just not very original you used man of steel ideas for most of the chapter and while Caitlin is intelligent no way in hell she made a holographic device the size of a necklace and then you killed of much of the guardians just for the plot point in the original atleast rhe guardians managed to injure nolan
Nooo en la.mejor parte terminaron los capítulos 😭😭😭😭. A decir verdad la historia está buena , es un súperheroe con clásico corazón de héroe, como manejo las cosas hasta ahora demuestra inexperiencia pero decision. Buena lectura, con la tendencia a supermanes malos y mcs odiando ser héroes y tendiendo a ser más egoístas , este se siente bien..
Can u make a story where the Mc get reborn as Superman but the storyline is the one Superman’s and Lois show
When I first started reading this I expected another generic story about a self-insert with Superman's suite of powers in the world of Invincible. And while there may be a hint of that here, I genuinely enjoy this. Every time I finish a chapter I want more and quickly scroll to the next chapter. Currently, I'm on chapter 21, and when I reached the end and realized it was the final chapter I quite literally said "No!" Author, I genuinely enjoy this story and desperately crave more! Prioritize your life over this of course but I beg of you, I need about 500 more chapters within two days. This is indeed a threat!!
Hero progression is too fast. The hero has practically no uniqueness. The author essentially took a dark imitation of Superman and molded it into a literal imitation in a world that has its own version of it. Moreover, there is a lack of both the hero's real motivation and the authenticity of his achievements.
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Hey if you’re interested in reading this book I suggest you read the tags first. Lots of reviews are giving negative responses for petty reasons, none of which have anything to do with the quality of my writing nor have any form of professional criticism. If you want to read a book about an MC going all killer mode or grey then that’s fine. This app has plenty of those especially in the DC section.
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Author was cooking something with these 33 chapters😞, but it looks like he forgot about the pot on the fire😂
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Everything's great the quality of the story the character designs and plot and everuything Just had a suggestion can you make this version of Supergirl more like Powergirl cuz more powerful and big bazongas
cap 10. la verdad la historia como tal no se ve mal pero es pesada de leer, yo no soy de los que legaste las historias que van muy rápido pero esta mier#*da ya leí 10 cap y literal no a pasado nada la historia no a avanzado nada, aparte que el prota como que es medio pendejo y indeciso y sinceramente a mi no me gusta ese tipo de personajes que tienen diálogos internos por más de 70% del capítulo pensando me gustan más cuando son mas serios
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I love the concept that you used General Zod's son, and he basically became superman but is willing to kill in certain situations. I think this is way better
Haven’t read it yet and probably won’t because the mc is supposed to be Brightburn, why don’t just make him Superman? doesn’t make any sense
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He seemingly starts to do away with the whole brightburn thing not even 5 chapters in and instead makes him the son of Zod. It's like is I made a hunterxhunter fanfiction but I explained nen as being aura from rwby. you go in expecting one thing only for the author to quickly rewrite the history to be something completely different.
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I honestly enjoyed reading this and can't get enough of it keep up the good work man
Que gran fanfic no puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte También muchas gracias al autor por traer una historia tan buena No puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte .......................................................
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Writing Quality: ★★☆☆☆ - The writing is functional but lacks polish, with repetitive excuses for the male protagonist's inexperience. This becomes frustrating, especially when he misses obvious opportunities to use his abilities effectively. For instance, during the battle with the giant snake, he could have easily won by targeting its weakness with heat vision or by lobotomizing it. These missed opportunities make the writing feel sloppy and unconvincing. Story Development: ★★☆☆☆ - The story suffers from inconsistent development, particularly due to the protagonist's poor decision-making in critical moments. The fight with Omni-Man is another example where he could have strategically used heat vision to incapacitate him and prevent the massacre of the Guardians of the Globe. These lapses in logic detract from the overall narrative, making it difficult to stay engaged. Character Design: ★★☆☆☆ - The protagonist's design is flawed, as his inexperience is used as an excuse for failing to make obvious, strategic decisions. This not only weakens his character but also undermines the story. The lack of growth or learning from these mistakes further hampers his development, making him feel static and underwhelming. Updating Stability: ★★★☆☆ - Updates are relatively consistent, but the quality varies. Some chapters are rushed, with the protagonist's strategic failings feeling like plot conveniences rather than genuine character flaws. This inconsistency affects the overall narrative coherence and the reader's investment in the story. World Background: ★★★☆☆ - The world-building is serviceable but lacks depth. While the setting provides enough context for the story to unfold, the failure to integrate important details—like how the protagonist could have used his environment or powers more effectively—prevents the world from feeling fully immersive.
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Author it was okay not good not bad just okay first thing brandon has some fire abilities too along with his others second its just not very original you used man of steel ideas for most of the chapter and while Caitlin is intelligent no way in hell she made a holographic device the size of a necklace and then you killed of much of the guardians just for the plot point in the original atleast rhe guardians managed to injure nolan
Nooo en la.mejor parte terminaron los capítulos 😭😭😭😭. A decir verdad la historia está buena , es un súperheroe con clásico corazón de héroe, como manejo las cosas hasta ahora demuestra inexperiencia pero decision. Buena lectura, con la tendencia a supermanes malos y mcs odiando ser héroes y tendiendo a ser más egoístas , este se siente bien..
Can u make a story where the Mc get reborn as Superman but the storyline is the one Superman’s and Lois show
When I first started reading this I expected another generic story about a self-insert with Superman's suite of powers in the world of Invincible. And while there may be a hint of that here, I genuinely enjoy this. Every time I finish a chapter I want more and quickly scroll to the next chapter. Currently, I'm on chapter 21, and when I reached the end and realized it was the final chapter I quite literally said "No!" Author, I genuinely enjoy this story and desperately crave more! Prioritize your life over this of course but I beg of you, I need about 500 more chapters within two days. This is indeed a threat!!
Hero progression is too fast. The hero has practically no uniqueness. The author essentially took a dark imitation of Superman and molded it into a literal imitation in a world that has its own version of it. Moreover, there is a lack of both the hero's real motivation and the authenticity of his achievements.
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Hey if you’re interested in reading this book I suggest you read the tags first. Lots of reviews are giving negative responses for petty reasons, none of which have anything to do with the quality of my writing nor have any form of professional criticism. If you want to read a book about an MC going all killer mode or grey then that’s fine. This app has plenty of those especially in the DC section.