21รีวิว
3.67
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
It good don’t believe the reviews they just want to op chapter that everything go smooth for him I tired of those, this one is good more realistic than those shit whish fulfill
I have already realized that this is not for me, the initial idea of the work is good but over time things get mixed up too much and it is noticeable that you are trying to give a work different from the others but I do not like the development that the story takes. Even so, I thank you for publishing your work.
Not worth the time. When you put too much drama and cliche romance it's become unreadable. Mc thinks he is smart but a guy with few paragraph can mess him. Not to mention he is showing symptoms of simp
I personally like the way he writes and the flow of the story. Its pretty good up until the scene between Daemon and Alicent. Now for a genuine questiont; why do people like Alicent? I don't get it at all. She literally has nothing to offer at all, but I always see SI stories choose her as the FML.
Nada que decir..........................................................................................mmm nnm. ...mmm nnm................... .... .. ...................
With each chapter you'll see IQ level goes down, rather than any good SI stories, in this one you'll only see heroic pawn mc. and MFL is alicent. Mc is also almost mirror of alicent, pawn in the game, yes man
You can't take a fic seriously when in the reviews there is the same animal placing its 5 stars 4 times 🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The reason for this is guilt that is being placed on him when he hardly any plan or process to help her, her fate was sealed the moment she got pregnant
Another gem in the making. My only critique as with The Burnt Prince, the repetitive descriptions of the MC, becomes a little annoying. Otherwise, grounded and very interesting take.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author, I am begging you to make Aegon and Rhaenyra together. Let her not get groomed in this fiction. 🙏😭
Dude all of your fanfic have one big problem with them All the MC have this one big "Hero Complex" It will be a shame if this turns out that way too.
just work on the consistency of updates otherwise loving it and get him cannibal as in it will suit the title" the bloody prince and cannibal .
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good fic although it only has 5 chapters as of now. I wouldn't be surprised if he went to go and claim Vermithor, the bronze fury, as his dragon.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I don't even have to read the first chapter to automatically know this will be a great fic . Drkest just doesn't miss
The story has relatively constant updates and the writing itself is good in comparison to many here. Still, can't really recommend it and it's definitely not for me. The romantic interests felt very poorly developed. Rhaenyra starts having some overly poetic 'true love' shtick as soon as the MC helps out and has a amicable conversation with her, the MC is head over heels at Alicent out of nowhere after a few casual conversations. And, unfortunately, said poorly developed romantic drama is a main part of the story. The MC is also the most white knight fictional knight that I've ever seen, with a chivalric sense that feels more like early GoT Sansa's dreams than any believable person. For some this could be a positive, if you wanna read about a teen girl ideal knight in Westeros fic, but for me it just felt very off in the setting. He also has zero ambition, which could be fine for me, but he also has almost no agency. Half of the story starts over something like "someone needs help... some inner monologue on why he should help... helps", so the MC feels more like a plot-device for other people's stories than a MC. We hear about how he was relevant in decision making in Runestone (his fief), but barely see it, and almost all (if not all) large plotpoints around him are focused on him caring about some else's wants.
It good don’t believe the reviews they just want to op chapter that everything go smooth for him I tired of those, this one is good more realistic than those shit whish fulfill
I have already realized that this is not for me, the initial idea of the work is good but over time things get mixed up too much and it is noticeable that you are trying to give a work different from the others but I do not like the development that the story takes. Even so, I thank you for publishing your work.
Not worth the time. When you put too much drama and cliche romance it's become unreadable. Mc thinks he is smart but a guy with few paragraph can mess him. Not to mention he is showing symptoms of simp
I personally like the way he writes and the flow of the story. Its pretty good up until the scene between Daemon and Alicent. Now for a genuine questiont; why do people like Alicent? I don't get it at all. She literally has nothing to offer at all, but I always see SI stories choose her as the FML.
Nada que decir..........................................................................................mmm nnm. ...mmm nnm................... .... .. ...................
With each chapter you'll see IQ level goes down, rather than any good SI stories, in this one you'll only see heroic pawn mc. and MFL is alicent. Mc is also almost mirror of alicent, pawn in the game, yes man
You can't take a fic seriously when in the reviews there is the same animal placing its 5 stars 4 times 🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The reason for this is guilt that is being placed on him when he hardly any plan or process to help her, her fate was sealed the moment she got pregnant
Another gem in the making. My only critique as with The Burnt Prince, the repetitive descriptions of the MC, becomes a little annoying. Otherwise, grounded and very interesting take.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author, I am begging you to make Aegon and Rhaenyra together. Let her not get groomed in this fiction. 🙏😭
Dude all of your fanfic have one big problem with them All the MC have this one big "Hero Complex" It will be a shame if this turns out that way too.
just work on the consistency of updates otherwise loving it and get him cannibal as in it will suit the title" the bloody prince and cannibal .
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good fic although it only has 5 chapters as of now. I wouldn't be surprised if he went to go and claim Vermithor, the bronze fury, as his dragon.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket]
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I don't even have to read the first chapter to automatically know this will be a great fic . Drkest just doesn't miss
The story has relatively constant updates and the writing itself is good in comparison to many here. Still, can't really recommend it and it's definitely not for me. The romantic interests felt very poorly developed. Rhaenyra starts having some overly poetic 'true love' shtick as soon as the MC helps out and has a amicable conversation with her, the MC is head over heels at Alicent out of nowhere after a few casual conversations. And, unfortunately, said poorly developed romantic drama is a main part of the story. The MC is also the most white knight fictional knight that I've ever seen, with a chivalric sense that feels more like early GoT Sansa's dreams than any believable person. For some this could be a positive, if you wanna read about a teen girl ideal knight in Westeros fic, but for me it just felt very off in the setting. He also has zero ambition, which could be fine for me, but he also has almost no agency. Half of the story starts over something like "someone needs help... some inner monologue on why he should help... helps", so the MC feels more like a plot-device for other people's stories than a MC. We hear about how he was relevant in decision making in Runestone (his fief), but barely see it, and almost all (if not all) large plotpoints around him are focused on him caring about some else's wants.