13รีวิว
4.43
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Fast-paced, That was what came to my mind after I read the novel. The author started slow and we were immediately catapulted into the meat of the story. We have Kurogane who was an orphan, his adopted father was killed forcing him to move back to Japan with his mother from America. As soon as they arrive, we started getting into the world of darkness and the vampire society. If fast pace novel and horror is your thing, give the novel a short.
had potential but was not properly developed I could tell he was trying to be mysterious but failed or could just be me
the biggest problem in this book is development I'm 13 chapters in and feel like every chapters is missing chapters worth of context, info and development certain point in this chp that should of Been the main or one of the main climax of that chapter is just glossed over this doesn't happen once is every chapeter chp13 should of been 40-60 chapters long but is forced in and removing so much just to make it 13 its rushed
The story is fast-paced but very good nonetheless. The world-building is great and so is the character development. Great work, Keep it up!!
Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming. Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!
Just started reading awesome story development ✨ 🌎 building ✨ character development 💫 it is a novel that kept reader hooked
I've just read the first 10 chapters of "The Bloodborne Heir," and I'm already hooked! The dark fantasy world is richly detailed, and the storyline is gripping. The protagonist is fascinating, and the plot is full of intriguing twists. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
why is this sooo good? they explain everything good pacing is good not fast not slow its just perfect the characters are good explained even if I am at chapter 1 already this is amezing really amezing you should read it! the author should keep up the work
An exhilarating journey through darkness and intrigue, this vampire thriller masterfully blends supernatural elements with suspense. The protagonist's hidden powers and rich world-building keep readers hooked. A must-read for fans of gripping, adventurous tales
HI guys i am writer of this novel . giving review on my own novel if you find this novel good or bad please give your review so i can learn from my mistake and do better in future
Fast-paced, That was what came to my mind after I read the novel. The author started slow and we were immediately catapulted into the meat of the story. We have Kurogane who was an orphan, his adopted father was killed forcing him to move back to Japan with his mother from America. As soon as they arrive, we started getting into the world of darkness and the vampire society. If fast pace novel and horror is your thing, give the novel a short.
had potential but was not properly developed I could tell he was trying to be mysterious but failed or could just be me
the biggest problem in this book is development I'm 13 chapters in and feel like every chapters is missing chapters worth of context, info and development certain point in this chp that should of Been the main or one of the main climax of that chapter is just glossed over this doesn't happen once is every chapeter chp13 should of been 40-60 chapters long but is forced in and removing so much just to make it 13 its rushed
The story is fast-paced but very good nonetheless. The world-building is great and so is the character development. Great work, Keep it up!!
Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming. Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!
Just started reading awesome story development ✨ 🌎 building ✨ character development 💫 it is a novel that kept reader hooked
I've just read the first 10 chapters of "The Bloodborne Heir," and I'm already hooked! The dark fantasy world is richly detailed, and the storyline is gripping. The protagonist is fascinating, and the plot is full of intriguing twists. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
why is this sooo good? they explain everything good pacing is good not fast not slow its just perfect the characters are good explained even if I am at chapter 1 already this is amezing really amezing you should read it! the author should keep up the work
An exhilarating journey through darkness and intrigue, this vampire thriller masterfully blends supernatural elements with suspense. The protagonist's hidden powers and rich world-building keep readers hooked. A must-read for fans of gripping, adventurous tales
HI guys i am writer of this novel . giving review on my own novel if you find this novel good or bad please give your review so i can learn from my mistake and do better in future