19รีวิว
4.15
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
Sangat Membosankan untuk membaca ini novel, saya merasa hambar. Mc tidak keren dan setiap tindakannya membuat saya bingung baca ini novel. Bahkan tujuannya/ motivasinya pun saya tidak tahu atau saya yang lupa. Novel ini tidak sedikit pun memberi kesan di benak saya Satu kata bosan
This is one of the most OP system i ever seen but i don't like how mc is just casually making people the primordial rank which is considered the highest in the omniverse. I stopped reading when he made others extremely op with the wave of his hands.
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Author's review, you can ask your questions here and I will answer them to the best of abilities. thank you for reading and remember drop gifts, they are my motivation.
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
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It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
I don't no what to say I read up to 29 ch and it's good not very good and there is no driving factor that hook up to the chapter to continue reading is average up to 29 cb in my view and I have I complain to a mc he distribute primordial body like free to the character do not understand their value like jack and etc. I give you that author to give him Omnipotent System but it's a waste to this type of mc and why don't he bring back his parents back to like he can do that but no he went to revenge that all.
Sangat Membosankan untuk membaca ini novel, saya merasa hambar. Mc tidak keren dan setiap tindakannya membuat saya bingung baca ini novel. Bahkan tujuannya/ motivasinya pun saya tidak tahu atau saya yang lupa. Novel ini tidak sedikit pun memberi kesan di benak saya Satu kata bosan
This is one of the most OP system i ever seen but i don't like how mc is just casually making people the primordial rank which is considered the highest in the omniverse. I stopped reading when he made others extremely op with the wave of his hands.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Author's review, you can ask your questions here and I will answer them to the best of abilities. thank you for reading and remember drop gifts, they are my motivation.
Author, could you please speed up the process? I dont like reading the Remembering The Past Chapters. It felt sad for me. Could you please tell me the synopsis of that chapter ?
Honest Review. I think the author was dripping when he wrote this novel. And most likely he forgot about Mc's powers.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It was all good for the op mc part but as i read on it started to get boring. There is nothing unique about it and i would say the story development could be better. The fight scenes needs improvement. The description of power, skills, realms etc sounds awesome but the utilisation needs work. Well you could give it a try if you want but keep your expectations in check 😆........
Author can you please release chapter from privilege condition? I want to read more
this story is good 👍👍. would have loved if you hadn't dropped your infinite system novel
Mc is very op which is good and the story is fast which I like too, but there are some chapters that are just full of information and nothing else which I dislike bit, but overall very good and chill to read!
I personally enjoyed it. I love OP characters so this is right up my alley. Even though its a little evident that AI was used. So what? The story is a little good so enjoy it. The only thing I dont like a bit is harem thing but since the story doesnt resolve around the harem its a good read. I stopped purchasing coins a while ago since the stories nowadays are utter trash. But this was worth purchasing coins for.
Author, you should write conversation between every character with a more flexible touch. Specially, the conversation between Adams and Anderson. You are not showing their natural human behaviour. Also in some chapter you didn’t explain how Anderson felt after seeing Adams newborn power against Vitto. I hope you will work MORE on subtle common sense explanation in various conversation also with more flexible touch. Not like first 10 chapters where those conversation felt like some robots are talking. This book has the potential. Specially I am liking this very much. But due to robotic conversation I am very much frustrated.. I hope you will focus in this sector so that reader like us can appreciate your efforts.[img=recommend]
Mc is the peak of existence right from the start. Love the fact that he’s originally from Nigeria.
This is a good book only if you like really and I say REALLY OP mc from the start, Adam is already broken in the second chapter so if you don't like this kind of stories this isn't for you. There are only 8 chapters so i can't say much about the plot or in wich way it will progres but i'm looking forward to more chpter, good eork author. (ps. sorry for the bad english, not my main leanguage)
I don't no what to say I read up to 29 ch and it's good not very good and there is no driving factor that hook up to the chapter to continue reading is average up to 29 cb in my view and I have I complain to a mc he distribute primordial body like free to the character do not understand their value like jack and etc. I give you that author to give him Omnipotent System but it's a waste to this type of mc and why don't he bring back his parents back to like he can do that but no he went to revenge that all.