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Good so far need more chapters the translation of the starting is dull seems like the translator hired an good editor for the novel.lol.keep it up brother I want to stop this review but this damn thing won't stop me until I submit i review a view with atleast 140 words damn. Am in a school or something writing an apology letter
only chapter 6 in and am already lamenting that of only this shit had a good translation😪😪
Story is pretty good, but the grammar is garbage. please use a qualified editor. And regular update would be much appreciated.
this story had a great concept but it's terribly done the logic is all wrong, the writing quality is bad, sad to see such a potentially great story fall flat on it's face
Thanks for the fanfiction[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Очень нравиться начало. Не знаю что будет дальше, но начало бомбическое. Отличное написание и интересный сюжет, системы не очень много, даже мало... и она не живая, что определенно плюс!
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] UPDATE MOREE CHAPTER BRO[img=golden ticket]
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Here madara is too underated I mean Even after having "MS" he can't defeat hashirama who doesn't even have wood style. yeah he didn't use "MS" abilities but "MS" doesn't mean like he will only have susano and 2 eye abilities, "MS" gives overall rise in strength but whatever and in series it was like (If madara had "MS" then hashirama had wood style and If madara has "EMS" then hashirama had sage mode) but here everything is messed up madara is too much underated and author made madara's IQ in negative so Mc can shine 🤢🤮
good enough translation quality. i hope we reach chapter 500. . . . ......................................... original - Naruto’s Eyes Emperor Izuna
What's the name of orginal translation?.......................................................................................................................
So far soo good need more chapters like this🎉😔🖤😎🙏☯️💪🎊🔥jdjdndkdnbdjdjxjndhxhxjdndnxhjdndjxjxnxndnnxjxjxxnxjhxbdndnjxjxnfnncuxjxnhxuxjxfjudjcnfhdujjfjcjfndnhxhdnduxjdjduxjjdjxjcjcjjsksksikwpskfjrudjchjdkoakxncnhfhccjkviskakxjeujdxiizjdje
Good so far need more chapters the translation of the starting is dull seems like the translator hired an good editor for the novel.lol.keep it up brother I want to stop this review but this damn thing won't stop me until I submit i review a view with atleast 140 words damn. Am in a school or something writing an apology letter
only chapter 6 in and am already lamenting that of only this shit had a good translation😪😪
Story is pretty good, but the grammar is garbage. please use a qualified editor. And regular update would be much appreciated.
this story had a great concept but it's terribly done the logic is all wrong, the writing quality is bad, sad to see such a potentially great story fall flat on it's face
Thanks for the fanfiction[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Очень нравиться начало. Не знаю что будет дальше, но начало бомбическое. Отличное написание и интересный сюжет, системы не очень много, даже мало... и она не живая, что определенно плюс!
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] UPDATE MOREE CHAPTER BRO[img=golden ticket]
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Here madara is too underated I mean Even after having "MS" he can't defeat hashirama who doesn't even have wood style. yeah he didn't use "MS" abilities but "MS" doesn't mean like he will only have susano and 2 eye abilities, "MS" gives overall rise in strength but whatever and in series it was like (If madara had "MS" then hashirama had wood style and If madara has "EMS" then hashirama had sage mode) but here everything is messed up madara is too much underated and author made madara's IQ in negative so Mc can shine 🤢🤮
good enough translation quality. i hope we reach chapter 500. . . . ......................................... original - Naruto’s Eyes Emperor Izuna
What's the name of orginal translation?.......................................................................................................................
So far soo good need more chapters like this🎉😔🖤😎🙏☯️💪🎊🔥jdjdndkdnbdjdjxjndhxhxjdndnxhjdndjxjxnxndnnxjxjxxnxjhxbdndnjxjxnfnncuxjxnhxuxjxfjudjcnfhdujjfjcjfndnhxhdnduxjdjduxjjdjxjcjcjjsksksikwpskfjrudjchjdkoakxncnhfhccjkviskakxjeujdxiizjdje