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A surprisingly engaging read,........................ .................................. ........................................................................................................................................................................................ .
It had an ending was very, very fast-paced, so a lot felt just skipped, but overall good story brilliantly well done enjoyed it alot.
It is a good read. The pace is fast though. But, is better than most of the well written unfinished/dropped fics since it is completed. In my opinion, this is a fic best for readers who do not care much about the minute information/details. A casual but regular reader. Thank you author.
To be honest it is a fascinating crossover fanfiction that seamlessly blends the dark, action-packed world of a hitman with the magical, enchanting universe of Harry Potter. The author masterfully crafts a narrative that delves into the complexities of a hitman’s life, who finds himself unexpectedly enrolled at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The story is compelling, driven by a well-developed protagonist who struggles with his past while adapting to his new magical environment. The writing is engaging, with vivid descriptions and dynamic dialogue that bring both worlds to life. MbthehunterN7 does an excellent job of maintaining the essence of the Harry Potter series while introducing a fresh, thrilling perspective through the eyes of a hitman. The character interactions are particularly noteworthy, as the protagonist’s dark past contrasts sharply with the innocence and wonder of the Hogwarts students. This juxtaposition creates a unique tension and depth to the story, making it a page-turner. Overall, “From Hitman to Hogwarts” is a must-read for fans of both action thrillers and the Harry Potter series. It’s a creative and captivating tale that explores themes of redemption, identity, and the transformative power of magic.
Glaringly obvious that it was written by an AI. Read as a fast food story and nothing more. There is nothing new, nothing different from many other HP Fanfics. Many holes in the plot. Many skipped details. Fast paced at times and slow paced at times. The story from before and after 7th year is like a different story altogether. Would have in fact enjoyed the second part as an original over this (but the brain power required to navigate and then to put it in words (to make a great story) is not common).
This story was amazing up to chapter 32. Reader, for your own good stop reading when you have ended chapter 32 and simply accept that this is the end of this wonderful story. ONLY read further if you like becoming frustrated and insane...
It was a really good story but I think the ending could of been better for example it would of been great if we can see fenrir go back in time and awaken a system but overall it was great well done 👍🏻👍🏻
Pace of the story is way too fast. Story idea isnt bad, but it feels like its missing something. There isnt anytime for events to 'breathe' so to speak and it cause character interactions to ring hollow. Towards the end of the series, I dont care about the twists or character deaths because I just dont genuinely know nor care about the characters themselves.
just lol, try not to read past chapter 3 but if you do read past that ; dont read further than chapter 38. Actually wild how an author can make a half decent book and then flush it all down the drain within 3 chapters.
Idk how to feel abt this. A bit fast paced. The mc can be considered somewhat evil yet realistic. He does what he does to get things done just probably not in the “light” way. SPOILER: Thus might break it for u but there is cheating involved in fanfic and he unites the wizarding world with normal world, breaking statute of secrecy
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The story is very fast-paced and no insight into the mc's character, like what motivates him or what he is striving for, is given. The story only glosses over what the MC does and doesn't go into why, or how which makes his absurd magical abilities like the unforgivable curses feel forced. The whole thing feels forced, not flowing like a real-life situation and even special plot points like the troll incident are glossed over, making the story feel incomplete. I will admit, I stopped reading early so it might get better later so read it if you feel it has potential.
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ChatGPT wrote this. It feels soulless. Low effort from Author. I am highly disappointed. It’s a sad reality that ChatGPT/other AI’s are going to be more common on this app now due to laziness.
At first is quite good, it enter my top 5 for HP fanfic. However after the canon, the mc that was so powerful (magic & influence) that he has eye and ear all over the world became so weak against a weak people. If you want to read and don’t get disappointed, stop around chapter 32-33.
Not for me, sorry Its more of a summary with random scenes than anything else
truly brilliant, every chapter had my full attention with a captivating choice of words, spectacular storyline, and top quality main character to back it all up.
Okay, the chapters are small, ranging from about 300 to 500 words each, and the author does not seem to know most of the plot of Harry Potter. How did he get a photographic memory? We have no idea. It feels like this is an AI-generated novel. The author seems to want to rush through the entire story. He just skips so many things. In just 20 chapters, he's already in the fourth year. He skipped all character interactions, making it boring as hell to read and annoying because of the short chapters.
honestly? best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. full disclosure, I actually hated the Harry Potter series. books or movies. but the author roped me in. I still can't stand Daphne tho
i love the quick pace the story adopts at the beginning cause let’s be honest the first 3 years at hogwarts was whack do im glad the author got it out the way and the story really takes off from the beginning shpwing the journey and work he puts in gripping our attention and im all in invested in the story its super entertaining and i recommend everyone to give it a chance
It is the best HP fan fiction I have read The character and the way he carries himself can't wait for the next chapters
The beginning of the story is a little rough but after the third year it starts to get really intriguing, with better interactions, and the writing improves a lot in quality. Great story overall so far.
Amazing simply amazing Even tho he is OP which i like he still faces some challenges and the people’s reactions to the things he do is so real. Reading this really took me in my imagination I hope the author finishes this story through. After this I cant wait to see your ideas for more stories.
This is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read this has no unnecessary plots no unnecessary chatters it's fast paced to the point fanfic and i just love the MC he is one of the best OC i have ever seen in HP fanfics.
it a great story love it. but the I not one for sad endings especially with the death of Arthur
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A surprisingly engaging read,........................ .................................. ........................................................................................................................................................................................ .
It had an ending was very, very fast-paced, so a lot felt just skipped, but overall good story brilliantly well done enjoyed it alot.
It is a good read. The pace is fast though. But, is better than most of the well written unfinished/dropped fics since it is completed. In my opinion, this is a fic best for readers who do not care much about the minute information/details. A casual but regular reader. Thank you author.
To be honest it is a fascinating crossover fanfiction that seamlessly blends the dark, action-packed world of a hitman with the magical, enchanting universe of Harry Potter. The author masterfully crafts a narrative that delves into the complexities of a hitman’s life, who finds himself unexpectedly enrolled at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The story is compelling, driven by a well-developed protagonist who struggles with his past while adapting to his new magical environment. The writing is engaging, with vivid descriptions and dynamic dialogue that bring both worlds to life. MbthehunterN7 does an excellent job of maintaining the essence of the Harry Potter series while introducing a fresh, thrilling perspective through the eyes of a hitman. The character interactions are particularly noteworthy, as the protagonist’s dark past contrasts sharply with the innocence and wonder of the Hogwarts students. This juxtaposition creates a unique tension and depth to the story, making it a page-turner. Overall, “From Hitman to Hogwarts” is a must-read for fans of both action thrillers and the Harry Potter series. It’s a creative and captivating tale that explores themes of redemption, identity, and the transformative power of magic.
Glaringly obvious that it was written by an AI. Read as a fast food story and nothing more. There is nothing new, nothing different from many other HP Fanfics. Many holes in the plot. Many skipped details. Fast paced at times and slow paced at times. The story from before and after 7th year is like a different story altogether. Would have in fact enjoyed the second part as an original over this (but the brain power required to navigate and then to put it in words (to make a great story) is not common).
This story was amazing up to chapter 32. Reader, for your own good stop reading when you have ended chapter 32 and simply accept that this is the end of this wonderful story. ONLY read further if you like becoming frustrated and insane...
It was a really good story but I think the ending could of been better for example it would of been great if we can see fenrir go back in time and awaken a system but overall it was great well done 👍🏻👍🏻
Pace of the story is way too fast. Story idea isnt bad, but it feels like its missing something. There isnt anytime for events to 'breathe' so to speak and it cause character interactions to ring hollow. Towards the end of the series, I dont care about the twists or character deaths because I just dont genuinely know nor care about the characters themselves.
just lol, try not to read past chapter 3 but if you do read past that ; dont read further than chapter 38. Actually wild how an author can make a half decent book and then flush it all down the drain within 3 chapters.
Idk how to feel abt this. A bit fast paced. The mc can be considered somewhat evil yet realistic. He does what he does to get things done just probably not in the “light” way. SPOILER: Thus might break it for u but there is cheating involved in fanfic and he unites the wizarding world with normal world, breaking statute of secrecy
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is very fast-paced and no insight into the mc's character, like what motivates him or what he is striving for, is given. The story only glosses over what the MC does and doesn't go into why, or how which makes his absurd magical abilities like the unforgivable curses feel forced. The whole thing feels forced, not flowing like a real-life situation and even special plot points like the troll incident are glossed over, making the story feel incomplete. I will admit, I stopped reading early so it might get better later so read it if you feel it has potential.
It can be read up to chapter 38, the rest is just written to make it longer.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
ChatGPT wrote this. It feels soulless. Low effort from Author. I am highly disappointed. It’s a sad reality that ChatGPT/other AI’s are going to be more common on this app now due to laziness.
At first is quite good, it enter my top 5 for HP fanfic. However after the canon, the mc that was so powerful (magic & influence) that he has eye and ear all over the world became so weak against a weak people. If you want to read and don’t get disappointed, stop around chapter 32-33.
Not for me, sorry Its more of a summary with random scenes than anything else
truly brilliant, every chapter had my full attention with a captivating choice of words, spectacular storyline, and top quality main character to back it all up.
Okay, the chapters are small, ranging from about 300 to 500 words each, and the author does not seem to know most of the plot of Harry Potter. How did he get a photographic memory? We have no idea. It feels like this is an AI-generated novel. The author seems to want to rush through the entire story. He just skips so many things. In just 20 chapters, he's already in the fourth year. He skipped all character interactions, making it boring as hell to read and annoying because of the short chapters.
honestly? best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. full disclosure, I actually hated the Harry Potter series. books or movies. but the author roped me in. I still can't stand Daphne tho
i love the quick pace the story adopts at the beginning cause let’s be honest the first 3 years at hogwarts was whack do im glad the author got it out the way and the story really takes off from the beginning shpwing the journey and work he puts in gripping our attention and im all in invested in the story its super entertaining and i recommend everyone to give it a chance
It is the best HP fan fiction I have read The character and the way he carries himself can't wait for the next chapters
The beginning of the story is a little rough but after the third year it starts to get really intriguing, with better interactions, and the writing improves a lot in quality. Great story overall so far.
Amazing simply amazing Even tho he is OP which i like he still faces some challenges and the people’s reactions to the things he do is so real. Reading this really took me in my imagination I hope the author finishes this story through. After this I cant wait to see your ideas for more stories.
This is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read this has no unnecessary plots no unnecessary chatters it's fast paced to the point fanfic and i just love the MC he is one of the best OC i have ever seen in HP fanfics.
it a great story love it. but the I not one for sad endings especially with the death of Arthur
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