Reviews of In The Shadow of Death: The Villain's Survival by Rayen_Yeager - Webnovel

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Ygreat
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Why is it, in most novels where the MC transmigrates into the novel/game, the MC takes possession of the body of an incompetent noble Duke/prince? Honestly, I don't like that, I prefer MCs who assume their own orphan or fake identity

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
unknown_00001

the novel is perfect, but the only problem here is the grammar problem, also, the author should be careful between the normal discussions and the characters' thoughts (especially in the last chapters), because it makes reading the last chapters a a little confusing, I don't know if the author uses AI to help him or if he simply decided to change his writing but I recommend writing like in the first chapters because it's much better. in short, regarding the novel I cannot give a detailed review since the novel is only at the beginning, but apart from some problems with grammar and dialogue, the novel is on the right track. (PS: I hope the author doesn't sabotage the novel with the harem 😟)

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Elsuika

it's good but sometimes there's no punctuation mark and he and she are swapped also in dialogues we sometimes don't understand who is taking

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
otako4ever

This novel has everything I want, please don't stop posting

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Flach0019

probably one of the most reincarnated into Villan I like this novel so much, keep up

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lucas_Morningstar

I love this novel. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ygreat
LV 13 Badge

Why is it, in most novels where the MC transmigrates into the novel/game, the MC takes possession of the body of an incompetent noble Duke/prince? Honestly, I don't like that, I prefer MCs who assume their own orphan or fake identity

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
unknown_00001

the novel is perfect, but the only problem here is the grammar problem, also, the author should be careful between the normal discussions and the characters' thoughts (especially in the last chapters), because it makes reading the last chapters a a little confusing, I don't know if the author uses AI to help him or if he simply decided to change his writing but I recommend writing like in the first chapters because it's much better. in short, regarding the novel I cannot give a detailed review since the novel is only at the beginning, but apart from some problems with grammar and dialogue, the novel is on the right track. (PS: I hope the author doesn't sabotage the novel with the harem 😟)

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Elsuika

it's good but sometimes there's no punctuation mark and he and she are swapped also in dialogues we sometimes don't understand who is taking

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
otako4ever

This novel has everything I want, please don't stop posting

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Flach0019

probably one of the most reincarnated into Villan I like this novel so much, keep up

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lucas_Morningstar

I love this novel. it's a masterpiece although I've seen the idea in some other books it's still amazing reading it. Please don't stop updating

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ