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Good story, like it so far. Especially how mc is really showing how incompetent Vought Heroes are. Only thing I dislike is how Clark seemed to struggle against Homelander when he should absolutely body him. Does this Homelander have equal strength to a kryptonian? Also hope kryptonite isn’t a thing here but meh, we’ll see
Nice work, sounds good. But instead of a clash between an implausible comic and human realities, we have a beautiful-sounding chimera. The author took two canons and, according to his idea, knocked them down with a hammer and nails. And I sawed off and sanded all the sharp corners, but the geometry of the joining seam was crooked. This was written for the sake of the plot, not the story of the characters (ugh).
I am very happy with this novel I always love a super man fanfic of any kind I love how we finally got a hero instead of a guy who just gets a harem and is evil thanks
Yes. More! More!! MORE!!! Please...You're doing amazing with this story. Five chapter so quickly and while short, they're impactful. And with Season 4 over, I'm glad to see you added Firecracker and hopefully with Clark's interaction she'll be different and a good hero. Please do that and have him help Sage as well. He'll need a brain!! Keep it up!!
More! More!! MORE!!! Great story and great start!! Please continue and keep it going. So few stories in the Boys universe and even fewer of them continue on so please keep going.
really good job so far, i love the portrayal of the superman full of hope, I can't wait for more
keep the chapter coming. there are no good superman in the boys fics that are regularly updated. so I hope you keep writing 😁
This is a well written story, anyone who wants a good story about superman in the boys world, can certainly find satisfaction in this. But I did notice something. I did once, for fun, try to make create a story using Ai, and iIdid notice a pattern when the story was made by Ai, the chapters usually started with a place, for example, "on a sunny day in snallville, Kansas..." and the chapters often ended with "this event would unfold in a way that no one would expect, it would form who he is, as a hero and as the man of tomorrow." or "this event would one day be remember as the staring point of his grandeur" etc. I did find these two patterns in this story, so I have to ask, is this an Ai story? or did you write it yourself? I dont' really care but I am curious.
Good story, like it so far. Especially how mc is really showing how incompetent Vought Heroes are. Only thing I dislike is how Clark seemed to struggle against Homelander when he should absolutely body him. Does this Homelander have equal strength to a kryptonian? Also hope kryptonite isn’t a thing here but meh, we’ll see
Nice work, sounds good. But instead of a clash between an implausible comic and human realities, we have a beautiful-sounding chimera. The author took two canons and, according to his idea, knocked them down with a hammer and nails. And I sawed off and sanded all the sharp corners, but the geometry of the joining seam was crooked. This was written for the sake of the plot, not the story of the characters (ugh).
I am very happy with this novel I always love a super man fanfic of any kind I love how we finally got a hero instead of a guy who just gets a harem and is evil thanks
Yes. More! More!! MORE!!! Please...You're doing amazing with this story. Five chapter so quickly and while short, they're impactful. And with Season 4 over, I'm glad to see you added Firecracker and hopefully with Clark's interaction she'll be different and a good hero. Please do that and have him help Sage as well. He'll need a brain!! Keep it up!!
More! More!! MORE!!! Great story and great start!! Please continue and keep it going. So few stories in the Boys universe and even fewer of them continue on so please keep going.
really good job so far, i love the portrayal of the superman full of hope, I can't wait for more
keep the chapter coming. there are no good superman in the boys fics that are regularly updated. so I hope you keep writing 😁
This is a well written story, anyone who wants a good story about superman in the boys world, can certainly find satisfaction in this. But I did notice something. I did once, for fun, try to make create a story using Ai, and iIdid notice a pattern when the story was made by Ai, the chapters usually started with a place, for example, "on a sunny day in snallville, Kansas..." and the chapters often ended with "this event would unfold in a way that no one would expect, it would form who he is, as a hero and as the man of tomorrow." or "this event would one day be remember as the staring point of his grandeur" etc. I did find these two patterns in this story, so I have to ask, is this an Ai story? or did you write it yourself? I dont' really care but I am curious.