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Really tried getting into this story but main goddess (Hestia) is very OCC and not in a good way unfortunately. It just keeps distracting from the story everytime she acts out of character which has been everytime she is on screen.
I wonder if the protagonist will also have a cool lore in this world literally to be able to explain the powersI could make him a succubus, you know?it would be fucking awesome
It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.
If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing
I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.
I like everything, I’ve read up to 40 chapters, just please add sperm control to the main character’s system, more precisely pregnancy control.)
Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.
Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute
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this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.
If you are a fan of Danmachi and like to read an alternative version, this is your story :)
before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea
I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)
Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅
Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.
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way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺
A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?
If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.
Really tried getting into this story but main goddess (Hestia) is very OCC and not in a good way unfortunately. It just keeps distracting from the story everytime she acts out of character which has been everytime she is on screen.
I wonder if the protagonist will also have a cool lore in this world literally to be able to explain the powersI could make him a succubus, you know?it would be fucking awesome
It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.
If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing
I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.
I like everything, I’ve read up to 40 chapters, just please add sperm control to the main character’s system, more precisely pregnancy control.)
Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.
Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute
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this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.
If you are a fan of Danmachi and like to read an alternative version, this is your story :)
before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea
I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)
Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅
Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.
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way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺
A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?
If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.