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เขียนรีวิวPinto_sh giving 5 Stars to his fiction and here are some things about High School DxD: Supreme Harem; Mob TO Alpha MC, Huge Harem of Beautiful Wives, Grayfia Lucifuge is not Married, Smut with Plot, Hentai Waifus, [Read it for More...]
Warning!!! Those who don't like Yuri in Harem, be warned, there is Yuri in MCs harem, that's the reason why I stopped reading this novel. I don't have anything against Yuri per se, but in my Opinion Yuri doesn't belong in a Harem. But the story until now was very hot, so keep up the work Author.
I like it. Could use some tweaks in editing. But the sluttiness/Lemons in this….truly satisfactory in my opinion. Do not drop this book keep them chapters coming.
Until ch.16? Wow. Amazing take on DXD. Fresh, original, plot, with a great storytelling and everything. Chapter 16 is when all goes down-hill, or rather, fall from the cliff [SPOILER ALERT] when the character revealed to be issei :/ choose to be a devil -.- enter the usual plot-line :x and just a complete loss of what was till that moment. I still tried to keep on reading, but it was rly bad. Wish you re-edit, re-think, by using the fresh start you had, and instead of going issei-route you'll continue the unique take you had in the start.
gotta make this review to balance out my overrated review becauss the author create changes without proper logic and inaccurate lore.
The story uses too much pornographic logic and is predictable without any likable characters, The only decent aspect of this story is the updating stability. However, I predict that the author will delete this review just like he has done with other critics without considering their thoughts.
Buen ff no lo abandones y esta vez terminalo pls ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the legend is back. it would be nice if the author release all those deleted chapters wholly instead of starting from 1 again. at this rate it will take whole year to be back what it once was.
Pinto_sh giving 5 Stars to his fiction and here are some things about High School DxD: Supreme Harem; Mob TO Alpha MC, Huge Harem of Beautiful Wives, Grayfia Lucifuge is not Married, Smut with Plot, Hentai Waifus, [Read it for More...]
Warning!!! Those who don't like Yuri in Harem, be warned, there is Yuri in MCs harem, that's the reason why I stopped reading this novel. I don't have anything against Yuri per se, but in my Opinion Yuri doesn't belong in a Harem. But the story until now was very hot, so keep up the work Author.
I like it. Could use some tweaks in editing. But the sluttiness/Lemons in this….truly satisfactory in my opinion. Do not drop this book keep them chapters coming.
Until ch.16? Wow. Amazing take on DXD. Fresh, original, plot, with a great storytelling and everything. Chapter 16 is when all goes down-hill, or rather, fall from the cliff [SPOILER ALERT] when the character revealed to be issei :/ choose to be a devil -.- enter the usual plot-line :x and just a complete loss of what was till that moment. I still tried to keep on reading, but it was rly bad. Wish you re-edit, re-think, by using the fresh start you had, and instead of going issei-route you'll continue the unique take you had in the start.
gotta make this review to balance out my overrated review becauss the author create changes without proper logic and inaccurate lore.
The story uses too much pornographic logic and is predictable without any likable characters, The only decent aspect of this story is the updating stability. However, I predict that the author will delete this review just like he has done with other critics without considering their thoughts.
Buen ff no lo abandones y esta vez terminalo pls ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
the legend is back. it would be nice if the author release all those deleted chapters wholly instead of starting from 1 again. at this rate it will take whole year to be back what it once was.