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Hmm here what I think so far. Story it self is pretty boring at the start not much happen but him shaking in his boots and a pink demon sad jokes that just gets annoying or how he can't really do much by him self or think for himself always need someone to hold his hand or make plans for him geez when u think about it he's pretty sad. Only thing I enjoy so far is he's starting to think more like a Villain if he grows from here and stop depending on others i might actually enjoy this more. I do recommend this it's not that bad to past the time it gotten a bit better where I'm at unless something happen it might actually become a really good read i hope haven't seen a hero to villain clash yet.
The Writing and humor is very funny/amusing it’s world setting and writing style is pretty detailed for a Webnovel story keep up the good work !
Actually good novel. Gets you immersed in the story. Moves kinda slow, but the writing makes each chapter engaging and interesting, and you don't feel bored. Author 👍👍👍
Pathetic protagonist. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Great story, are there any character images, and if yes where can we find them?
So far I like the plot, steady pace of the story is good, the smut scene should have later in the story not so early, but overall great writing 😃. Thank you for your hard work author 🙏
Perfection. Chef’s kiss. Just wish the author interacted with his community a bit more but hey, maybe he’s a busy man.
Honestly this book is the entire reason I have this app downloaded. The characters of this book are very vibrant in their own ways and add lots of flavor to the chapters. The dialogue between the characters are never boring and always make me laugh or have me immersed. We haven’t gotten a whole lot of information about the world but you can already tell it’s story is in a super powered world. The main character himself is relateable and acts quite how any person would. He’s doesn’t overreact to silly things like most of the MCs on this platform. He doesn’t back down and actually stands up for himself without being edgy. I didn’t type much for this book are I would have a whole essay to be read lol. Overall I say this book is one of the tops in this app for me and would like to wish the Author well for bringing out this masterpiece in the making.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Interesting premise, keep up the great work [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I’ve noticed most Webnovel books don’t clunk up their synopsis with what the story entails like most traditional books and instead the author gives a personal review to explain a few things… often very shamelessly too. So here I am to try and do the same, hopefully this review saves you the time if the book isn’t what you’re looking for. Writing Quality: You’ll come across very mistakes in the story and though I’m no English scholar, I think the grammar is at worst average. So no worries here. Update Stability: 7 or more chapters each week. More if power stone goals are met or gifts are given. I’m sweet like that. Story Development: This where things get tricky. The story is slice of life but don’t let that fool into thinking we’ll just be seeing the MC do mundane things over and over again. The story is a comedy first, urban progression second and slice of life third. In summary, this story doesn’t take itself at all seriously and that’s intentional. It’s a slow but entertaining journey of the MC in a very ‘unique’ world. World Background: Speaking of world, this is perhaps one of the stories biggest selling points in my personal opinion. It takes place in an alternate reality that will seem very familiar and unfamiliar at the same time. If you read the disclaimer and understand it then you already know how fun of a world this will be to see. To give a hint, imagine our current world was one where superhumans existed and are solid part of society. This may be the most love/hate aspect of the story as some may find it annoying while others incredibly entertaining, we shall wait and see. Character Design: I promise all shapes and sizes but I know that’s not what this means so I’ll explain the more boring stuff. The characters are well thought out and I’ve got to great lengths to ensure they don’t seem two dimensional in the least. I of course can’t do this for every single character in the story to the same extent but you get what I mean. All in all, I’d say give this a try and see for yourself. The chapters are all free as of this comment. If it’s not for you, just leave it. If you like it but hate certain aspects, lemme know in a comment or review and if you love it, also lemme know, it’s nice to know my work is appreciated and motivates me to write more. Whoever sees this and doesn’t read 20 chapters of the book is gae.
Hmm here what I think so far. Story it self is pretty boring at the start not much happen but him shaking in his boots and a pink demon sad jokes that just gets annoying or how he can't really do much by him self or think for himself always need someone to hold his hand or make plans for him geez when u think about it he's pretty sad. Only thing I enjoy so far is he's starting to think more like a Villain if he grows from here and stop depending on others i might actually enjoy this more. I do recommend this it's not that bad to past the time it gotten a bit better where I'm at unless something happen it might actually become a really good read i hope haven't seen a hero to villain clash yet.
The Writing and humor is very funny/amusing it’s world setting and writing style is pretty detailed for a Webnovel story keep up the good work !
Actually good novel. Gets you immersed in the story. Moves kinda slow, but the writing makes each chapter engaging and interesting, and you don't feel bored. Author 👍👍👍
Pathetic protagonist. 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Great story, are there any character images, and if yes where can we find them?
So far I like the plot, steady pace of the story is good, the smut scene should have later in the story not so early, but overall great writing 😃. Thank you for your hard work author 🙏
Perfection. Chef’s kiss. Just wish the author interacted with his community a bit more but hey, maybe he’s a busy man.
Honestly this book is the entire reason I have this app downloaded. The characters of this book are very vibrant in their own ways and add lots of flavor to the chapters. The dialogue between the characters are never boring and always make me laugh or have me immersed. We haven’t gotten a whole lot of information about the world but you can already tell it’s story is in a super powered world. The main character himself is relateable and acts quite how any person would. He’s doesn’t overreact to silly things like most of the MCs on this platform. He doesn’t back down and actually stands up for himself without being edgy. I didn’t type much for this book are I would have a whole essay to be read lol. Overall I say this book is one of the tops in this app for me and would like to wish the Author well for bringing out this masterpiece in the making.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Interesting premise, keep up the great work [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I’ve noticed most Webnovel books don’t clunk up their synopsis with what the story entails like most traditional books and instead the author gives a personal review to explain a few things… often very shamelessly too. So here I am to try and do the same, hopefully this review saves you the time if the book isn’t what you’re looking for. Writing Quality: You’ll come across very mistakes in the story and though I’m no English scholar, I think the grammar is at worst average. So no worries here. Update Stability: 7 or more chapters each week. More if power stone goals are met or gifts are given. I’m sweet like that. Story Development: This where things get tricky. The story is slice of life but don’t let that fool into thinking we’ll just be seeing the MC do mundane things over and over again. The story is a comedy first, urban progression second and slice of life third. In summary, this story doesn’t take itself at all seriously and that’s intentional. It’s a slow but entertaining journey of the MC in a very ‘unique’ world. World Background: Speaking of world, this is perhaps one of the stories biggest selling points in my personal opinion. It takes place in an alternate reality that will seem very familiar and unfamiliar at the same time. If you read the disclaimer and understand it then you already know how fun of a world this will be to see. To give a hint, imagine our current world was one where superhumans existed and are solid part of society. This may be the most love/hate aspect of the story as some may find it annoying while others incredibly entertaining, we shall wait and see. Character Design: I promise all shapes and sizes but I know that’s not what this means so I’ll explain the more boring stuff. The characters are well thought out and I’ve got to great lengths to ensure they don’t seem two dimensional in the least. I of course can’t do this for every single character in the story to the same extent but you get what I mean. All in all, I’d say give this a try and see for yourself. The chapters are all free as of this comment. If it’s not for you, just leave it. If you like it but hate certain aspects, lemme know in a comment or review and if you love it, also lemme know, it’s nice to know my work is appreciated and motivates me to write more. Whoever sees this and doesn’t read 20 chapters of the book is gae.