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Your worst story yet. Its alright but its quality doesn’t hold up to the former ones.
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Proper tags or titles pls. Dragons are dead for years in asoif.... Thought it was a wrong chapter or a word count but.... it's clearly not a story of anyone in Robert's immediate family .
the Mc is not great, since the author says one thing, but does another thing, which goes against his character building of the Mc, but everything else seems find, his mc is the only being ooc which is such a bad thing, but since this fic is one of the few Green side Si fics from the hundreds of pro black fics, so ill keep reading currently at chapter 7
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I really thought it would be a baratheon SI at first but its not. The mc is a son of viserys and alicent, he supports the greens. Peak writing I hope you finish this story.
Your worst story yet. Its alright but its quality doesn’t hold up to the former ones.
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Proper tags or titles pls. Dragons are dead for years in asoif.... Thought it was a wrong chapter or a word count but.... it's clearly not a story of anyone in Robert's immediate family .
the Mc is not great, since the author says one thing, but does another thing, which goes against his character building of the Mc, but everything else seems find, his mc is the only being ooc which is such a bad thing, but since this fic is one of the few Green side Si fics from the hundreds of pro black fics, so ill keep reading currently at chapter 7
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I really thought it would be a baratheon SI at first but its not. The mc is a son of viserys and alicent, he supports the greens. Peak writing I hope you finish this story.
great, finally someone who gives Rhaenrya what she deserves