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the story and plot is interesting and well put it's okay in it's entirety but some points of criticism remain like why the hell is the ancient one not the first person they came in contact with. I know you're trying to further the story line but please don't overcrowd the POV's . Please stop with the wall of text before every chapter or try to shorten it it interferes with the flow of the book and the immersion for people like me who use the listening function of webnovel to listen to your book during work. Thank you for your book.
please read " Minecraft in essos" before this, this book is a linear story from that one. só it startup in GOT with minecraft powers and ended up in marvel.
Honestly this is extremely confusing, I saw some other comments that you said you were posting this because there is already a lot of information on Patreon regarding the history of Minecraft, although still incomplete, but for those of us who have limited access it makes no sense at all.. Looking from a logical point of view, if this is based on another story of yours, we would need to start at least from a point where we would understand what is happening, prior knowledge, the way we are getting here we don't even know half of the entire state of everything…. the story basically took a lot of disconnected information, threw it in our faces and said “I don’t care if you understand, this happens”. It's impossible to read this and hope to understand something without the author finishing his other story, and considering his frequency of posts and some spoilers we had here, maybe he'll finish it next year, until then I wouldn't risk reading this here. Sorry, I like your work and I don't want to discourage you, but it was a bad idea to post this without finishing the other story
This is Gold or in this case Netherite... Author, this is an amazing piece of literature amd flawless as well. Can't wait to see how they adapt their resources to modern equipment!!!!
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I like it but I think u should have done this after u completed ur previous book nevertheless it is an amazing book everyone should totally try this book but in my personal opinion the dialogue is a bit stiff and u totally ruined the surprise of who MC's love interest was gonna be for ur pervious book and I leave with wishing u luck on being able to keep stable update schedule for both books
The prologue for this is that a guy has a power which can manipulate realty like Minecraft creative mode. His personality is written well, the plot and worldbuilding are alright and the grammar is neat.
I love the idea of minecraft in Marvel, and also, xandar could use redstone to power guns and atomic bombs
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the story and plot is interesting and well put it's okay in it's entirety but some points of criticism remain like why the hell is the ancient one not the first person they came in contact with. I know you're trying to further the story line but please don't overcrowd the POV's . Please stop with the wall of text before every chapter or try to shorten it it interferes with the flow of the book and the immersion for people like me who use the listening function of webnovel to listen to your book during work. Thank you for your book.
please read " Minecraft in essos" before this, this book is a linear story from that one. só it startup in GOT with minecraft powers and ended up in marvel.
Honestly this is extremely confusing, I saw some other comments that you said you were posting this because there is already a lot of information on Patreon regarding the history of Minecraft, although still incomplete, but for those of us who have limited access it makes no sense at all.. Looking from a logical point of view, if this is based on another story of yours, we would need to start at least from a point where we would understand what is happening, prior knowledge, the way we are getting here we don't even know half of the entire state of everything…. the story basically took a lot of disconnected information, threw it in our faces and said “I don’t care if you understand, this happens”. It's impossible to read this and hope to understand something without the author finishing his other story, and considering his frequency of posts and some spoilers we had here, maybe he'll finish it next year, until then I wouldn't risk reading this here. Sorry, I like your work and I don't want to discourage you, but it was a bad idea to post this without finishing the other story
This is Gold or in this case Netherite... Author, this is an amazing piece of literature amd flawless as well. Can't wait to see how they adapt their resources to modern equipment!!!!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like it but I think u should have done this after u completed ur previous book nevertheless it is an amazing book everyone should totally try this book but in my personal opinion the dialogue is a bit stiff and u totally ruined the surprise of who MC's love interest was gonna be for ur pervious book and I leave with wishing u luck on being able to keep stable update schedule for both books
The prologue for this is that a guy has a power which can manipulate realty like Minecraft creative mode. His personality is written well, the plot and worldbuilding are alright and the grammar is neat.
I love the idea of minecraft in Marvel, and also, xandar could use redstone to power guns and atomic bombs
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