บท 1: prologue
First time I'm making a fanfic. This is all just cannon so give it a skim so you get where the plot is at. This fic starts at episode 52 in Naruto.
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In the konoha hospital Naruto was as loud and abnoxious as usual, asking a receptionist about sasuke" Hey where's Sasuke's room" but was promptly told
" Sorry~ no visitors allowed".
"WHAT? no visitors allowed are you kidding me?"Naruto was frustrated he couldn't even drop in for a peek? Damn it!!." Those are the rules" a calm reply from the lady left no room for arguments."GAH, come on lady!"
"Naruto this is a hospital keep it down" kakashi hatake walked into the lobby and reprimanded Naruto for his loud mouth. Naruto simply ignored him "Boy am I glad to see you. I gotta ask you a favour"
" Stopright there I already know what you're gonna ask, so I've been looking for someone that can oversee your training for the final rounds" even with kakashi's face mostly covered you could tell that he couldnt care less with his tone alone."Hold ooon, How come you can't train me sensei" he points his finger at kakashi. The frustration in his voice as clear as the confusion on his face.
"I have other matters to handle, I don't have time to deal with you Naruto". Naruto scrunched his face while crossing his arms "Hmmm...., HEY YOURE GONNA TRAIN SASUKE ARENT YOU KAKASHI SENSEI". "Now now don't complain I found you a teacher even better than me". "Well, who is it?"
"It is I" a familiar figure walked in behind Naruto right on Que.Naruto turned around to see who was gonna train him.
" YOU! YOU CLOSET PERVERT" Naruto could recognise him instantly.it was ebisu a special jonin put incharge of training the Hokage's grandson konohamaru!
Ebisu pushed his glasses back onto his nose signaling his distaste of naruto's bold statement in a public space"Such insolence".
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A while later
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Naruto's training with ebisu began. Previously kakashi taught Naruto and Sasuke how you walk on walls by the use of Chakra focused on the sole of his feet. Ebisu took that to a whole other level, water walking. This was a training method that would improve naruto's Chakra control it wasn't something you could force your way through it took far more control and focus than tree walking. They trained over a hot spring and everytime Naruto lost control he fell in and submerged himself in the near boiling stream of water.
While ebisu was watching over Naruto he began acknowledging him. He saw beyond the demon that is with in him and found there was more to him. When Ebisu came back to his senses he saw Naruto barely standing on the water while he pointed to a direction behind him. As ebisu looked back he saw someone sitting on the ground. A smug smile creeped it's way on his face.
" Hmph, are you peeking in the woman's bath old man" ebisu charged forth " I WILL NOT ALLOW ANY DISREPUTABLE BEHAVIOR" the old man turns around to face ebisu and held up a single hand seal"Oh please"
*poof*
Suddenly out of nowhere a toad appeared under the old man "what on earth" while still charging ahead ebisu could only say a few words before the toad ensnared him with its tongue and slammed him into the ground knocking him out cold.
Naruto was shocked it happened so fast he couldn't keep up.'Who is this guy he flattened my trainer, and what worse he's an even bigger perv than ebisu'.
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