5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
The story is great and really draws you in. The update schedule is alright, but the "incomplete" uploads are irritating at times. I would suggest that the author complete the chapters first in a word doc, then upload them. outside of that gripe, excellent series so far!
At Chapter 40, I find myself enjoying the unfolding narrative. The story feels like a serene journey through the protagonist's daily life, devoid of major story arcs or deep dives into the world's mechanics, including its magic systems. The lack of detailed exposition creates an air of mystery, which, while intriguing, leaves much to the imagination. The concept behind the story is solid, offering a refreshing break with its tranquil narrative. I anticipate more world-building and eagerly await a significant event to propel the plot forward. Each chapter has been deliberate in its pacing, focusing more on the mundane than on action, drama, or excitement. I look forward to delving deeper into the story, hoping to uncover more layers of its world and witness the evolution of its characters in chapters to come.
I’m enjoying the story so far, the only issue is with the upload speed and the incomplete chapters
The story is great and really draws you in. The update schedule is alright, but the "incomplete" uploads are irritating at times. I would suggest that the author complete the chapters first in a word doc, then upload them. outside of that gripe, excellent series so far!
At Chapter 40, I find myself enjoying the unfolding narrative. The story feels like a serene journey through the protagonist's daily life, devoid of major story arcs or deep dives into the world's mechanics, including its magic systems. The lack of detailed exposition creates an air of mystery, which, while intriguing, leaves much to the imagination. The concept behind the story is solid, offering a refreshing break with its tranquil narrative. I anticipate more world-building and eagerly await a significant event to propel the plot forward. Each chapter has been deliberate in its pacing, focusing more on the mundane than on action, drama, or excitement. I look forward to delving deeper into the story, hoping to uncover more layers of its world and witness the evolution of its characters in chapters to come.
I’m enjoying the story so far, the only issue is with the upload speed and the incomplete chapters