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Rain poured down, mingling with the blood that soaked the ground. Death and loss surrounded a girl clutching a long katana. Her black hair framed two long red horns protruding from her head—she was an Oni, a rare evolution of the ogre species.
She stared at the monster that had destroyed everything—her friends, her family, her home. It resembled a dragon but was something else entirely, its form shifting between liquid and solid blackness.
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The book is good, I like where this story is going. However I have one minor problem. The dialogue is abit stiff and way too formal between characters. That’s the only problem I have with it’s if you could change that then the story would be getting 5 stars through and through. Overall 4/5.
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here's my honest review the story is good but there were typing errors that i saw
จำนวน 1
- 1 1. Loss 4 months ago
- 2 2. Acheron 4 months ago
- 3 3. Departure 4 months ago
- 4 4. Chaotic Interrogacion 4 months ago
- 5 Skill sheet 4 months ago
- 6 5. Last dance 3 months ago
- 7 6. Sword to sword 3 months ago
- 8 7. Coincidence, I think not! 3 months ago
- 9 8. Guardianship 3 months ago
- 10 9. Brings back memories 3 months ago
- 11 10. I see no problem here 3 months ago
- 12 11. Common sense 3 months ago
- 13 12. A bird needs to leave it's nest 3 months ago
- 14 13. Cook of cooks 3 months ago
- 15 14. Little exercise 3 months ago
- 16 15. Good Morning 3 months ago
- 17 16. Rampage 3 months ago
- 18 17. After fight 3 months ago
- 19 18. Why do we cook bacon and bake cookies? 3 months ago
- 20 19. Horny jail 3 months ago
- 21 20. Lizard 4 days ago
- 22 21. Family 3 days ago
I will add it to my collection for now and see if you will continue or drop it if you do continue I will read it after it has 20+ chapters. I hope you don't drop it and good luck