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I read Fanfics all day every day, after all when you have stage 4 kidney failure for over 5 years and counting, you get ALOT of reading time to your self , so I've read alot Fanfics about rimuru and the tensura world. It's my number 1 Fanfics search, but i am not saying I'm sum sorta expert. I've just read a lot Fanfics about Rimuru Tempest. I love Fanfics like these, when the story is easy to follow and how each relationship or lover takes time build and explain and protagonist self individual growth and strength of character development. You can tell the righter put a lot of time and effort in to this Fanfic, it's like reading a real story and not just some hav... done Fanfic or a hobby driven righter. This rewrite is way better than the original in terms of story explaining, character development, character relationships with lovers and friends . I've only ever found 1 righter who ever made or translated Fanfics this amazing it's (VOID-KING). I now found my second one great Fanfic man great Fanfic ,keep on righting I can't wait for future chapters just keep doing what you are doing. This is my number 1 favorite Rimuru Tempest/Tensura Fanfic. I just can't help get existed for each chapter release. SORRY FOR THE VERY LONG REVIEW I just wanted to be clear and honest.
The Best "Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken" Fanfic,I ❤️ It. I'd Recommend this Fic's Story for Everyone to Try Out First at least Once. *Trust me You'll also be Hooked like me.*😍
Finally, a fanfic that differentiates between "planet" and "world". Well, the rest is fine, just like the original Canon. keep update mr/ms writter
It is a good story and I hope you continue writing it in the future there are not many Tensura fics but you two guys very well make a OP Tensura fanfic Multiverse 💀 just kidding? Ramiris, Frey looking forward for Milim (she can have adult form right?)in Harem yay!
Muy buena la historia me encanta todo, más con el tema de que aquí rimuru es Rudra o bueno tiene el alma de Rudra y velgryd eventual mente estará loca por el, ya quiero que llegue esa parte, no puedo esperar a ver la cara de la dragona de fuego al ver a rimuru, aún que lo único que no me convence es el diseño de rimuru, quizás con una foto con mas detalles de la apariencia me convezca
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One of the best Tensura fics I've read. The author has a good knowledge of the lore and knows how to apply it, the story obviously follows the canon as it is the MC within the original MC but it deviates to improve and be more entertaining. I like the relationship between the characters, especially the few possible members of the harem. Also, so far there is no gender bender or shape shifting which for me is already a big win. I totally recommend this fic, hoping that the author doesn't abandon it and gives us more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This is one of those fanfics in which is the original series but the type that gives us what we want. I loved Tensura but hated the MC's personality! This is the tensura I wanted. The author does add his original ideas which I loved so it ain't just a wish fuilment novel which I thought it would be like the last version (Didn't read it just skimmed it to get an idea how this novel will be this rewrite felt less wish fulfilment) Especially love the update stability with good chapter length. ******** By the why I have only read the webnovel complete not the light novel. So was wondering if like the webnovel the otherworldlers figure out world travel and can return to earth. Later on Veldora and Ramiris go to another world post apocalyptic themed for fun. So was hoping you add that because I didn't like how that arc went although I know that way this novel will be a long project.
To start I must write that I haven't read many stories about Tensura but this one has become my favorite and I don't think that will change anytime soon. At first it seemed to me that events were happening too fast but as I progressed that was no longer the case. Although the story follows the same main line, I really like how the protagonist and Raphael do things, regarding the romance and the harem I appreciate that Rimiru does something about it and doesn't sit there indecisive like in the novel. Continue the great work author.
Man one of the best Tensura fan-fic out there I have read it’s pretty good till the latest chapter, hope u continue this and don’t drop mid-way
I read your first fanfic and decided to read this one, so far everything is very interesting, I'm waiting for the continuation[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I thought this version would be boring & full of plot holes BUT imagine my surprise when i started reading this and found it really written so beautifully..
I need more of this good book. I don't normally give reviews, but this? This is the best book I've read so far. Kudos to you author, you did well! 👏
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Es un fanfiction increíble. Se desvía de la historia lo justo para darte esa sensación de que haría una persona transportada a ese mundo y con conocimientos del canon. También me encanta como retrata a los personajes. Siento que estoy leyendo al autor original.
I always wondered why OG Rimuru do not have a funking Harem, when in FF such as this one he has it.? Heck he is also from Slime Race, who do not have gender at all in this story to.!!! but you still want to give him bunch of waifus, Btw will Suphia become his wife to.? i like her a lot since i saw her the first time watching anime, she is a tomboy and she is also nice and kind and Has lots of honor plus she is strong and Has great looks to.
It´s really good, you can clearly see the improvements from the previous version. Keep it up author!
I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world
This is the best fanfic about Tensura I've read so far, and I hope more chapters will be released in the future as I'm becoming more and more impatient to see how the story continues.
Nice fanfic,i like these characters,but sometimes there have boring chapters,but without them we can't continue story
i usually do not write reviews and this is not a review but it's just a message to the author well you were one of my favourite authors with the original tensura novel it even got me into trying to write my own (which is bad btw will return to it at some point) and after trying to write it to be more like your novel life happened and it got me to take a break from reading all together then i got into a game called persona and I played all of it but i wanted more so naturally I looked for fanfiction and your instatntlygot my attention and you again became one of my favourite authors then just now i realized that both ofy favourite authors are the same soooo i guess you became my favourite author twice without knowing it but thank you for reading this thing and you don't know how much you inspire me and iIhope you have a fun life ahead
Well first it’s a bit too rushed for me reads more like a summary than a story. Second 4 chapters in and he is thinking with his D already in your first story i could tolarate since I was interested in the powerprogression but here it ticks me off. Also he doesn’t have human hormones so things that manly happen bc of hormones and not bc of thought (like morals should behave differently) Also the fact that he wants a harem is different than actively going for it or it just happening wanting one in your head is one thing going for it makes me question his character and it happening is a result of majin having a different culture. Also I hope there will be no reincarnators und the harem since that would be very hard to believe. Well this is mostly a rant about the things that would destroy the novel for me sorry if it’s all over the place.
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Veo que es nueva la novela así que daré mi apoyo temporal. Si veo que es una novela mala no dudaré en cambiar mi reseña. Mis criterios es que el mc no se un imbécil haciendo la vista gorda a las mujeres que claramente están poniendo los ojos de *cogeme* xD ok no prefiero que el mc sea más bien un tipo con la mente aguda y bárbaro en situaciones románticas osea que sea un macho alfa al principio y al final.
All right, proper review now that I am up to chap 61. The first ten chaps are somewhat rushed, with the first four being the worst in terms of pacing. After which, the pacing stabilizes. Quality? Pretty good, I would say. I admit that I use Gpt to help me edit from time to time, and in the first few chaps it was really noticable. But after the first ten-ish chaps is when I get an actually good prompt for it so that if I end up using it for editing it doesn't make the story robotic. I don't always use it, but when I do, it's not too in your face. (I hope) For cases when Gpt is used, it is purely to edit the already written text. I don't use it to write out paragraphs. What's the point in writing then? It's still predominantly my own writing, and I avoid using it whenever possible. However, it does help to fix up paragraphs and organize the structure slightly Story Development? Pretty good, while it follows the rails of the original story, I beleive I do enough changes to make the story my own. And post Walpurgis, it will mostly, if not completely abandon the rails of the original. Using the world to further the story. Character design? Pretty happy with how it turned out too. Shuna was a tad rushed, but then I work on her and expand on her character. Same for most of the relevant characters. I feel like I did a relatively good job on developing them. World background? I mean, it's tensura. But yes, I am being pretty careful not to break the world and follow the rules already laid out world while writing. Mistakes happen here and there, but for the most part I try to keep stuff as good as it can be. Now, onto the prophet stuff. A lot of people didn't like it. That's fine. Not for you. While not a major plot point post Orc disaster, it still shows up from time to time. And it is somewhat relevant to events that will happen in the future.
I read Fanfics all day every day, after all when you have stage 4 kidney failure for over 5 years and counting, you get ALOT of reading time to your self , so I've read alot Fanfics about rimuru and the tensura world. It's my number 1 Fanfics search, but i am not saying I'm sum sorta expert. I've just read a lot Fanfics about Rimuru Tempest. I love Fanfics like these, when the story is easy to follow and how each relationship or lover takes time build and explain and protagonist self individual growth and strength of character development. You can tell the righter put a lot of time and effort in to this Fanfic, it's like reading a real story and not just some hav... done Fanfic or a hobby driven righter. This rewrite is way better than the original in terms of story explaining, character development, character relationships with lovers and friends . I've only ever found 1 righter who ever made or translated Fanfics this amazing it's (VOID-KING). I now found my second one great Fanfic man great Fanfic ,keep on righting I can't wait for future chapters just keep doing what you are doing. This is my number 1 favorite Rimuru Tempest/Tensura Fanfic. I just can't help get existed for each chapter release. SORRY FOR THE VERY LONG REVIEW I just wanted to be clear and honest.
The Best "Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken" Fanfic,I ❤️ It. I'd Recommend this Fic's Story for Everyone to Try Out First at least Once. *Trust me You'll also be Hooked like me.*😍
Finally, a fanfic that differentiates between "planet" and "world". Well, the rest is fine, just like the original Canon. keep update mr/ms writter
It is a good story and I hope you continue writing it in the future there are not many Tensura fics but you two guys very well make a OP Tensura fanfic Multiverse 💀 just kidding? Ramiris, Frey looking forward for Milim (she can have adult form right?)in Harem yay!
Muy buena la historia me encanta todo, más con el tema de que aquí rimuru es Rudra o bueno tiene el alma de Rudra y velgryd eventual mente estará loca por el, ya quiero que llegue esa parte, no puedo esperar a ver la cara de la dragona de fuego al ver a rimuru, aún que lo único que no me convence es el diseño de rimuru, quizás con una foto con mas detalles de la apariencia me convezca
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ One of the best Tensura fics I've read. The author has a good knowledge of the lore and knows how to apply it, the story obviously follows the canon as it is the MC within the original MC but it deviates to improve and be more entertaining. I like the relationship between the characters, especially the few possible members of the harem. Also, so far there is no gender bender or shape shifting which for me is already a big win. I totally recommend this fic, hoping that the author doesn't abandon it and gives us more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This is one of those fanfics in which is the original series but the type that gives us what we want. I loved Tensura but hated the MC's personality! This is the tensura I wanted. The author does add his original ideas which I loved so it ain't just a wish fuilment novel which I thought it would be like the last version (Didn't read it just skimmed it to get an idea how this novel will be this rewrite felt less wish fulfilment) Especially love the update stability with good chapter length. ******** By the why I have only read the webnovel complete not the light novel. So was wondering if like the webnovel the otherworldlers figure out world travel and can return to earth. Later on Veldora and Ramiris go to another world post apocalyptic themed for fun. So was hoping you add that because I didn't like how that arc went although I know that way this novel will be a long project.
To start I must write that I haven't read many stories about Tensura but this one has become my favorite and I don't think that will change anytime soon. At first it seemed to me that events were happening too fast but as I progressed that was no longer the case. Although the story follows the same main line, I really like how the protagonist and Raphael do things, regarding the romance and the harem I appreciate that Rimiru does something about it and doesn't sit there indecisive like in the novel. Continue the great work author.
Man one of the best Tensura fan-fic out there I have read it’s pretty good till the latest chapter, hope u continue this and don’t drop mid-way
I read your first fanfic and decided to read this one, so far everything is very interesting, I'm waiting for the continuation[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
C nul comme compétences eros c juste pervers [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
[img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze]
I thought this version would be boring & full of plot holes BUT imagine my surprise when i started reading this and found it really written so beautifully..
I need more of this good book. I don't normally give reviews, but this? This is the best book I've read so far. Kudos to you author, you did well! 👏
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Es un fanfiction increíble. Se desvía de la historia lo justo para darte esa sensación de que haría una persona transportada a ese mundo y con conocimientos del canon. También me encanta como retrata a los personajes. Siento que estoy leyendo al autor original.
I always wondered why OG Rimuru do not have a funking Harem, when in FF such as this one he has it.? Heck he is also from Slime Race, who do not have gender at all in this story to.!!! but you still want to give him bunch of waifus, Btw will Suphia become his wife to.? i like her a lot since i saw her the first time watching anime, she is a tomboy and she is also nice and kind and Has lots of honor plus she is strong and Has great looks to.
It´s really good, you can clearly see the improvements from the previous version. Keep it up author!
I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world
This is the best fanfic about Tensura I've read so far, and I hope more chapters will be released in the future as I'm becoming more and more impatient to see how the story continues.
Nice fanfic,i like these characters,but sometimes there have boring chapters,but without them we can't continue story
i usually do not write reviews and this is not a review but it's just a message to the author well you were one of my favourite authors with the original tensura novel it even got me into trying to write my own (which is bad btw will return to it at some point) and after trying to write it to be more like your novel life happened and it got me to take a break from reading all together then i got into a game called persona and I played all of it but i wanted more so naturally I looked for fanfiction and your instatntlygot my attention and you again became one of my favourite authors then just now i realized that both ofy favourite authors are the same soooo i guess you became my favourite author twice without knowing it but thank you for reading this thing and you don't know how much you inspire me and iIhope you have a fun life ahead
Well first it’s a bit too rushed for me reads more like a summary than a story. Second 4 chapters in and he is thinking with his D already in your first story i could tolarate since I was interested in the powerprogression but here it ticks me off. Also he doesn’t have human hormones so things that manly happen bc of hormones and not bc of thought (like morals should behave differently) Also the fact that he wants a harem is different than actively going for it or it just happening wanting one in your head is one thing going for it makes me question his character and it happening is a result of majin having a different culture. Also I hope there will be no reincarnators und the harem since that would be very hard to believe. Well this is mostly a rant about the things that would destroy the novel for me sorry if it’s all over the place.
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Veo que es nueva la novela así que daré mi apoyo temporal. Si veo que es una novela mala no dudaré en cambiar mi reseña. Mis criterios es que el mc no se un imbécil haciendo la vista gorda a las mujeres que claramente están poniendo los ojos de *cogeme* xD ok no prefiero que el mc sea más bien un tipo con la mente aguda y bárbaro en situaciones románticas osea que sea un macho alfa al principio y al final.
All right, proper review now that I am up to chap 61. The first ten chaps are somewhat rushed, with the first four being the worst in terms of pacing. After which, the pacing stabilizes. Quality? Pretty good, I would say. I admit that I use Gpt to help me edit from time to time, and in the first few chaps it was really noticable. But after the first ten-ish chaps is when I get an actually good prompt for it so that if I end up using it for editing it doesn't make the story robotic. I don't always use it, but when I do, it's not too in your face. (I hope) For cases when Gpt is used, it is purely to edit the already written text. I don't use it to write out paragraphs. What's the point in writing then? It's still predominantly my own writing, and I avoid using it whenever possible. However, it does help to fix up paragraphs and organize the structure slightly Story Development? Pretty good, while it follows the rails of the original story, I beleive I do enough changes to make the story my own. And post Walpurgis, it will mostly, if not completely abandon the rails of the original. Using the world to further the story. Character design? Pretty happy with how it turned out too. Shuna was a tad rushed, but then I work on her and expand on her character. Same for most of the relevant characters. I feel like I did a relatively good job on developing them. World background? I mean, it's tensura. But yes, I am being pretty careful not to break the world and follow the rules already laid out world while writing. Mistakes happen here and there, but for the most part I try to keep stuff as good as it can be. Now, onto the prophet stuff. A lot of people didn't like it. That's fine. Not for you. While not a major plot point post Orc disaster, it still shows up from time to time. And it is somewhat relevant to events that will happen in the future.