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Buena historia..............................................................................................................................
Just want to know one thing is it a harem? and are girls going to be included like Dawn, May, Latias(In her Human form) etc?...........................
This is my second Pokemon fanfic which I have read and have quite a bit enjoyed. First one dropped in the start so yah like this fanfic.For it being child friendly there is no need to put much thought about something's . I recommend giving this fanfic a try.
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I discovered that this fanfic is basically an improved version of the pokemon fanfic starting in johto that was released on reader hub today, basically a copy with more details on the fights and relationships, although the mc here is more carefree about things, in that fanfic the mc he doesn't capture so many legends, because he believes they have some duty, like protecting an area or doing some mission, the mc here doesn't care about that, he just wants to catch them all hahaha, oh yes, although this is an improved copy, it's even worse in one part, when the mc lets that child accompany him on the journey, too boring, in the other fanfic there is no such thing, but apart of this, this fanfic here is much better, more detailed
Best Pokemon Fanfic I have ever read. Try it out, you will love it.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Main character - Ash (more cool and smarter) Cheat - Bond System (he can find best partners for him and evolve them to a further level once they have maxed their Bond!) Plot - Very Good (No complaints) Revealing anymore will ruin the hype for you so just read it by yourself! Amazing fic, once again!
So far this is a good pokemon harem fanfic novel. The writing is also good. Although the scenes in a chapter can be quite fast, it's not too much of a problem. This novel provides a harem with 18+, but does not ruin the atmosphere of the nostalgic childhood story. Although I still find it weird why Misty who likes Ash keeps acting up when Brock tries to hit on women, but most of the pokemon harem fanfic novels are like that too, following in the anime. I think, after Misty has already established her heart for Ash, she doesn't need to have such a dramatic reaction when Brock hits on someone. The best part is that the MC doesn't hesitate to catch legendary pokemon.
I think this is one of the best fanf with strong and serious main hero. And post new characters is very fast, that's very good.[img=update][img=update]
The update schedule is very good. The writing style is also very good. The development is also very good. One of the best Pokemon Fanfics in recent times.
Its original pokemon all over again, this time with a slight bit smarter Ash and a weird Bonding system. Despite being a transmigrator, the guy still behaves like the real Ash, which makes me question why even they put a transmigrator there. The only thing that matters here is pokemon training and battles, and there's really nothing else. Even the plot pattern is in same as in original over 90%. Despite being harem, romance is barely even present. The pacing is very fast, jumping from city to city, sort of how original anime went, so I won't place too much fault there. Team Rocket, despite doing their usual things, is not punished by MC, who just gives them to Officer Jenny, from where ofcourse they escape as always. I mean, how hard is it to give them a traumatic lesson? Its really frustating to read this child-friendly story for me, but kuddos to author and translator for the story!
Is this a translated novel? because in the synopsis you say "This novel is not mine". ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like that although MC reincarnate as Ash he not just copy original Ash (his adventure and Pokemon is different).. I like his bond evolution (it so cool), but doesn't it too much that all his pokemon can do bond evolution?? But it's ok.. Just my opinion 😂 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the good work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
It is a great story, of a boy transmigrated as Ash. I like how he can use the Greninja bonding with all of his Pokemon. Everyday new Chapters. Though I hope the author will continue to write for other regions as well. it would be interesting to read..
it's a good book but can someone puzzled give me the raw name or the untranslated version name of this fanfiction
Where can I read the original story? If you can tell me I would be grateful. Your translation is very good, please continue. . . . . .. .
This is without a doubt one of the best Pokemon related things I have read in a long while. Please continue to upload this story.
5 Stars for the translation, and good job for making some changes for making it better. Well, I think the original author's writing style isn't really good. He's skipping a lot of things and there aren't that much interaction between the characters if it hasn't something to do with the main plot.
Muy buena historia, me entusiasmo mucho, las decisiones del protagonista me gustaron, solo tuviste problemas en algunos momentos en los capítulos de las películas, pero la historia continuo siendo agradable.
One of favorite pokemon fanfic. Highly recommend it for anyone looking for a quality pokemon fanfic. Author please don't drop this fanfic hehehe
A good fanfic with a promising future, I won't say more, to avoid spoilers, read it you won't regret it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Try to give all girls in the team a chance not only Serena it feels bad (Misty,May,Dawn,Lille and Chole) had to give up because a few interactions Ash had in the past
The story is great, just sometimes the updating stability is missing but author always comeback and I think he is right to have some breaks so he didn,t come annoyed by writing this great pokemon fanfics What makes the story great is how the author makes use of the bond evolution and it works well I like romance and harem story but somehow the romance is a little too slow but don't come from nowhere and the authors is not like making his mc launch pokeball to every girl he sees, it's well build Hope you continue the nice work author and don't give up before giving us a nice finish
Buena historia..............................................................................................................................
Just want to know one thing is it a harem? and are girls going to be included like Dawn, May, Latias(In her Human form) etc?...........................
This is my second Pokemon fanfic which I have read and have quite a bit enjoyed. First one dropped in the start so yah like this fanfic.For it being child friendly there is no need to put much thought about something's . I recommend giving this fanfic a try.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
I discovered that this fanfic is basically an improved version of the pokemon fanfic starting in johto that was released on reader hub today, basically a copy with more details on the fights and relationships, although the mc here is more carefree about things, in that fanfic the mc he doesn't capture so many legends, because he believes they have some duty, like protecting an area or doing some mission, the mc here doesn't care about that, he just wants to catch them all hahaha, oh yes, although this is an improved copy, it's even worse in one part, when the mc lets that child accompany him on the journey, too boring, in the other fanfic there is no such thing, but apart of this, this fanfic here is much better, more detailed
Best Pokemon Fanfic I have ever read. Try it out, you will love it.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Main character - Ash (more cool and smarter) Cheat - Bond System (he can find best partners for him and evolve them to a further level once they have maxed their Bond!) Plot - Very Good (No complaints) Revealing anymore will ruin the hype for you so just read it by yourself! Amazing fic, once again!
So far this is a good pokemon harem fanfic novel. The writing is also good. Although the scenes in a chapter can be quite fast, it's not too much of a problem. This novel provides a harem with 18+, but does not ruin the atmosphere of the nostalgic childhood story. Although I still find it weird why Misty who likes Ash keeps acting up when Brock tries to hit on women, but most of the pokemon harem fanfic novels are like that too, following in the anime. I think, after Misty has already established her heart for Ash, she doesn't need to have such a dramatic reaction when Brock hits on someone. The best part is that the MC doesn't hesitate to catch legendary pokemon.
I think this is one of the best fanf with strong and serious main hero. And post new characters is very fast, that's very good.[img=update][img=update]
The update schedule is very good. The writing style is also very good. The development is also very good. One of the best Pokemon Fanfics in recent times.
Its original pokemon all over again, this time with a slight bit smarter Ash and a weird Bonding system. Despite being a transmigrator, the guy still behaves like the real Ash, which makes me question why even they put a transmigrator there. The only thing that matters here is pokemon training and battles, and there's really nothing else. Even the plot pattern is in same as in original over 90%. Despite being harem, romance is barely even present. The pacing is very fast, jumping from city to city, sort of how original anime went, so I won't place too much fault there. Team Rocket, despite doing their usual things, is not punished by MC, who just gives them to Officer Jenny, from where ofcourse they escape as always. I mean, how hard is it to give them a traumatic lesson? Its really frustating to read this child-friendly story for me, but kuddos to author and translator for the story!
Is this a translated novel? because in the synopsis you say "This novel is not mine". ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like that although MC reincarnate as Ash he not just copy original Ash (his adventure and Pokemon is different).. I like his bond evolution (it so cool), but doesn't it too much that all his pokemon can do bond evolution?? But it's ok.. Just my opinion 😂 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the good work 😁👍👍😍😍😍
It is a great story, of a boy transmigrated as Ash. I like how he can use the Greninja bonding with all of his Pokemon. Everyday new Chapters. Though I hope the author will continue to write for other regions as well. it would be interesting to read..
it's a good book but can someone puzzled give me the raw name or the untranslated version name of this fanfiction
Where can I read the original story? If you can tell me I would be grateful. Your translation is very good, please continue. . . . . .. .
This is without a doubt one of the best Pokemon related things I have read in a long while. Please continue to upload this story.
5 Stars for the translation, and good job for making some changes for making it better. Well, I think the original author's writing style isn't really good. He's skipping a lot of things and there aren't that much interaction between the characters if it hasn't something to do with the main plot.
Muy buena historia, me entusiasmo mucho, las decisiones del protagonista me gustaron, solo tuviste problemas en algunos momentos en los capítulos de las películas, pero la historia continuo siendo agradable.
One of favorite pokemon fanfic. Highly recommend it for anyone looking for a quality pokemon fanfic. Author please don't drop this fanfic hehehe
A good fanfic with a promising future, I won't say more, to avoid spoilers, read it you won't regret it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Try to give all girls in the team a chance not only Serena it feels bad (Misty,May,Dawn,Lille and Chole) had to give up because a few interactions Ash had in the past
The story is great, just sometimes the updating stability is missing but author always comeback and I think he is right to have some breaks so he didn,t come annoyed by writing this great pokemon fanfics What makes the story great is how the author makes use of the bond evolution and it works well I like romance and harem story but somehow the romance is a little too slow but don't come from nowhere and the authors is not like making his mc launch pokeball to every girl he sees, it's well build Hope you continue the nice work author and don't give up before giving us a nice finish