แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
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Writing is great, but the chapters is too short and too little to be commented on. Need more chapter to expand the story and character. The idea is quite good though, keep it up!!
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Writing is great, but the chapters is too short and too little to be commented on. Need more chapter to expand the story and character. The idea is quite good though, keep it up!!