9รีวิว
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penulis kenapa novelmu tidak berlanjut lagi? apakah cumaa sampai disini saja novelmu? sungguh sayang sekali, karna novelmu adalah novel emas yang saya temukan disini penulis, saya harap novel ini akan dilanjutkan lagi
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For those idiots who said it was written by ChatGPT... that abomination was used to check for spelling errors. it's the first Kingdom FF that I have ever read and it's a Fic with the capacity to achieve a masterpiece.
It can't be, what a shame, this story was made by chatgpt, the only job the author had to deceive everyone was to copy and paste correctly, but he manages to get that wrong and chatgpt appears several times times in history shame.
simply great, this fic is an excellent work, I want to see what changes the author will make with the Kingdom story. I just hope the author has a patreon with advanced chapters.
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I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted
penulis kenapa novelmu tidak berlanjut lagi? apakah cumaa sampai disini saja novelmu? sungguh sayang sekali, karna novelmu adalah novel emas yang saya temukan disini penulis, saya harap novel ini akan dilanjutkan lagi
great story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
For those idiots who said it was written by ChatGPT... that abomination was used to check for spelling errors. it's the first Kingdom FF that I have ever read and it's a Fic with the capacity to achieve a masterpiece.
It can't be, what a shame, this story was made by chatgpt, the only job the author had to deceive everyone was to copy and paste correctly, but he manages to get that wrong and chatgpt appears several times times in history shame.
simply great, this fic is an excellent work, I want to see what changes the author will make with the Kingdom story. I just hope the author has a patreon with advanced chapters.
Awesome Kingdom fanfic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted