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Very Nice. This is probably the best RWBY smut fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The characters feel like real people with their own thoughts feelings and goals which is quite rare to see in most smut fanfics(Or fanfics in general). The story is also phenomenal. the progression of the story is good it's not too fast but also not too slow. if you really don't like smut then don't be afraid there are plenty of action(Not that kind) and character interactions when the story isn't just focusing on the smut. so all in all, this story is definitely worth your time.
This was an amazingly written fan fiction story. The characters felt real for their situations and hang ups. and the smut bit were so well detailed they were never boring or a drag. I will definitely be looking for more writing in the future from the author.
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I read this somewhere - "Pyrrha liked Jaune because he saw her for who she was. Weiss hated Jaune because she thought he saw only her name. Pyrrha saw the man Jaune could be. Weiss saw him for just what he was at the time. Now, with time and maturity from both Jaune and Weiss, Weiss has become the woman Jaune saw her as in Beacon. And Jaune has grown into the kind of man Pyrrha saw him becoming, the kind of man Weiss would love." I really love to read and enjoy good RWBY fanfic. And this fanfic here is not just about smut, it's actually very good overall. It's also very nice to see Jaune taking the feelings of the other girls into account, unlike some other stories.
Very Nice. This is probably the best RWBY smut fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The characters feel like real people with their own thoughts feelings and goals which is quite rare to see in most smut fanfics(Or fanfics in general). The story is also phenomenal. the progression of the story is good it's not too fast but also not too slow. if you really don't like smut then don't be afraid there are plenty of action(Not that kind) and character interactions when the story isn't just focusing on the smut. so all in all, this story is definitely worth your time.
This was an amazingly written fan fiction story. The characters felt real for their situations and hang ups. and the smut bit were so well detailed they were never boring or a drag. I will definitely be looking for more writing in the future from the author.
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I read this somewhere - "Pyrrha liked Jaune because he saw her for who she was. Weiss hated Jaune because she thought he saw only her name. Pyrrha saw the man Jaune could be. Weiss saw him for just what he was at the time. Now, with time and maturity from both Jaune and Weiss, Weiss has become the woman Jaune saw her as in Beacon. And Jaune has grown into the kind of man Pyrrha saw him becoming, the kind of man Weiss would love." I really love to read and enjoy good RWBY fanfic. And this fanfic here is not just about smut, it's actually very good overall. It's also very nice to see Jaune taking the feelings of the other girls into account, unlike some other stories.