5รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
your new title screen let's go man this story has been straight fire I mess with it
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I put this review because I see this as a potential gem, but the chapters are shorter than the overall length of a novel I expect. A problem with this story so far is the events. The events describe pretty much every second with short chapters. There is a short interlude but it's not worth the money if I'm spending it for a short chapters for an obstacle course or a food fight. But hey, that's my opinion. Overall, the novel is in its infancy stage so I'll hold back on any criticisms. Keep doing what you're doing I guess.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Chapter 4 and already a banger, i just hope we get to see the main character meet the you know who, and they fall in love and, have a family and have many little baby grunt children and they live happily ever after.
Hey, I'm the Author of this novel As usual, I shamelessly giving my own novel a 5-Star review. With that being said though... I do hope you enjoy this novel of mine and please support me all the way. Thank you. :)
your new title screen let's go man this story has been straight fire I mess with it
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I put this review because I see this as a potential gem, but the chapters are shorter than the overall length of a novel I expect. A problem with this story so far is the events. The events describe pretty much every second with short chapters. There is a short interlude but it's not worth the money if I'm spending it for a short chapters for an obstacle course or a food fight. But hey, that's my opinion. Overall, the novel is in its infancy stage so I'll hold back on any criticisms. Keep doing what you're doing I guess.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Chapter 4 and already a banger, i just hope we get to see the main character meet the you know who, and they fall in love and, have a family and have many little baby grunt children and they live happily ever after.
Hey, I'm the Author of this novel As usual, I shamelessly giving my own novel a 5-Star review. With that being said though... I do hope you enjoy this novel of mine and please support me all the way. Thank you. :)