Naruto: Hidden Mist's Great Blacksmith

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igniziouz

Good story but your patreon is extremely costly. Please have a look at other creators, especially creators that have high ranked work in fanfiction category and then decide the pricing of your work on patreon.

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Humbuub

great translation. -1 star for not crediting the OG.

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Aurelion_Sol_5284

Fanfic muito boa, pena que o patreon é muito caro o genin na minha moeda fica 25r$ e pra mim é caro pra karai, mas a historia é bem legal, é raro achar fanfic sobre ferreiro

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tedmosby2016

Bloated mess. It is preachy filled with explanations on explanations and back stories of back stories. The amount of filler and repetitive nonsense is astounding. Whatever story being told gets drowned in the excessive filler for word count.

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Rak

very good translation quality. making swords to get famous and get famous to run gacha, run gacha to get stronger and get stronger to get more materials, more materials makes more swords, repeat. Good loop. Give it a try.

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hero4hire

EXCELLENT! Very unique story with an amazing story style that'll blow your mind. I really like the reaction of people when they see the effect of soma's swords. People shouldn't be dissing and low rating this novel for patron problem, this is webnovel, judge the book for its content here.

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anubis1650

I like the story a lot it's not the greatest but it is a fun read the only issue I have with it is very system dependent and in my opinion that's taking quite a bit away from the story it'd be a little better if he did more blacksmithing and work on his own without complete Reliance on the system especially even to get bonuses or points from the system it should not be some odd Loop where it has to be pretty much maintained from the system by the system him earning anything should at least be somewhat separate

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Estelem_Shelym

Interessante, mal posso esperar para começar a ler 😃____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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AbsoluteZero01

Anyone know the raw

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cavaliere_royale

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Hell1Born

Bro at least this author mentions it in the description, do you know how many shameless people did not even mention anything, look at web novels now, a lot of Chinese fics, and some even behave like writing their own novels.

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Theon_Bennit

I'm caught up (chapter 172 at the time of writing this), and overall, I would highly recommend it. It is a translation, but it's well done compared to others. The MC focusses on smithing with a secondary focus on personal strength. Three things (imo) make this novel a good one. The first and best reason is that the MC doesn't care about changing the plot and has already done so quite a bit. It's refreshing to see honestly. The second reason is that it doesn't take place in Konoha and actually tries to dive deep into the hidden mist and greater world overall. The third reason is that the MC feels relatively human in his actions and reactions, not like a super psychopath that randomly becomes a monster. I can actually understand him. Overall, would definitely recommend giving it a shot if it seems interesting.

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mambmcmd

One of my best Naruto's novels It's perfect and very different , I finished it in 2 days ...............................................................

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ManGanu

Nice plot story fan fiction Naruto Keep good job Dhdjdjdkdjdhsjsjssjjssjshsjsjdududhdjdjdjdjdjdjdhdjdjdhdjdjdhsjdhdjdhdjdhdududjdhdjdjdjdjdjddjjddkjdididjdjdjdjdjdjddjjddjjdjdjd

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Xavierzelaya2

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anubis1650

This is my second review on this fanfic so far I actually like the story it's a little generic yes but the concept and the actual story is not bad at all the only glaring major fault I have with it is the author for some reason thinks this is some kind of cultivator world yes I know it's a translated Chinese fanfic but he's completely missed that this is not cultivator Knights or samurais duels. Just in case before anyone says something like they can't interfere they're too powerful there's multiple levels of Fighters around yes a genin can't interfere with a cage level fight because they will get crushed like bugs without being able to do anything but on a jonin level fight even a chunin can make a difference by putting pressure on. They're Ninja so there's should be no standing around watching a duel and commenting on that when you can be sneak attacking the other people There's no such thing as honor in ninjas except serving their Village

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Gonzalo_Sierra_3167

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TheReadingGuy

4.0 Timelines and shi are so confusing wth, its either the translator just don't bother to edit the translation or just dont. sigh im done

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Ryuga899

This is one amazing naruto fanfic and that is new in story setting that is different from others naruto fanfics and hope you can continue making it and here a idea you can use in future when you more weapons how about upgrading the seven swords of hidden mist and or combine them with materials for forging new improved and more powerful version of them.