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The Great Idea For Escape (Fnaf fanfic, Rewritten, On hiatus)

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บท 1: Chapter 1: The Thief

IF YOU HAVE READ THE ORIGINAL STORY PLEASE DO NOT SPOIL IN THE COMMENTS

Circus Baby kept still, as children whined as their parents dragged them out of the room, at the slam of a door she blinked and studied the area around her. Her expression quickly dropped; drinks spilled; food smeared and chairs where they definitely shouldn't be. Baby let out a heavy sigh. "I hope the cleaners get here soon..." She groans, then at the corner of her eye she sees her microphone on the floor of the stage. As she bent down, she heard shuffling behind her. Quickly she got up and looked behind her, only to be faced with nothing.
With more caution, she goes back to pick up her microphone when she hears shuffling again. Faster this time, she turns around to see a long fox tail, with an orange tip, vanish behind the red stage curtains. She goes over to the spot, forgetting about her microphone, and swings open the curtain to reveal an all too familiar face.
"Lolbit!" she yelled.
"Baby!" the vixen growled back.
Baby glared at her and then spotted her holding some crayons. "Stealing again, huh?" she questioned with a stern look.
"It's just some crayons, don't tell me you're getting upset over some CRAYONS!" Lolbit said, throwing them at Baby's face as she took it as an opportunity to escape but Baby swiftly grabbed her tail.
"Not so fast. I'll be damned to let go of an opportunity like this," she said, holding the vixen's tail firmly. Lolbit gritted her teeth and let out a snarl. "You're always so SERIOUS," Lolbit delivered a kick to the redhead's stomach. "Maybe learn to pull that stick out of your ass!"
Baby's grip loosened at the sudden impact. She yanked the fox back towards her. "Maybe learn not to cuss so much!" Baby said as the thrill of the situation hit her. "Ass is not a swear!" Lolbit commented as she threw herself onto the clown.
Both fell to the floor, Baby cushioning Lolbit's fall. Lolbit sighed as Baby released her tail but it was short-lived as Baby grabbed her bottom jaw trying to pull it off. She grabbed Baby's arm, studying her in panic when her eyes widened and then her eyebrows furrowed. "Not today, you damn clown!"
Suddenly Baby's surroundings changed, she was sitting on a table in one of the backstage rooms a fox staring at her in worry. "Foxy?" she said.
"Oh, thank goodness you're awake!" Foxy said. "What happened? Why am I here?" Baby asked "Where's Lolbit!?" She looks around for any glimpse of the vixen.
"Not here... Why? I haven't seen her since-"
"Because I saw her... We were fighting." Baby replied. "Oh that explains why I found you in your room turned off on the floor..." Foxy said, sitting next to Baby on the table, fiddling with his thumbs. "Do you think she's back?" he asks, frowning as he looks at his hands.
Baby looks at him, moving her hand to pat his head. "If she is, I'll deal with her. You guys have nothing to worry about. As your leader it's my job to do so, so you have nothing to worry about at all." She reassures him, slowly stroking his head.
Foxy sighs in relief. "Thank you... I don't know what we would do if it wasn't for you."
"Of course... Now we should go rehearse for tomorrow's performance." She said, getting off the table with Foxy, as Baby opened the door to leave she looked behind her to look at Foxy. "Oh and Foxy, don't tell anyone. I have this under control, alright?" He nods.
***
Foxy silently sat on the stage in the Funtime auditorium, the only source of light being his eyes. 'I hope Baby is right,' he thought to himself. 'I don't know what I'd do with myself if Lolbit does something again... What if she does something to Baby!? How could I live with myself-' he stops when he hears a CLANK in the room. Foxy got up quickly.
He looked around, only to see a chair had fallen. "Oh phew," the fox made his way to the chair, picking it back up and placing it up on the table. "That scared me, silly chair." As he went back to the stage another CLANK came from behind him followed with a soft "Shit."
'Oh no' he thought to himself 'There's only one animatronic who swears in this place...' Foxy opened his mouth to scream when he was suddenly hit from behind, falling to the ground. "Ug..." He looked up to see two glowing specs and the silhouette of a fox holding a chair.
"Sorry not sorry." said the voice of Lolbit. "But I really need some chairs. Hope you understand."
He jumped up, slamming the vixen onto the ground, the chair falling out of her hands. "No!" he yelled, holding her down. "Ug... I didn't know you had such spunk, shit..." She groaned.
"I'm not going to let you hurt anyone!" he told her, breathing heavily. "What?" she asked. "You heard me! I won't let you-" he collapsed onto her.
"Honestly, what happened to 'I'm slick, he won't even notice I'm there' huh?" asked the deep voice of a bear standing behind Foxy, "Yendo! Thanks!" She pushed Foxy off of her and got up with the help of Yendo. "Ug, please don't make this a recurring thing. I don't want anything happening to you, especially not by Wannabe Psycho Ronald McDonald," He said with a heavy sigh "You wouldn't deserve that."
Her eyes softened. "Don't worry, I'll make sure to be slicker...." He glared at her "and be more careful next time."
"Thanks, I appreciate it."
***
"How did this happen!? Why didn't you yell!?" Demanded Baby. "Hey don't yell at Foxy! He can't help it if he can't see her." Said a bear, sitting next to Foxy on their shared stage, holding his blue bunny puppet. "I did see her, Freddy..." Foxy explained. "Anyway, I wanted to but she hit me across the head with a chair before I could."
Baby sighed. "Is that why some of our chairs are missing?" Freddy asked. "No Freddy, that was Slenderman's doing." said BonBon sarcastically. "But why? I thought he was rich..." Freddy said, looking at the empty spots where the chairs were before. BonBon rolled his eyes. "Wait! Do you think Lolbit and Slenderman are working together?" the bear asked, looking at everyone concerned.
"We don't have time for this, sure Freddy, Slenderman and Lolbit are working together," Baby replied, pinching the bridge of her nose. "Oh no..." Freddy whispered. "How did she escape then Foxy? How could you let her get away?" She demanded.
"I tried to pin her down! But then I woke up when BonBon switched me on..." Foxy explained. "Did she switch you off?" Baby asked. "No," he replied. "I think it was either Bonnet or Yendo."
"Don't forget Slenderman!" said Freddy "Or Slenderman... I guess." the fox added.
"Ug, what a pain, now I have more problems to deal with," Baby groaned "Foxy go warn Ballora that Lolbit might be coming to her room. It seems that Lolbit is on a treasure hunt."
"Baby don't be silly, there's no such thing as Treasure." Freddy commented.
***
CRASH
"Who's there?" asked Ballora, listening for any more noises. "Sorry Ballora." apologised Lolbit to the ballerina. "Oh Lolbit! I didn't expect you." Ballora commented, facing towards Lolbit's voice with a smile. "I haven't seen you in a couple of weeks, since you know what. How are you doing sweetheart? Come here, let me hear you a little louder" she heard Lolbit's footsteps as she came closer.
"Oh, I've been great! You know me! Never a dull day when I'm around! I ran into Baby and Foxy earlier, it wasn't the most pleasant of interactions but I won't let that let me down." Lolbit said. Ballora's smile fell. "Oh dear, I hope you're okay."
"Oh yeah I'm fine! Nothing to worry about with me!" Lolbit said with energy. "Alright... So what brings you here?" Ballora asked. "I'm looking for some stuff, is it okay if I have some of your stuff?" Lolbit asked politely.
Ballora smiled. "Of course sweetheart, anything you want as long as it's not the minireena's."
Lolbit hugged her suddenly. "Thank you so much!" she said, quickly getting what she needs then disappearing.
Her door suddenly slammed open. "Ballora!" exclaimed Foxy's voice. "Oh hello dear, what's wrong?" she asked. "Lolbit! She's back! Baby told me to warn you about her! She might come here next." the fox explained.
'Thank the Heavens, she left in time.' Ballora thought to herself. "Oh dear. Thank you so much for telling me. I'll yell if she comes here, again thank you so much for telling me." she thanked them.
"Of course... OH I forgot to say that Yendo and Bonnet might be back as well, so watch out for them as well." he warned.
She nodded, hearing someone come running to her door. "And Slenderman!" yelled Freddy. "Ug Freddy! Don't grip me so tightly you're going to dent me!" Demanded BonBon.
She giggled. "Thank you Freddy, I'll make sure to watch out for him."
'Please be safe, you three, especially Lolbit.' she prayed to herself.
Aight short first chapter, but I had to get this out as soon as possible otherwise I would never get It out. Hope you guys enjoy this, especially the ones who read the original. I'm doing a whole rewritten thing here. It's the same story with some things removed and some things added. It was a lot of fun writing this ngl.
TYSM FOR READING POOKIES >w< HAVE A FANTASTIC DAY

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